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Old 02-10-2009, 10:00 PM
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Okay, I think i'll write something all new. I just need a title.

Well, here ya go:

Ash Ketchum has lost Pikachu. Sorry to say this, but his Chimchar is now a Monferno, and the only Pokemon Ash has now. It has been five years since Ash went on an adventure. HE IS NOW OF TEAM ROCKET!!! He has replaced Jessie and James, who are now part of Team Galactic.

Ash must now choose whether to assassinate Lance, or save the world.
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Old 02-13-2009, 01:00 AM
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This... is completely impossible.

Why would Ash join Team Rocket, why does he need to save the world again, and what in the name of Arceus does Lance have to do with anything? (Jessie, James, and Meowth joining Team Galactic... that I understand. xD)
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Old 02-13-2009, 07:51 PM
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I agree.

You need to explain everything better if you're gonna pull this off. And even if you do, I'm tired of seeing Ash do everything. Why not Gold, or Brendan? I know Ash is the main character, but...
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Old 02-14-2009, 12:26 AM
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Default Re: Cool Idea?

Good point.

I need ideas.

Lo! Presto!

Maybe Ash joined because of his anger of losing Pika, like, maybe Brock "accidentally" threw the mouse off a cliff.

As for Lance, maybe i'll scratch the idea.

Maybe Ash must kill someone to avenge the boss?
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Old 02-20-2009, 12:10 AM
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Default Re: Cool Idea?

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Good point.

I need ideas.

Lo! Presto!

Maybe Ash joined because of his anger of losing Pika, like, maybe Brock "accidentally" threw the mouse off a cliff.

As for Lance, maybe i'll scratch the idea.

Maybe Ash must kill someone to avenge the boss?
Interesting idea. If Ash lost Pikachu for good... he'd turn emo. Which is the basis of a lot of villainy. If more light were shed on this and were written in an organized matter, I'd love to read.
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Old 02-25-2009, 02:33 AM
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That is a little impossible...

Ash wouldn't want to be team rocket. And team galactic doesn't like team rocket apparently.
I say "Save the world choose that" That would be a better choice.
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