I, Dratini-Vol. 2, Page THREE is out![COMIC]

[Kendo]

(All userbars on this page by Galactic Grunt)

~From the creator of The Adventures of Fred and Leo~

This is my second webcomic I, Dratini (as you all know). Constructive criticism would be appreciated. Each volume of this comic contains five chapters, just so you know. So, without further ado, here is the comic!

AND FOR THE LAST TIME, THIS IS ONE OF THOSE "RANDOM COMICS," I KNOW HOW TO CHANGE THE BASE COLORS, THERE IS A PLOT, AND I KNOW WHAT I'M DOING!!!!!

Thank you to all of my supporters, and for those who give advice, but to the latter, please don't ask about the above.

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Vol. One: Zeta Co.

Page One
Page Two
Page Three (contains lame, pixellated blood)
Page Four
Page Five

Vol. Two: Cakes, Souls, and a Bunch of Other Stuff

Page One
Page Two (more pixellated blood in this one)
Page Three

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GUEST STARS

NOT TAKING GUEST STARS UNTIL SOME TIME AFTER VOLUME TWO!!!!!

If you want to have a guest star in my comic, just fill out the following form and post it in this topic:

Guest Star Name:
Images (a LINK, if possible, please, a sprite sheet is fine) (Provide a few images so that the sprite can have movements):
Personality:
Other (any other info about this character):

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CHARACTER GUIDES (WARNING! Contains spoilers.)-updated every page, not volume! This contains every single featured character, from cameo characters to recurring ones.

Dratini: The main character of this story, when he heard that the mysterious Zeta Co. is attempting to destroy the world's ozone layer, he goes on a quest to stop them. All we know about his personality so far is that he's stupid and gullible.

Status: Getting a Smash Ball...?

"Newsman" Hitmonchan: Told Dratini over the Channel 97 News station about Zeta Co. We don't know if he's going to appear later or not. Runs the Punch Out!! news segment.

Status: ???

Wurmple and Weedle: Two random pokemon who appear and, unknowingly, give Dratini advice about Zeta Co.'s plans. They're expected to appear again and give out even more important info by simply discussing their daily lives.

Status: Talking about pie

Meta Knight: One of the members of Zeta Co., and the first one that Dratini ever meets. The two got into a one-on-one match, with Dratini emerging as the victor. Meta knight would've won, though, if it wasn't for Cheese...

Status: Injured in battle

Cheese: A Vulpix who plans to stop Zeta Co. (or so he says) and takes Dratini along with him. Of course, Dratini doesn't mind...Cheese, albeit his name, is the more serious of the two, although both appear to have a serious love of cakes and, maybe, other sweets. Though he may seem serious on the outside, he's absent-minded when it comes to his favorite manga character Ichigo Kurosaki (from Bleach). Luckily, he seems to be getting out of it.

Status: Blown off the stage

Lightning-etta: A Pikachu, she is, apparently, trying to deliver her cake to Oldpeelingbarktown. Is she telling the truth...?

Status: Watching Cheese, Ichigo and Dratini's battle

Ichigo: A character from the popular manga Bleach, apparently he's against Zeta Co. but thinks that our heroes Dratini, Cheese and Lightning-etta are Zeta agents!

Status: Beating up Cheese

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Yes, the character bios are the latest addition to this topic! I hope they're semi-neat.

Graceful_Suicune might make a userbar soon, and Daughter of Mew might make a banner! Expect them sometime soon!

[Galactic Spriter]

Uh.. is this one of those random comics? And why don't you have backgrounds?

[Shadowburn]

The graphics need some work, and the story is a little pointless. It has its funny points, though.

[Kendo]

Originally Posted by Galactic Grunt

Uh.. is this one of those random comics? And why don't you have backgrounds?

Yeah, it's a bit random.....

Backgrounds have never been my forte. I tend not to bother with them too much. I might consider putting in a realistic sky, though. :P

To Shadowburn, I know the story seems pointless. That was one of my concerns. But I think that soon, in this volume, I can reveal more of the plotline.

[Galactic Spriter]

Keep working on the comic, eventually you'll get more fans.

[Graceful_Suicune]

Originally Posted by Galactic Grunt

Uh.. is this one of those random comics? And why don't you have backgrounds?

Originally Posted by Shadowburn

The graphics need some work, and the story is a little pointless. It has its funny points, though.

:O How could you guys SAY THAT?! This is like one of those traditional comics with hand drawn backgounds and really random stories. Although I doubt you two were around when that's what they were all like. MOSTLY there weren't overworld comics at all.

I like it, Kendo! It reminds me of the good old days....xD I'm not that old!
Haha, I love that Hitmonchan and the freaked out Dratini! :D Nice work.

Haha, and the plot is a bit unpredictable, too! It's a nice change from all of the PMD comics lately, although I do love them too.

[Kendo]

Originally Posted by Graceful_Suicune

I like it, Kendo! It reminds me of the good old days....xD I'm not that old!
Haha, I love that Hitmonchan and the freaked out Dratini! :D Nice work.

Haha, and the plot is a bit unpredictable, too! It's a nice change from all of the PMD comics lately, although I do love them too.

Hey, thanks! I'm working on the 3rd page as we speak (type). It should be done sometime today, so you don't have to wait for too long.

[Graceful_Suicune]

Originally Posted by Kendo

Hey, thanks! I'm working on the 3rd page as we speak (type). It should be done sometime today, so you don't have to wait for too long.

No worries! :D

And cool. I shall lie (sit) in wait for it! =3

[Galactic Spriter]

I feel generous Today... SO i will be making userbars for every comic! Just provide me a sprite and favorite color and i'll have it back as soon as possible!

[Kendo]

Okay! Thanks! But I'm not quite ready yet...

Third page is done! I'll put it on the first page right away!

[Rizaado]

I really like the comic, it's funny :) I also how it has sort of a different feel, you know, not so overworldy and serious.

But I'm confused...In the being you said you had some inspiration by my comic...can you please explain a little, because your comic seems in a different world from mine

[Kendo]

Originally Posted by Rizaado

I really like the comic, it's funny :) I also how it has sort of a different feel, you know, not so overworldy and serious.

But I'm confused...In the being you said you had some inspiration by my comic...can you please explain a little, because your comic seems in a different world from mine

I just meant that the layout of the 'volume' stuff seemed a little reminiscent of your basic comic layout, not the comic pages themselves...that might be a little confusing, but if it doesn't bother you, I'll remove that part. Anywho, glad you like it! :D I'm getting more fans!

[Graceful_Suicune]

:O No! Dratini! Poor guy. Great new issue, but there was no blood when he said there was! xD

[Shadowburn]

Originally Posted by Graceful_Suicune

:O No! Dratini! Poor guy. Great new issue, but there was no blood when he said there was! xD

The little dots were supossed to be the blood. I really like it so far, lets see another soon.

[Rizaado]

Originally Posted by Kendo

I just meant that the layout of the 'volume' stuff seemed a little reminiscent of your basic comic layout, not the comic pages themselves...that might be a little confusing, but if it doesn't bother you, I'll remove that part. Anywho, glad you like it! :D I'm getting more fans!

Oh, you mean the volumes > chapters > pages thing. I don't think I was the first one to do that anyway, lol. I actually only do that because I write books in real life (I'm not pro yet though) Anyway, ya I'm not bugged by it so you can go ahead and remove that thing at the beginning.