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Old 05-08-2012, 08:44 AM
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Default Re: [Comic] PKMN: The Guardians [G] (NEW! Page up!)

I like your comic so far! The effects you used on page 3 are awesome. It kinda looks like the whole thing may have been resized a bit by photobucket or something though, since the text is pretty small.

Page 2 looks nice and crisp except for the font, which should maybe be one size smaller?

But other than that, your story is interesting so far and your comics are definitely improving. Hope you continue! =)
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