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Old 11-10-2004, 03:37 AM
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Default Tears of an Angel

Haiku for those who like them:



A Poem written by yours truely... I was bored in Math today and I felt like writting something deep.

Coming soon....

Eon

Another written by me :P... I just gotta make an image for it :P
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Old 11-30-2004, 05:58 AM
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Default Re: Tears of an Angel

It's pretty short, but man, the image that goes with it is pretty fantastic. I can only wonder how you do it...
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Old 11-30-2004, 06:55 AM
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Yeah... It kinda is short... but that is how a 5-7-5 Haiku goes... I need to writ a nice, long poem... not much has inspired me though... but I do have something in mind... expect something much longer and emotional soon.
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Old 11-30-2004, 11:20 AM
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Very good haiku poem, and very deep which tends to be a rare find among haiku. I find that most modern haiku mainly rants about things like
Wrote long report
Windows crashed once again
Forgot to save

I also love the image for this one, mainly the smoke effect because I don't have a clue as to how you do it. If you're willing to say it I definitely would love to find out how to do the curls of smoke as well as flame you have in some of your other art.
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Old 02-07-2005, 12:17 AM
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Very good I also like the picture thats cool but very good
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