Thread: [Pokemon] Champion Game {Chapter 9}
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Old 11-21-2011, 11:57 PM
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I've already told you, but I think you're a good writer! There were no spelling mistakes that I could discern, but maybe a couple of comma errors and such. I know there was something. xD But other than that, you're fine!

I'm also interested about what Ren will do from here. Oh! And concerning the name 'Ren', it's actually a perfectly fine name. And you should be able to name your characters whatever you want. As long as it's not such a HUGE jump from names like James to Hideki or something. xD I don't really think stories matter all that much, name wise, but if you wish to go in depth for some of your names, it makes for a better story at times.

Anyway! I'll continue reading this. Melikes, good job. :D
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