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Old 03-20-2007, 04:37 PM
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Default Re: Mystery of a World Long Gone - The Unowns Return (mild language)

You read my story, so i thought it good manners to read yours, and I have to say...love it! I love the unowns, they intrigue me, but the chapters should still be longer imho ,maybe you could just join a few of them together to make less... but all in all, great idea! well done!
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