Member List
Calendar
F.A.Q.
Search
Log Out
Pokemon Forum - Pokemon Elite 2000  
 

Go Back   Pokemon Forum - Pokemon Elite 2000 » Pokemon RPG's » Pokemon Ultra RPG » Stories

Stories Write a story to catch Pokemon. A Grader will then decide if it catches or not.


Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #76  
Old 12-14-2009, 07:05 PM
Lord Fedora's Avatar
Lord Fedora Offline
ASB Official
 
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Y'all stay off my property!
Posts: 8,469
Send a message via AIM to Lord Fedora
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lunar Wing View Post
I have a small grammer question (I'm sooo bad at grammer )

Which of the following sentences is right if you look to the word Mister:

- I didn’t really needed help but mister Reylord says I have to ...

- I didn’t really needed help but Mister Reylord says I have to ...

In other words: do I need to type it with a capital or not?
IN Dutch you have to but I wasn't sure about English...

Thanx~
It should be capitalized, and properly it should be Mr. if you have the name with it. You use "Mister" when it doesn't include the name.
__________________
URPG/ASB Stats
98% of teens won't stand up for God. Repost this if you think that statistic is the most laughable thing ever.
My new AIM username is GrayFedora12. Do not respond or click on links from any IMs from LordKhajmer.
Reply With Quote
  #77  
Old 12-14-2009, 07:19 PM
Lunar Wing's Avatar
Lunar Wing Offline
Master Trainer
 
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: The Netherlands
Posts: 250
Send a message via AIM to Lunar Wing
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Oke so it should be:

I didn’t really needed help but Mr. Reylord says I have to ...
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #78  
Old 12-14-2009, 07:43 PM
sheepskinfuton's Avatar
sheepskinfuton Offline
 
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Maryland
Posts: 511
Send a message via AIM to sheepskinfuton
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

I was wondering, if I toned it down a bit a lot for the kiddies, could I make a Silence of the Lambs Pokemon parody? :'D

My friend and I were discussing this this morning and it seemed magical.


@Lunar- Yes, though it should be 'need'. That's the wrong...tense, I think. (Or is it agreement?)
__________________

supermonkey07 (11:45:01 PM): lol
(11:45:03 PM): silly sheep
(11:45:10 PM): trying to act like people do
(11:45:14 PM): talk the people talk
(11:45:16 PM): eat the people food
(11:45:20 PM): but you're just a sheep
[URPG] [Links]

Last edited by sheepskinfuton; 12-14-2009 at 08:05 PM.
Reply With Quote
  #79  
Old 12-14-2009, 09:50 PM
GallantlyGlaceon's Avatar
GallantlyGlaceon Offline
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: A little place I like to call home.
Posts: 955
Send a message via Skype™ to GallantlyGlaceon
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by sheepskinfuton View Post
I was wondering, if I toned it down a bit a lot for the kiddies, could I make a Silence of the Lambs Pokemon parody? :'D

My friend and I were discussing this this morning and it seemed magical.


@Lunar- Yes, though it should be 'need'. That's the wrong...tense, I think. (Or is it agreement?)
I think tense. I may be wrong, though.

-Valiant
__________________
Quote:
[12:38:20 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: ...So how do we do this? XD
[12:39:20 AM] Sight of the Stars: it's nothing really big, just usually a note in your sig that's all like 'paired with soandso'
[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH" <---- Yup.
[12:39:57 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: XDDD
[12:39:59 AM] Sight of the Stars: and I'll be like "GALLANTLYGLACEON IS MAH HOE."
Reply With Quote
  #80  
Old 12-14-2009, 10:25 PM
sheepskinfuton's Avatar
sheepskinfuton Offline
 
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Maryland
Posts: 511
Send a message via AIM to sheepskinfuton
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by Valiantly Vaporeon View Post
I think tense. I may be wrong, though.

-Valiant
I think you're right.

Actually, Lunar Wing, now that I think about it, your sentence should probably read "I didn't really need help, but Mr. Reylord said I had to." OR "I don't really need help, but Mr. Reylord says I have to." depending on whether it's a past or present sentence.

