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Old 09-29-2012, 01:26 PM
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Default Re: Coping with Reality [PG-13+ for Bad Language]

Originally Posted by Pokemon Trainer Sarah View Post
Wow I have a whole new outlook on Cresselia! Really creative story! I like how the twists keep coming! At the end of the second chapter I figured Akito would be guilted into wanting to fight the dark power just because he should, but I like that Cresselia ended up having to force him by threatening his mother, it seems much more realistic. I really like how you incorporated Ralts' ability to sense emotions throughout the whole thing too. I've never read anything like this before, keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing what happens next! ^^
Thank you for your kind words :3 It's comments like this that make me glad that I went back and fixed up the chapters xD

Really glad you like it - I feel encouraged to get onto the next chapter now :D

Again, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and appreciate you taking the time to read through it ^_^


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