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Originally Posted by MoonKit
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Now some fail crits.
@Cherubi
I really like it overall; it makes seel seem cute (I highly dislike how their tounge is always sticking out and that the seel's fangs stick out).
Like Mawie said, I think the head dissapears too quick; maybe a frame between it disapearing and the one currently before that?
Another suggestion, maybe a fishing pole or something neerby? That is, only if you want to take the time to add it.
Sorry if this didn't help. at all.
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Thank you! That actually did help! I'll look into adding some stuff, I just have a lot to do before that!
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The circle, as I can see myself, is wonky. Its meant to be a creeped out Ghastly, but I was too lazy/failed at doing the smoke, so I had an idea; Make it a glow and add smoke bawlz, indicating that its too scared to have the smoke. Semicomplete scratch there.
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I like the idea of it, but the eyes should be bigger, like all Gastly's are.