English is tough, it's my mother tongue and even then I still have problems with it sometimes.
__________________

supermonkey07 (11:45:01 PM): lol
(11:45:03 PM): silly sheep
(11:45:10 PM): trying to act like people do
(11:45:14 PM): talk the people talk
(11:45:16 PM): eat the people food
(11:45:20 PM): but you're just a sheep
[URPG] [Links]
Reply With Quote
  #81  
Old 12-15-2009, 05:19 AM
Lunar Wing's Avatar
Lunar Wing Offline
Master Trainer
 
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: The Netherlands
Posts: 250
Send a message via AIM to Lunar Wing
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by sheepskinfuton View Post
I think you're right.

Actually, Lunar Wing, now that I think about it, your sentence should probably read "I didn't really need help, but Mr. Reylord said I had to." OR "I don't really need help, but Mr. Reylord says I have to." depending on whether it's a past or present sentence.

English is tough, it's my mother tongue and even then I still have problems with it sometimes.
Thanx a lot but it was really about the sentence but never the less it helped me :)
English is tough but really Dutch is so much tougher, I once managed to get an 1.4 on my test for Dutch spelling
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #82  
Old 12-15-2009, 10:37 AM
DarkGardevoir's Avatar
DarkGardevoir Offline
 
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: hidden in my avatar
Posts: 5,618
Send a message via AIM to DarkGardevoir Send a message via MSN to DarkGardevoir
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by sheepskinfuton View Post
I was wondering, if I toned it down a bit a lot for the kiddies, could I make a Silence of the Lambs Pokemon parody? :'D

My friend and I were discussing this this morning and it seemed magical.


@Lunar- Yes, though it should be 'need'. That's the wrong...tense, I think. (Or is it agreement?)
you don't have to water it down for children, as long as you put an appropriate warning in the title (PC-17, NSFC or whatever, i'm not sure)
__________________
My quotes


Vocaboulary Game
Quote:
MeowthMistress1: the alimighty ranger station
MeowthMistress1: we serve to protect you, just don't require us to spell or use proper grammar.
Reply With Quote
  #83  
Old 12-16-2009, 05:15 PM
Fever's Avatar
Fever Offline
Master Trainer
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: The Fridge
Posts: 453
Send a message via AIM to Fever Send a message via MSN to Fever
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by DarkGardevoir View Post
you don't have to water it down for children, as long as you put an appropriate warning in the title (PC-17, NSFC or whatever, i'm not sure)
This. (I think.)

NOTE: This "stick a label on" rule doesn't apply to sexual content. It's kind of like an unwritten law that none of the stories in URPG have anything - shall we say - "more" than a kiss. And if you mention anything else, don't be graphic. There are URPG stories out there with sexual content, but it's generally glossed over.



On another note, I'm ill again. I have been trying to grade Hakken's Magikarp story, but the exams, illness and family problems and stuff are getting to me. I'm going to try and remain active, but I'm afraid I'm going to have to give this grade up as a lost cause. The story itself is fine, but every time I try to do anything about a grade I get headachey and confused. I think it is using the computer that is causing these problems, so I will be taking a week away from PE2K in order to be OK come Christmastime. If I can get on and grade some stuff I will do, but I'm afraid I have a lot going on :(

Unless Hakken can wait until after Christmas, I request that someone take over this grade. It isn't fair of me to claim it and do nothing and I feel bad about it. I'm really sorry :(
Reply With Quote
  #84  
Old 12-16-2009, 06:15 PM
Ayotui's Avatar
Ayotui Offline
Elite Trainer (Level 1)
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: im guessing you know by now
Posts: 1,832
Send a message via AIM to Ayotui
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

hey, i posted this story a while ago, so im just wondering if somebody could grade this
__________________


URPG VPP
Quote:
BlueJelloJelly (21:16:43): Alex walked into the woods with his trusty Magikarp. Suddenly, OMFG a Porygon-Z appeared! Magikarp used Splash! The Porygon-Z fainted! Alex threw a Pogeyballz and it wobbled like two Diglett at a night club.
Quote:
lord khajmer (20:38:29): Bubble KO gg
Reply With Quote
  #85  
Old 12-18-2009, 03:02 AM
GallantlyGlaceon's Avatar
GallantlyGlaceon Offline
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: A little place I like to call home.
Posts: 955
Send a message via Skype™ to GallantlyGlaceon
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ayotui View Post
hey, i posted this story a while ago, so im just wondering if somebody could grade this
OMG, that DOES need to be graded. Ah well. Graders probably get a whole horde of work each day, so I'm not gonna say anything.

