General Spriter's Showcase! **PLEASE post! Critique others' work and post your own!**

[Gaygar rocks]

Originally Posted by Eeveelutions

KAJGKHGJKHGAKJGHAK The Chiramii/Munna splice is adorable ;___;
That first splice is pretty cool 8D
And the Abra revamps look very nice, sir c: I just think they need a little bit more shading. They kinda look like they lack it. Did you use a certain version for reference? You should try another one with a better palette O:


Arcanine revamp I made earlier today. I PUT THEM SIDE BY SIDE BECAUSE MINE ALONE LOOKS STUPID ;___;

looks great to me

i have made a new sprite im calling him Straih but i have an problem i dont know wich one is the best to pick so maybe you can help me

Straih 1

Straih 2

[JokesterJesse]

Originally Posted by Gaygar rocks

looks great to me

i have made a new sprite im calling him Straih but i have an problem i dont know wich one is the best to pick so maybe you can help me

Straih 1

Straih 2

Defiantly the second one,


My pimp Bibarel.


~JKJesse~

[Eeveelutions]

Originally Posted by JokesterJesse

Defiantly the second one,


My pimp Bibarel.


~JKJesse~

LOL It looks cool c: If you wanna make it look better, maybe you should edit the crown so it looks more 3D-ish ^_^

After I made that Arcanine revamp, I remembered how fun it was to revamp stuff 8D So here's 2 more revamps-



Also, Rankurusu (the new 5th gen Pokemon) is ADORABLE ;___; So I decided to make a pixel over. This took me forever :c It doesnt even look that good...I didn't add black to the outline cuz it has a gelatin-like body and it looks weird with black (I tried it) :I


And a splice! 8D I call it Goresea hehe

[FiragaShark]

Originally Posted by Eeveelutions

LOL It looks cool c: If you wanna make it look better, maybe you should edit the crown so it looks more 3D-ish ^_^

After I made that Arcanine revamp, I remembered how fun it was to revamp stuff 8D So here's 2 more revamps-



Also, Rankurusu (the new 5th gen Pokemon) is ADORABLE ;___; So I decided to make a pixel over. This took me forever :c It doesnt even look that good...I didn't add black to the outline cuz it has a gelatin-like body and it looks weird with black (I tried it) :I


And a splice! 8D I call it Goresea hehe

Very well done revamps. Excellent in the execution.

The pixel-over looks great. But it really needs some black outline. Without it, it looks a bit flat.

Great fusion.I can tell you tried to infuse as much Gorebyss as you could onto the Horsea.

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Disinsect, the Chaos-type
A scratch I made for War. It's supposed have new original typing called Chaos.

[Speed-X]

Not everything needs a black outline. This pixel over, here, is a good example.
Actally, the lack of black with the semi-harsh highlighting makes it appear more gelatin-like.

Oh, and that Horsea/Gorebyss...technically, you recolored Horsea as Gorebyss, so it wouldn't exactly be a fusion.
Well, kinda--the nose-like probiscus-thing seems to have been edited. But, nonetheless, try to incorporate more Gorebyss into Horsea next time. For example, you could take into consideration their varying body types.


Firaga: Nice, but the tail on the bottom-most left and right corners is much too squared--as if its being held captive inside an invisible box.
Even if you're using a size limit, it still needs rounded--for, if it were to appear in a game, for instance, it would look unnatural.
The problem that's causing the tail to coil in a more square-like shape instead of being completely rounded...erm, well, see how the bottom-left area of the tail--the left-most line--is entirely straight for a length of quite a few...pixels...?
((I hate my wording. Hopefully you can get around it in order to make some sense out of it.))
Don't just end that part of the tail at that: a completely straight tail. Keep rounding it out (as in having the tail continue to go outwards).

[Gaygar rocks]

I have made a splice for an contest the theme was make an minion of any god

my god was the egyptian god Ra

and here is its minion ::: Pharaoh Horus IV

he has a mask of a falk all attributes ( except the crown) are scratch





and these are the Electric brothers

try to guess wich pokemon are in there.

and what is special or funny or something




so what do you think

C&CC PLEASE

[Dark Moonlight]

Originally Posted by Gaygar rocks

I have made a splice for an contest the theme was make an minion of any god

my god was the egyptian god Ra

and here is its minion ::: Pharaoh Horus IV

he has a mask of a falk all attributes ( except the crown) are scratch





and these are the Electric brothers

try to guess wich pokemon are in there.

and what is special or funny or something




so what do you think

C&CC PLEASE

For the fusion, I see Geodude, Electrode and Machop.

[Gaygar rocks]

Originally Posted by Dark Moonlight

For the fusion, I see Geodude, Electrode and Machop.

thats right but there is another one in it i will tell Elekid

and i have yet made another sprite

Evil Vampire Zubat

[Hoshika]

I thought I might as well ask for some criticism from people.



Don't mind the blue dot.

[FiragaShark]

Originally Posted by Hoshika

I thought I might as well ask for some criticism from people.



Don't mind the blue dot.

Overall, it looks great. However, there are few nitpicks I have. For one, the two horns on the top are a bit too bright. I realize that that's where the light source is brightest, but because it's so light, it looks kind of blurred. Also, the two string things look a bit... unnecessary. Like for some reason, the more I looks at it, the more I feel like, "Wait, why are those things there?" In short, they're a bit distracting, and in my opinion, the sprite would looks better without them.

[Woodchuck]

First scratch sprite in quite a while.


Ritanica
Ghost/Fire

For all intents and purposes, I suppose it's "finished", but I'll probably be making some edits to it. The shading on the cloak bugs me, and I'm not sure I like the angle of the fire. All in all, though, I'm fairly pleased with how it turned out.

So, comment, crit. Whatever you like. :]

[FiragaShark]

Originally Posted by Woodchuck

First scratch sprite in quite a while.


Ritanica
Ghost/Fire

For all intents and purposes, I suppose it's "finished", but I'll probably be making some edits to it. The shading on the cloak bugs me, and I'm not sure I like the angle of the fire. All in all, though, I'm fairly pleased with how it turned out.

So, comment, crit. Whatever you like. :]

Simply put, the shading on all parts is just flat. You need to use more than two shades for each color man.

[Woodchuck]

Originally Posted by FiragaShark

Simply put, the shading on all parts is just flat. You need to use more than two shades for each color man.

I usually do, but I was trying to emulate the D/P style as much as I could. I probably need more contrast between the shades. Thanks for the crit, though. :D

[Speed-X]

Not just that (for, the cloak looks rather bland even for the DS style...maybe.), but I think just the overall design is a bit bland and whatnot. To be honest, at first I thought it was Aron's head (the design of its head) attached to a cloak. XD

I mean, it's pretty nice for a "refresher" and all, but try something just a little more complicated next. Or, better yet, try making something simple look complicated--in the case that you're not trying to imitate the official DS style's simpleness.

[Eeveelutions]

Originally Posted by Woodchuck

First scratch sprite in quite a while.


Ritanica
Ghost/Fire

For all intents and purposes, I suppose it's "finished", but I'll probably be making some edits to it. The shading on the cloak bugs me, and I'm not sure I like the angle of the fire. All in all, though, I'm fairly pleased with how it turned out.

So, comment, crit. Whatever you like. :]

...imo, I think it looks great 8D
It really does look like it'd fit in in D/P :3 But the cloak looks like it lacks shading a bit. Other than that, I don't see much wrong with it o:


Uh...uhm...ok I don't really like this one LOL I can tell there's a lot wrong with it :I