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Old 12-02-2009, 07:36 PM
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I'm writing my first story right now. It's a story deal, so I gotta get it done fast, even though I've barely had time to do anything with it, cuz I'm really busy right now.

It's a Hard level story, I suck at writing stories, and I don't have Microsoft Word or anything like it.

Do you think I'll make it? I'm gonna put up another post for it in just a second.....
Well, it's your first story, so maybe. It really depends how good it is, you can't tell before it's posted.
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Old 12-02-2009, 08:08 PM
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I'm writing my first story right now. It's a story deal, so I gotta get it done fast, even though I've barely had time to do anything with it, cuz I'm really busy right now.

It's a Hard level story, I suck at writing stories, and I don't have Microsoft Word or anything like it.

Do you think I'll make it? I'm gonna put up another post for it in just a second.....
I applaud the audacity of doing a hard story for your first one. In any case it all depends on how much time you put towards it and how well the inspiration strikes. Wort case scenario, you're left with a hard mon to keep or put UFT if the other person gives up on you.
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Old 12-02-2009, 08:09 PM
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Thanks, and I think I've got a better sentence after you pointed the that/the mistake along with remembering the real word for the item that I was wanted.

In the inky darkness, however, we’ve only had enough luck to uncover a few shards, spheres, and a few other items that didn’t concern us, but we kept every last bit we could find thinking we could sell it later for some more food and equipment.
You switch tenses and then back in this. It should either all be in the present or all in the past. Also, from the context of this, it sounds lie 'thinking' should be replaced with something like 'hoping'.

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In the inky darkness, however, we’ve only had enough luck to uncover a few shards, spheres, and a few other items that don’t concern us, but we are keeping every last bit we can find hoping we can sell it later for some more food and equipment.
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In the inky darkness, however, we had only had enough luck to uncover a few shards, spheres, and a few other items that didn’t concern us, but we kept every last bit we could find hoping we could sell it later for some more food and equipment.
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Old 12-06-2009, 09:24 AM
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I know it hadsn't been long since I submitted my story but I really want to enter that competition but there for my first story has to be graded so if someone could please look at it

it is here
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Old 12-06-2009, 09:29 AM
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Sorry, but even if that story's graded, it won't count - they have to be submitted between Dec 1st and Jan 3. ^^;
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Old 12-06-2009, 09:37 AM
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I know but then I can write a new one. I read in the rules that you needed atleast one story to be finished and graded and then you can enter with a new one.
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Old 12-06-2009, 10:09 AM
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I know but then I can write a new one. I read in the rules that you needed atleast one story to be finished and graded and then you can enter with a new one.
The grading team will get to your story as quickly as we can, but in fairness we need to do it without disappointing those who have been waiting for quite a while to have theirs graded. I suggest you just begin working on your new story now, then post it when your other story has been graded. Does that sound OK? :)

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Old 12-06-2009, 10:09 AM
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I just checked, and nope, there's no such rule. So, you can write a new story while waiting for your current one to be graded :)
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Old 12-06-2009, 10:13 AM
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I just checked, and nope, there's no such rule. So, you can write a new story while waiting for your current one to be graded :)
I checked just now. Yeah, there's no rule like that, but there are a couple of rules which might have been misinterpreted. I can see where you got confused. Don't worry about it :)
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Old 12-06-2009, 10:50 AM
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Oke thanx :)
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Old 12-08-2009, 12:09 AM
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Please excuse me if I sound rude, but can I get a grader for my story?
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Old 12-08-2009, 12:15 AM
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Please excuse me if I sound rude, but can I get a grader for my story?
I'm afraid you cannot request a grade until it has been one week - and your story has only been up for five days. :/
There are other stories which have been waiting a bit longer, some over two weeks, that need tending to first. Someone will be along eventually to grade it.
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Old 12-08-2009, 12:18 AM
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I'm afraid you cannot request a grade until it has been one week - and your story has only been up for five days. :/
There are other stories which have been waiting a bit longer, some over two weeks, that need tending to first. Someone will be along eventually to grade it.
Please forgive my ignorance then, it's been a while since I've done stuff here in a while…
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Old 12-09-2009, 01:53 AM
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It has been a little over a week since I posted it, and I'd really appreciate if someone could claim it. It's for a story deal, and I'm sure Alonzo is getting impatient...

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Old 12-09-2009, 02:04 AM
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Posting this again because it was kind of skipped over last time.
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...d.php?t=100724
I wrote this story four months ago and I posted my revisions a month ago, could I please get somebody to regrade it? Thanks ^_^
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