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Old 10-25-2011, 02:48 AM
FrozenPika Offline
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: A forest at the top of a mountain
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Default Re: Soul Chronicles (Introduction)

Originally Posted by Giratina View Post
Ahh, color me interested. This does sound like a promising (and realistic!) concept, and one rife with the possibility for conflict both between the 'chosen' and the normal Pokémon, and between the chosen themselves. My only complaint is the first paragraph; I didn't quite understand what it was trying to say until I read on to the rest of the piece. Rewording that would probably be a good idea. Otherwise, I have no complaints; I could tell from the get-go that you have a lot of skill with words, so this is definitely a promising story. <3
Oh, your comment made me think of something I might've missed as a plot element. Thank you for commenting. X3

And thanks, I'll look into that.
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