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Old 03-15-2006, 01:02 AM
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Default Re: Walking Through the Snow

I can't help by feel that there should be more added to this. While it does have emotion it is missing a certain something. When I first read it I though you were doing a pokemon verison of the little match girl or The Dog of Flanders.

It has a message but I feel as if it is missing backstory...
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