[Other] Kamara's Poem Collection

[Kamara]

Peace

Peace can be a lie
To those that lie
Peace can be hope
To those that hope
Peace can be guidance
To those that guide
Peace can be anything
to anyone.


Fighter

Punch for Punch
Kick for Kick
Sweat for Sweat
Those are the traits
of a determined fighter.

Victory is life
Defeat is death
Mercy is weakness
That is the chosen life
of a determined fighter.

[Sealboy]

I quite like these - although short, they're relative to the theme you're using and they work really well.

I'm not really good with poems, so I'm trying not to say too much xD But keep up the great work! :D

~Sealboy

[Graceful_Suicune]

I agree with Sealboy that the poems are very short. I do think that you could make longer ones if you wanted to, but a good thing to keep in mind is to write about things that are meaningful to you that could hold personal worth. If you do value peace and fighting enough to write about them, then good, that's what you might prefer to write about, but don't be afraid to incorporate things like emotion into your pieces to create things detailed with feeling. It's a good idea to draw from experiences and create something that represents a way you felt or something similar.

Keep it up. :]

~GS.