Re: Riddled with Lies
I completely understand, and agree, with all that you have said. I will definitely try to make the next chapter longer, as will I give some insight into Akito's feelings.
Thank you for the feedback given, it helps to give me an idea as to how readers feel about it, as well as helping to improve the story itself.
I'm really glad you like it, I will try to improve it more in the next chapter ^_^
Click the image above to check out my YouTube Channel - it'd mean a lot.