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Old 02-03-2007, 04:23 AM
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Default Re: Weather

lol, dearest Kenny. I'm afraid "weather" isn't my most favorite subject. Though, the story didn't have much to do with it anyway.

I was really confused so it made this a little tad boring:P But this is what I got from it- man is fixing heater/AC/something, cuts himself?, goes inside, paints, thinks he's ugly,hears knock on door, opens to see three men, it's raining and the door is rusty.

Very exciting;P Is there some kind of satire or metaphor involved here or were you just writing to write? I'm not good with this stuff, so I'm sorry if this isn't the type of feedback that you meant.
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