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Old 02-18-2007, 09:56 PM
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Default Re: Inferno Island

It's better. You still need improvement in writing longer battles against the Pokemon you want to catch. This grade is based most only the storyline, and hoping that you improve on the next one.

Outcome- Houndour Captured!

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