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Old 09-07-2008, 04:18 PM
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~The Random Story~

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Twelve-year-old Bob has always lived a peaceful life in Pennsylvania, Texas, but when some guy destroys his house for no apparent reason, he goes on a long and hard journey to become a warrior and defeat him!

THE STORY SO FAR...

Bob's house has been destroyed. Could it be that some random blond-haired dude did it...? Now Bob's only choice of action is to go to some random place...

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~CHAPTERS~

1. The First Chapter

2. Days of Training (In Progress)

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SOME INFO ON HOW THIS STORY GOT STARTED, ANYWAYS...

I read Bobobo-bobo-bobo (yes, I know how many "Bo's" there are in his name) and loved it, then wanted to make my own random story. Plus, there are so many other random stories over the internet, and most of them are awesome.

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Old 09-07-2008, 04:55 PM
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Smile The Random Story-The First Chapter

Chapter One: The First Chapter

It was morning, and sun shone on every acre of Pennsylvania, Texas, a little-known town. As always, young Bob lay in bed, black hair sitting atop his head. His bed was covered in red blankets, his room painted blue and his pajamas were painted blue as well. He was fast asleep, and you could tell that by looking at his unconscious face...which is why by twelve o' clock he got out of bed, yawned and stretched a little.

"Today...is going to be a great day!" Bob said cheerily, rubbing his right eye with a smile. In a few seconds he'd looked wide-awake, and marched over to his bedroom doorway. Since the blue door was closed, naturally he'd have to turn the blue doorknob to open it...and all the while, he got the strange feeling that something bad might happen that day...

He opened the door.

Bob looked around. This was not his house...it was the remains of his house! "...WHAT HAPPENED TO MY HOUSE!?!?" Only the remnants of walls could be seen among the mysterious grass that wasn't really there before, and smoke rose from what seemed like everything. Even a nearby bird was smoking. Bob looked at it with a simple frown. "Did you do this? I thought you might have because cigarette smoke is bad for you and bad guys do bad stuff like that."

The goldfinch started to sweat, then quickly spit out its small cigarette and flew away noisily. The paper thingy simply sat on the grass, releasing secondhand smoke. Nobody seemed to care about it.

Bob was suddenly very confused and curious. Who did this? Had a meteor crashed into his house overnight? Had he called Jenny yet!? All of these questions and more bombarded his mind like pelicans shooting potatoes from their beaks. When one question damaged his frontal lobe, he decided to investigate a little...

...So he walked behind his bedroom. Once there, he noticed some blond-haired guy in a black cloak was hiding behind it. The guy was looking down and saying quietly, "Nobody would think to look back here...muahahahaha....."

Bob said to him, "Did you destroy my house?"

"Before I tell you...you must answer this question..." The person slowly revealed a sword from behind his back. It wasn't very shiny, as it had coffee and water stains all over it. He held the sword out in front of himself and asked, "Why did you paint your clothing?"

Why did Bob paint his pajamas? That was a good question. He had to ask himself that. At that moment, he thanked this man for his query...

The sword slashed Bob's left arm! That is to say, Bob's arm now had a small cut that would stop bleeding in a minute or two. "Too slow!" He replaced the sword in a sheath behind his back. He ran off, saying, "You're worth nothing to me..." At that same time, he thought, A true warrior would have said "I don't know" !

Afterwards, Bob knew just where to turn to. He'd heard about it on TV. He'd read about it in the newspaper. But he didn't remember all of that. He just thought of something random...

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"So this is the Purple Dojo!" he said, tipping his "M" hat (which had no relevance to anything whatsoever) and wearing a generic red shirt and generic blue jeans. Standing in front of him was a generic dojo, only it was painted red. "This isn't purple. Alright, heads I stay here, tails I'll look for the real Purple Dojo." He tossed a generic quarter into the air...when it landed, the visible side said "EPIC FAIL" on it. "....mmmmeh." Bob walked into the purplish-reddish building, leaving the EPIC FAIL coin to rest on the dirt.

Inside of the generic dojo was a generic room, with a bunny and two hooded figures inside the totally-red room.

"Greetings," the rabbit said in a surprisingly low voice.

