Hi there, welcome to the forums! ^^
Just so you know, the RP boards here try to deter from one liner posts and usually have a Sign Up and or Disscussion for them, as well as a laid out plot line, even for role plays just consisting of two people. ^^'
If you haven't already, please check out this
guide to role playing that we have here on PE2K. ^^ Also try looking around at the other board to get a feel for what the forum is like so you can post RP's without gettin' into too much trouble. Don't worry you're not in any trouble this time. XD
Again, normally I'd lock the thread immediately, but I'll give you guys a chance to edit your stuff. ^^ If you have any questions, feel free to PM me!