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[TeamMaskersLeaderTaylor]

New Concept but i need CC and Ideas you think it will go or not like in a Shop or Special Orders:


Concept: Trainer Head Shots Turned into Crystals so i call them Trainstals (Train- St-alls)

[King ZR]

Originally Posted by Anastasia-R

Sweet sprite. =o

Anyhow, the shading on the shell looks weird. Add more shades, maybe? The outlines on the shell is kinda dark, too. Maybe make it a bit lighter with the shade on the shell? The blue (Arm?) also doesn't look right, to me. Maybe it's too low? Either way, it has a pretty good idea. ^..^ It looks great.

Thanks. I see what you mean. It's probably because I dithered alot to try to get this certain look. The highlights shades are a little to soft, too.


TeamMaskersLeaderTaylor-

They look okay to me. You should either lighten the outline or just use some of the darker shades from the crystals because they look too light.

[Missingno_7-4468]

Well, I had a random thought come to my mind today, and the idea of cake Pokemon came to my head, so I made some pallettes, asked a friend of mine to choose a Pokemon and a few specifics, and...



I need some CC before I decide whether or not it's good enough to be put in a sprite shop.

[Charmander009]

Originally Posted by Missingno_7-4468

Well, I had a random thought come to my mind today, and the idea of cake Pokemon came to my head, so I made some pallettes, asked a friend of mine to choose a Pokemon and a few specifics, and...



I need some CC before I decide whether or not it's good enough to be put in a sprite shop.

Looks good enough to eat! *coughBadJokecough*

I'm not sure about the diagonal lines in the base part, or the red spots in the pink frosting. How about putting a cherry on top? That'd be cute! ^^ <3 Maybe even putting a little more texture to the cake part.

Okay, so I've tried to sprite-ify XD: GoD's Ultimate Shadow, Lugia. I need to know if this pallet is okay:



Here's another Shadow i've made with that pallet:

[tlehmann]

Can I get some comments on these?

[Professor Geoffrey]

Originally Posted by Charmander009

Here's another Shadow i've made with that pallet:

The palette seems to be fine, it's just how you recolored the Lugia bothered me. The Regigigas was good, but with the Lugia, the black pixels are bothering me, and the shades jump a little dramatically; maybe take the darker shade and lighten it a little bit? And adding more shades to the right wing and the head would improve it a little more. ;D

Originally Posted by tlehmann

Can I get some comments on these?

Interesting. The wings... meh, they feel flashy and disproportionate. And it took my eyes about a minute to find the tail, so that was probably not a good idea to add... it's just that adding multiple parts from more than two or three (or in few cases, four) Pokémon make sprites look so disproportionate. D:

However, this Darkrai/Octillery/Giratina fusion was not bad. It just looks that you plopped the Darkrai/Giratina onto an Octillery, and viola, completion, but it doesn't make sense; the "skirt" of Dakrai's body is going back, and Octillery's tentacles are coming forward. I would have gotten rid of the skirt, and then try attaching the tentacles. That actually would make it look a lot cooler.

[tlehmann]

I changed up the sprite a bit, and it looks MUCH bettter! (in my opinion) just wanted to see what you guys (and girls!) thought

[Retro-Smasher]

It looks kewl. I like it. Here are some of my most recent sprites:

I call this one "Evile"

This one is called "Deoxyform and is created when Castform gets infected by Deoxys

I like this one! It's mainly for Lolz but I named in "SuprExo Deoxys"

[tlehmann]

Just watched "UP!", and I was inspired!
It's Alpha, the leader of the dogs. tell me watcha' think!

Heres an image of him for reference. In case you couldn't tell, he was the one on the left.
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_AKat9k5VF4...gs-600x694.jpg

[Retro-Smasher]

Here is my newest sprite: Its called the Definer

Hes made out of eighteen pokemons, all are legendarys
Dialga, Latios, Latias, Regice, Registeel, Regirock, (Base) Regigigas, Ho-oh, Shaymin, Shaymin sky form, Mew, Rayquaza, Kyogre, Heatran, Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres, Mesprit
Try to find all thier parts! (but not mew because his part got kind of covered up)

[Dylan]

Evile - Hey, that is awesome! I mainly like it because I'm a fan of making evilified pokemon, like the one in my avatar. So that style is pretty cool. I don't have much criticism for it besides for that you shouldn't have made the fog so dark towards the center, it made the outline look weird.

