Soilder War (RPG)

[Monkey Boy]

This Is Very Compacatied so read ALL OF THIS
In This Game.....
Storyline: you were sent to the RPG army cant go home theres UFOs and soilders you and your teamates must defeat

Sign up (Needed Evrey Post you make) (Including First post)
USERNAME:
HP (Start With 10)
Color Of Uniform
Based On (Atack Def. or Speed)
Type Of Weppon
Mostly Doing (Fighting Defending Or Healing)
Points to (Speed Atack or Def.)
Points: (Start with 10)
Level: (Start at Level 1)
Items:
Rank: (Start Out as new Soilder)
How Many Posts

My Sign Up
USERNAME: Monkey Boy
HP 10
Color Or Uniform: Green With Blue Stripes With Outlines in shiny gold
Based On: Atack
Type Of Weppon:
Mostly Doing: Fighting
Points to 8A 2D
Points: 000
Level: 1
Items: None
Rank: New Soilder
How Many Posts: 246

Rules:
You must defeat the army by Buying weppons here are the rules
1. You May Not make newer stats
2. No swearing
3. If your DEAD you may not revive youreself unless you have a revive if you dont wait for someone to revieve you
4. No FORCING pepole what to do but you can suggest
5. HAVE FUN in the Army

Points may be used EX
LVL 1 = 10 Points
Atack 6 = Adds Atack and lets you buy more weppons
Defense 2 = Adds Def. and makes you buy more Armor
Speed 1 = Adds Speed
Leftover 1
Atuo HP: (Plus 5 Evrey Level) = More Hp Raises MAX and Your HP (PS You may not use points to buy)

MONEY: You get Money Buy Making Posts 1 Post = 1 Money

ATACK SHOP
Handgun = 2A and 8 Money
Shotgun = 8A and 14 Money
Machine Gun = 12A and 26 Money
Dagger = 5A and 15 Money

ARMOR SHOP
Sheild = 4D and 6 Money
BIG SHEILD 8D and 10 Money

HP SHOP
MAX REVIVE - Restores a dead user to full HP
REVEIVE - Restroes a Dead User to Half of full HP
MINI REVIVE Restores a dead user to 1 HP
POWER REVIVE Restrores all Dead Users to 10 HP

RANKS:
Level 1 -5 NEW SOILDER
Level 6 - 10 SOILDER IN TRAINING
Level 10 - 14 SOILDER
Level 15 - 20 EXPERICED SOILDER
Level 21 - 26 GOOD SOILDER
Level 26 - 34 GREAT SOILDER
Level 35- 45 SUPER SOILDER
Level 46 - 50 ULTRA SOILDER
Level 51 - 60 IMPORTANT SOILDER
Level 61 - 80 GERNREAL SOILDER
Level 81 - 90 COMANDER SOILDER
Level 91 - 94 EXPERT SOILDER
Level 95 - 99 FAMOUS SOILDER
Level 100 MASTER SOILDER

LEVEL UPGRADE IS
10 More Points
10 More HP/HP Limit
Another Level 1 step away from your next rank

Speed = If higher than opponent go first
A Atack That hurts you/Opponet
D Reduces atack EX I did a atack that does 8A but he has 4D so thats 4A

SOILDERS
Monkey boy 10/10HP

When we Get 3 Soilders we will play oh and our first UFO we have to face is
THE BIG ZONE JR 30HP 2A 6D and speed is 4

HAVE FUN JOING THE MILATARY

[Kenny_C.002]

One thing to do first is to clean up what you've said. I don't think I understood anything in that post. Since you've said it's complicating, it's important that you use a word processor to make sure you don't make spelling and grammar mistakes (so I can follow you).

The second thing to do is to flesh out your story. At the moment, it's rather bland and there isn't a sense of anything. This is one of the last things you should do, considering that you want people to understand everything else more than this.

The third thing to do is to spell out the mechanics of the system. All games have a system that includes mechanics. It's important that you develop something like this (even if it's something very basic and simple) before you start.

Hope this helps.