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~COMMENTS~

Most everything shall be explained later, though why Bob doesn't seem to have any parents and why he needs to go to this dojo may remain unknown. I promise you that the blond-haired guy and bunny shall have names in the not-too-distant future. Also, I can tell you right now that the second chapter won't be as funny as this one, but it still will be, and it'll give you more info on exactly what goes on in Pennsylvania, Texas (yesh, it's a made-up town). And I PROMISE once again that the chapters to come will be much longer than this.

~NEXT TIME ON THE RANDOM STORY~

Bob begins training at the Purple Dojo! But why is it purple when it's really red? And what'll happen when Bob fights Fauna and his swarm of bee servants???

Fauna: You won't want to miss this chapter~

Chapter Two: Days of Training-Coming Soon!
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Old 09-16-2008, 09:23 PM
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Why did Bob paint his pajamas? That was a good question. He had to ask himself that. At that moment, he thanked this man for his query...
This is the greatest "Random" Story I have ever read.

9/10

And it's funny too!

New chapter!
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Ok, I really like the randomness of this story. It makes absolutley no sense, but at the same time, it feels like it is so genius that no one could reach it! MORE!!
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Old 09-20-2008, 07:21 PM
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I WOULD put up a new chapter today, but since I saved most of it onto another computer a day or two ago and it was so long it seems like a waste to type it up now. Expect it Monday-Tuesday!
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Oh my. :3

Better than my attempt! Good job. Keep posting chapters, foo.
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Ok, I really like the randomness of this story. It makes absolutley no sense, but at the same time, it feels like it is so genius that no one could reach it! MORE!!
Meh, too bad nearly everything makes sense in the end. *shrugs*

ANYWAYS! On with Chapter Two!

(BY THE WAY!!!!! This is only the FIRST PART of the chapter! Since I'm too lazykins to finally finish the whole thing already...*punches self* But you do get a general idea of what happens...)

Chapter Two: Days of Training (Part One)

"I," the rabbit proclaimed, standing on its hind legs, "am Purple Sensei. I will train you in the ways of a warrior."

"...okay, hi, Purple Sensei," Bob half-heartedly greeted. "Why is your dojo red-"

"Because I LIKE the color red!" Poor Purple. He was always asked that question. Purple calmed down and said, "Red is my favorite color. Now-"

"The color red sucks, blue is better. Anybody who likes red is practically my ENEMY." Coming from a boy with a red bed, this sounded odd.

"AS I WAS SAYING..." the bunny continued frustratingly, "there are five basic elements in this world." Purple pointed to the hooded guys. "Would you do the honors?"

The hooded guys walked away for a minute-a long, LONG minute-and came back with a poster. This poster had a diagram in which five random pictures-representing elements-were connected via a pentagon. To the side, an elemental triangle had been drawn, though its elements were question marks.

"These," Purple Sensei pointed to the pentagon, "are the elements of the pentagon: Pointy Things, Banana, Sword..."

"Doesn't Sword count as a pointy thing, Sensei?"

"...no. Swords are weak against bananas, while bananas are weak against pointy things. Moving on...then there's Rock and Wall. Each element is weak and strong against one another, as I explained with Banana.

"Whichever element suits you depends on your personality. For example, I am Rock; I'm solid and reliable. Walls are boring and unforgiving, Pointy Things are wild and unpredictable, Bananas are fruity and nutritious, and Swords are sharp and pointy. If your personality does not match any of those, you may be destined to use one of the Unknown Elements, three undocumented attributes in which the world is still trying to classify."

"But how do you know there's only one-"

"SHUSH!!!!! Since you seem boring, and you're definetly unforgiving, you're a Wall warrior. Your only real abilities are to control walls, things that look like walls, things that sound like walls, and things that act like walls. You can create brick walls from thin air, too."

"Cool! So I can control Wall-E?"

"As long as it sounds remotely close to the word 'Wall,' then yes."

"Sweet!"

"IN ORDER to unlock your Wall powers, you shall face this guy in combat," Purple Sensei said, pointing to one hooded guy. He revealed himself to be...a flower!

As his cloak fell to the ground, the tiny flower said, "I'm Fauna~and I control pointy things~so let's battle~"

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~NEXT TIME ON THE RANDOM STORY~

The chapter ends! As it should have already! Will Bob win on his first try against Fauna, or lose...unstereotypically? Will he succeed at using his new Wall powers? Does he even have them yet? Who's the other hooded guy? WILL THIS CHAPTER EVEN BE FUNNY!?!?!? .....We'll just have to see.

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