Deoxyform - That's cool too. You're getting better, I only suggest that you recolor the arm to the red color because when you have green on red, it doesn't look very good, even if it is Deoxys colors. It didn't have one red one green on different sides, it had red on top and green arm on bottom I believe, so you may want to adjust that.

SuperExo Deoxys - This one was made very well, I just think the green on the body doesn't fit. I think it would look nice if you put the blue that is being used to replace the green.

The Definer - No. No, no, no, no, no. You should know not to make a fusion with a bunch of pokemon in the mix! You have to have a better concept like the ones before. Do you see how crazy it looks? I don't even need to criticize it, when there is too much bad, I just point out why it looks bad.

Here is my attempt at copying someone's idea of a super-revamp, where you fix anatomy and recolor to mixing colors, and things like that. But after trying it, I see now why nobody copies something so original.

[Retro-Smasher]

With all do respect shy, I thought The Definer looked awsome. I should have made it more centered towards 3 palettes of different colors rather than 5 though.
I made the Evile's fog like that for a reason, so that it looked like it was seeping out of him as he ran, and I don't ind anything wrong with the darkness.
You are right about the Deoxyform though, it would look better with a second red arm.
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[Graceful_Suicune]

Originally Posted by tlehmann

Just watched "UP!", and I was inspired!
It's Alpha, the leader of the dogs. tell me watcha' think!

Heres an image of him for reference. In case you couldn't tell, he was the one on the left.
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_AKat9k5VF4...gs-600x694.jpg

xDD I really like it! ;D However, looking at the picture, Alpha is actually smaller than what he looks in the sprite and you've missed spots of russet which are supposed to be two on his chest, and the V should go down past the colour. Also, I think you should actually make the brown a brown like he has in the movie, because the one you've got now is too dull and inaccurate. Also, he's supposed to have brown socks on his front paws you missed, too. :3

Originally Posted by DaSpriter

Here is my newest sprite: Its called the Definer

Hes made out of eighteen pokemons, all are legendarys
Dialga, Latios, Latias, Regice, Registeel, Regirock, (Base) Regigigas, Ho-oh, Shaymin, Shaymin sky form, Mew, Rayquaza, Kyogre, Heatran, Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres, Mesprit
Try to find all thier parts! (but not mew because his part got kind of covered up)

It looks terrible to be hounest. You can barely make out where all the features are, and it's WAY too crammed. There are too many things which make it look unauthentic and muddled up. There are too many colours as well, and you should stick to much simpler fusions, because ones like that look bad for any level of spriter to attempt.

Originally Posted by Shy

The Definer - No. No, no, no, no, no. You should know not to make a fusion with a bunch of pokemon in the mix! You have to have a better concept like the ones before. Do you see how crazy it looks? I don't even need to criticize it, when there is too much bad, I just point out why it looks bad.

Here is my attempt at copying someone's idea of a super-revamp, where you fix anatomy and recolor to mixing colors, and things like that. But after trying it, I see now why nobody copies something so original.

Exactly. Stick to my and Shy's advice.

Personally I don't really like it. The red is not a good hue, and the lack of darkened shades confuse the shading lineart. See on the left eye (our left) how there's too much pinky-red in one spot? That's a result of not having enough shades, and you really need darker shades for the lineart. If you take a look at real life things, you'll see that a lot of them have dark shading, and it makes much more sense to have darker outlines especially. Also, the way you've done it makes it look like there are two halves. This is because you have dark shading around the red lip where it joins to the white, which makes it look as if it's bending inwards and therefore creates a separating effect. The eyes aren't bright enough, as they need white in at least some spots to highlight light shining on them, and frankly your shading looks like it's a bit confused. The lightest shaded part of the Voltorb does not look good, and because you have the dark lineart it cancels out the light part effect that you want. Although it pains me to say it, I think I like the other one more...but the one of yours I do like is the white, lower half.

~Xanthe.

[Dylan]

Thanks, however I don't think I'm going to continue to work at that, because I don't want to steal the originality of something. I just got my monitor back and it is so nice, so I made some fusions for fun. The first one I just threw in a bunch of parts together to make what I call Machingray, however it doesn't look too nice that way, so I might rework it. Then is Lapagigasizor, which I tried to make a bit more cleaned up, and it looks somewhat nicer to me.

[Retro-Smasher]

Machingray: This one seems really random. You told me not to do that sort of thing and then you go and do it?
Lapagigascizor: It looks good but unfinished. the right leg looks out of place, and you should make the arm structure a little thicker. But other than that, it looks ok! Btw, Graceful suicune, did you not see my own comment about my sprite?