[COMIC] Markos's Kanto Adventure [G]

[Mageta]

Hey guys, this is my first Pokemon Comic.
So it won't be the best. C&C would be very helpfull right now because i'm just starting my Comic and to get it going in the right direction I will need a lot of that. So anyway here it is.

News:
I am also looking towards a team that could go through, proof read all my comics before I post them up. If you are interested. PM Me.

Comic:
Prologue
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three

Credit goes to.
Ant2011 - For the layout and plenty of ideas.
TSR - For everything you see inside the comic itself.

*From chapter 3 and on. I've changed Markos's Sprite because I can't get back sprites for Red. Also, I've made the text bigger.



Here we go.

[Mageta]

Update,

Sorry for DP.

But i've uploaded 'Chapter One'

[Foxamivalth]

Since it's still on Chapter 1, I have not much to say. Just keep it up.

[Mageta]

Thanks Foxxy.

Well, episode two is up the top their.

[Mawile-Danmaku]

I'm confused: The professer says one of the choices is Pidgey, but after the girl picks it, she says Pidove. To top that off, the overworld sprite is Starly.

[Anastasia-R]

Ah, another comic! =D

Yeah, I was confused as well with the whole Pidove/Pidgey/Starly issue. Is it on purpose? And, I'm sure TSR has some overworlds of Pidgey or Pidove.

Also, I don't think you really need a whole panel for "..." when someone's walking down the stairs or going somewhere. Just skip that part, it takes space and, it's a little unnecessary, IMO. In the prologue, the scene changes quickly from a battle to the main character in his room. I think adding something that tells when or where the scene is. Like, adding a "Later on ..." or "Earlier today..." just so that the readers are aware of the time in the scenes. I'm not really that great with giving CnC with comics. xD However, I hope some points I said would make sense to you and would be helpful for future chapters. ^..^

I can't say much about the story, since it's bee only 2 chapters. I'll keep an eye on this comic. ;] I'm sure your chapters will be great, though, just watch out for Pokemon names!

... Gosh, I miss making comics, now. XD

[Mageta]

CRAP! I COMPLETLY STUFFED THAT UP!!!
Grrr, I knew I was gonna do that D:
i'll fix it. guys.

[Mageta]

After nearly a week.
Here is the long awaited episode Three.