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Old 09-04-2006, 01:58 PM
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Default Re: Mystery of a World Long Gone - The Unowns Return

The chapters are like the size of a my pinky. They're shorter than a review I could give. Seriously! Make them longer!

Also, you should only post one chapter per post.

And wow... what a idiot, Brendan. McDonalds for a first date? ROFL

How about describing things like normal fics do and not having a mix of script fic and regular. So describe attacks and what everything looks like!


As for the plot, I have no clue what it is because nothign is described. Describe it and I'll probably figure out what it is.
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