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Old 06-21-2008, 12:43 AM
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I just introduced my villian for my story, and she is infact what I wanted her to be. She's completley evil, ready to kill or hurt, but she has one drawback. She can't stand to be told somethings wrong with her. And that's what makes the story so funny whenever they meet her. It's fun for me to think up insults and how she reacts. ^^
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I just introduced my villian for my story, and she is infact what I wanted her to be. She's completley evil, ready to kill or hurt, but she has one drawback. She can't stand to be told somethings wrong with her. And that's what makes the story so funny whenever they meet her. It's fun for me to think up insults and how she reacts. ^^
Yep. That's a good one.

Oh! Like when Scythe broke a nail and Raze insulted her. xD
That's definitely a classic!
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Yeah. My story has three major villains, one who won't make an appearance till the end. Each of the villains have their own motives, yet they work together. What bonds them together? Either way, they are not entirely loyal to each other...Say if Nazo was about to take a hard blow, he would throw Dark Super Sonic in the way. Loyalty hardly exists.
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Yeah. My story has three major villains, one who won't make an appearance till the end. Each of the villains have their own motives, yet they work together. What bonds them together? Either way, they are not entirely loyal to each other...Say if Nazo was about to take a hard blow, he would throw Dark Super Sonic in the way. Loyalty hardly exists.
Same. For instance when Scythe had her...incident, and Raze flew off.

That was hilarious! xD
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Same. For instance when Scythe had her...incident, and Raze flew off.

That was hilarious! xD
A lot of my villains don't really get along much...including some of the ones that haven't been introduced to my story yet. x3
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A lot of my villains don't really get along much...including some of the ones that haven't been introduced to my story yet. x3
Well that's what makes a good story.

I mean, who wants their villians to get along anyway? They're not meant to be friendly.
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Well that's what makes a good story.

I mean, who wants their villians to get along anyway? They're not meant to be friendly.
Yeah. The friendliest villain I have is Dark Super Sonic, when he's not ripping your throat out. Of course, I plan to have a very humorous part with him. Humor is very important in a story, it helps relieve some tension.
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Yeah. The friendliest villain I have is Dark Super Sonic, when he's not ripping your throat out. Of course, I plan to have a very humorous part with him. Humor is very important in a story, it helps relieve some tension.
That's why I have Jarre. He's just what the gang needs for comic relief.

And then Zanna's the quirky one, and Rye's the serious one. ^_^
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That's why I have Jarre. He's just what the gang needs for comic relief.

And then Zanna's the quirky one, and Rye's the serious one. ^_^
For me... My villians are extremely dark and insane. Barring Hairy, Airy, and Fairy, the failed Rocket Trio, who are insane, but not dark. They dance around like a bunch of idiots, weird people out, then get blown out of the sky. :3
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A lot of my villains don't really get along much...including some of the ones that haven't been introduced to my story yet. x3
Actually, that's one of my biggest plot devices in my Destiny Trilogy. I have two villains for the better half of the first two books. One works under the other, but the lower down one plays a much bigger role in the proceedings until the third book. In the second book, though, the lower-down villain has a fallout with the big villain, and seeks the help of the protagonist. But it's all very dark and depressing, not nearly as funny as all of this.

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See, you all have decent villains. My Pokemon story seems to villainless until the fifth or sixth chapter. Even then, the villain's not especially intimidating, even if her Salamence partner is...

But then again, the trio's rather funny, because Lyznd has this odd fear of cats and Kyrin has an obsession with pointy things...so they're my little comic duo...

You should be glad this Salamence/Wigglytuff combo isn't the main Villain duo.

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I feel bad, though. My main villain's one of those dark types, you know? I thought it would be fine when I first made him becuse my main character's an absol too but...it turned out a little predictable...

I SO wish I could put Justify on pe2k, but I can't becauise is contains odd humor. >.<

Enough from me. Nice guide.
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Old 06-23-2008, 06:18 PM
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I think its good to have a couple of villains- ones who show up in about one or two chapters and then get beaten and leave/die, and the main villains who tend to follow the main characters around a lot. I like to leave them mysterious though, i haven't got to it in my fanfic version but in the comic I made that its based on, there is a creepy vulpix who sometimes shows up after a battle. no-one knows anything about it. It don't like any of this
"Do you have any last words?" stupidness, or the villain 'telling hi/her life story to the "goodie" before they fight.' because the second one just tends to give a lot away.
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For me... My villians are extremely dark and insane. Barring Hairy, Airy, and Fairy, the failed Rocket Trio, who are insane, but not dark. They dance around like a bunch of idiots, weird people out, then get blown out of the sky. :3
Insane types are the best, Star. ^_^

Oh, Deathspector, I love it when villians join the protagonist. It's much more fun that way. :D
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I just like it when the hero becomes an insane villain. It's fun.

I love plot twists. I also don't like a villain telling their whole story, but sometimes it's necessary for a certain part of their past to be shown. Like marks, powers, a hatred towards someone, etc.

Otherwise, people will be left scratching their heads. Of course, theories are fun, but they're meant to be resolved.
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I just like it when the hero becomes an insane villain. It's fun.

I love plot twists. I also don't like a villain telling their whole story, but sometimes it's necessary for a certain part of their past to be shown. Like marks, powers, a hatred towards someone, etc.

Otherwise, people will be left scratching their heads. Of course, theories are fun, but they're meant to be resolved.
And this wouldn't be linked to Sonic and Dark Sonic at all, would it Grassy?
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