-Valiant
__________________
Quote:
[12:38:20 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: ...So how do we do this? XD
[12:39:20 AM] Sight of the Stars: it's nothing really big, just usually a note in your sig that's all like 'paired with soandso'
[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH" <---- Yup.
[12:39:57 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: XDDD
[12:39:59 AM] Sight of the Stars: and I'll be like "GALLANTLYGLACEON IS MAH HOE."
Reply With Quote
  #86  
Old 12-18-2009, 07:09 PM
Hakken's Avatar
Hakken Offline
Elite Trainer (Level 3)
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: New York
Posts: 3,439
Send a message via AIM to Hakken Send a message via MSN to Hakken Send a message via Yahoo to Hakken
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fever View Post
Unless Hakken can wait until after Christmas, I request that someone take over this grade. It isn't fair of me to claim it and do nothing and I feel bad about it. I'm really sorry :(
'Sokay, I can wait, although it's been just a few days short of a month now (posted on the 21st) which is a bit much for a Magikarp... well, I guess the graders must be really swamped. Regardless, I'm not in any big hurry, what's a few more days ;w; It's off the first page now, though, so I'll link (again).
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #87  
Old 12-23-2009, 06:59 PM
Eraizaa-kun's Avatar
Eraizaa-kun Offline
 
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Somewhere where there's cake...
Posts: 2,532
Send a message via AIM to Eraizaa-kun
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Hi peoples!


Well, I have a story that has been waiting for a grader for over a week, so, would anyone mind grading it?

Story

I'm hoping to enter it in the Winter Writing Competition. = )

Thanks!
Reply With Quote
  #88  
Old 12-28-2009, 02:35 PM
Pokémon Partner's Avatar
Pokémon Partner Offline
Master Trainer
 
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Hearthome, Sinnoh
Posts: 370
Send a message via AIM to Pokémon Partner
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Excuse me, I understand that I need to be patient, espically with this being the holiday season and such, but I've got a story that's been completed for most of the month. Therefore, if anyone would be nice enough to grade it for me, I'd be extremely greatful, thanks in advance!
__________________
MY LINKS: URPG STATS ASB STATS WOLF'S HOWL [PG-13]

Thank you, Shy, for the avatar and banner.
Reply With Quote
  #89  
Old 12-30-2009, 09:42 PM
Tranquil Leafeon Offline
Elite Trainer (Level 2)
 
Join Date: Feb 2009
Posts: 2,144
Send a message via AIM to Tranquil Leafeon
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Can I please get a grade on this story? It's been done for a little over a month now. I completely understand that people are busy and there are a lot of other stories to grade, but whenever someone has free time and is willing, I would appreciate it if someone could grade this. Thanks in advance to whoever does.
__________________
URPG|VPP
Quote:
Originally Posted by .NJ
More and more of these Azelf leads come back in later to spread paralysis
Reply With Quote
  #90  
Old 12-31-2009, 12:58 AM
Scourge of Amaranth's Avatar
Scourge of Amaranth Offline
PE2K Website Staff
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: I swear I'm not
Posts: 1,627
Send a message via AIM to Scourge of Amaranth
Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tranquil Leafeon View Post
Can I please get a grade on this story? It's been done for a little over a month now. I completely understand that people are busy and there are a lot of other stories to grade, but whenever someone has free time and is willing, I would appreciate it if someone could grade this. Thanks in advance to whoever does.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Pokémon Partner View Post
Excuse me, I understand that I need to be patient, espically with this being the holiday season and such, but I've got a story that's been completed for most of the month. Therefore, if anyone would be nice enough to grade it for me, I'd be extremely greatful, thanks in advance!
If someone hasn't gotten to these by the time I've graded the story I'm currently working through, I'll do 'em. ^_^

EDIT: And apparently, there are still WWCs in need, so I'll get yours AFTER I get the rest of those, provided someone else hasn't gotten yours first.
__________________

EmBreon is the maple syrup to my slightly undercooked crepe
{URPG Stats}--{ASB Stats}--{Fanfiction}
khajmer = biffle
yoface = broham

thegalleonman: (8:37:28 PM) How sad.
thegalleonman: (8:37:37 PM) I'm amused.

Last edited by Scourge of Amaranth; 01-01-2010 at 08:08 PM.
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT. The time now is 12:37 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Style Design: AlienSector.com