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Old 03-04-2006, 01:13 PM
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Default Re: Don't Cry, Misty

Yay, a Misty fic!

Wow, I wasn't expecting that. May must have done something pretty terrible for Misty to kill her.

Anyway, that was really well written, nice use of description and language, you truly are an awesome writer =)

Just one bit that I didn't understand,

... Do not go running after her.”
If May is already dead, how can Misty go running after her? Or have I misunderstood the context?

Keep up the fantastic work!
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