Originally Posted by MewCrystal
Is that any better? I edited it. And that's the last time I use Notepad to write my stories.
As for the spaces, did you mean spaces between Paragraphs? 'Cause that's what I did. My friend has this annoying habit of never putting spaces after her punctuation, and I thought you were talking about that. :\
It's fine, sorry, I just have REALLY horrible eyes, so it was hard for me to read. I'll edit the other post with my grade in a moment. :)