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Old 04-03-2004, 04:56 AM
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Matt n Vulpix - Journey in Kanto's latest chapter is great. Loved the backwards speech.

And after WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY too long, Chapter 8 of Let's Go is up!
Looks like Maria has a case of amnesia (not the attack, mind you). Tell me what you think!
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Old 04-03-2004, 06:51 AM
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I promised and I have delivered. The conclusion to Chapter 31 of an Adventure of a Lifetime. Next chapter... his battle with Pryce to get his 7th badge! Look out for it and remember to give me feedback.
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Old 04-03-2004, 01:09 PM
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Sorry if it seems like its been forever and a day since I updated The Blazing Skies. Chapter 7 is up, so enjoy!
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Old 04-03-2004, 01:14 PM
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Did anybody else realize that that in AAOAL and QOAC both Kevin and Nick are in almost the same place? Strange coincidence.
BTW, I should be posting more of MKPJ either tonight or sometime tomorrow.
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Old 04-03-2004, 02:38 PM
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strange @ Phoenix
cool @ Dr Skottie (Although I'm not nearly there yet)
Thanks! ^_^ @ JIG

The contructive critism that people are offering more and more here these days are making the board a better place. I just wish somebody would read mine and tell me what's wrong with it ^_^;; LOL

My reading streak is over for now lol, I can't take reading for another good week at least now x.xl;
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Old 04-03-2004, 05:17 PM
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Did anybody else realize that that in AAOAL and QOAC both Kevin and Nick are in almost the same place? Strange coincidence.
BTW, I should be posting more of MKPJ either tonight or sometime tomorrow.
HEHE, yeah I did.

And speaking of QoaC, I am working on the start of Chapter 39 where Nick and Blastoise take a break from learning Dynamic Punch to enter a... Sumo Wrestling Tournament? It will be up later so go check it out
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Old 04-03-2004, 05:35 PM
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Reading List: [Now Prioritzed!]
- "Adventure of a Lifetime" by Dr Skottie (Up to Ch9ish)
- "Quest of a Champion" By KCash (Up to Page 2)
- Raik's Story (Dragoni)
- "Mike's Pokemon Journey" by Phoenix (Up to Page 2)
- "The Blazing Skies" by Neo Pikachu
- "Let's Go" By JIG
- Nightmare in Mauville 2 by KCash

Actually, change of heart. Namely because of boredom, I will probably read after writing and posting some more to the story later ^_^
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Old 04-03-2004, 07:03 PM
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Dr. Skottie - I've read the story up to the latest post, and I can't wait for the Gym Battle!

Matt n Vulpix - Great entry. Pokemon catfight!

For Let's Go, I'll some stuff for Chap 8 later today.
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Old 04-03-2004, 07:59 PM
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Reading List: [Now Prioritzed!]
- "Adventure of a Lifetime" by Dr Skottie (Up to Page 2)
- "Quest of a Champion" By KCash (Up to Page 2)
- Raik's Story (Dragoni)
- "Mike's Pokemon Journey" by Phoenix (Up to Page 2)
- "The Blazing Skies" by Neo Pikachu
- "Let's Go" By JIG
- Nightmare in Mauville 2 by KCash

Just finished Ch9-10 of AOAL (o_O) and it was good. Satisfying. ^_^ Good job, but there were a lot of typos in Chapter 10. ^_^ (such as not capitalizing 'meowth', sayign 'meoth' etc)
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Old 04-03-2004, 09:51 PM
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Well I have posted to NPJ. The battle between Misty and Nick ends. Also on another hand, I just was too anctious. I couldn't wait. Comin To Life is back and I will post another chapter later.

Also Dr Skottie, Matt and Vulpix, WWW, KC, JIG, Phoniex, and Reena I can't wait for more of ur guys story. I am on the tip of my seat.
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Old 04-03-2004, 10:02 PM
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Thanks HM, your fics are coming along well too. I'll be posting more of MKPJ later today.
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Old 04-03-2004, 10:27 PM
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Reading List: [Now Prioritzed!]
- "Adventure of a Lifetime" by Dr Skottie (Up to Ch32)
- "Quest of a Champion" By KCash (Up to Page 2)
- Raik's Story (Dragoni)
- "Mike's Pokemon Journey" by Phoenix (Up to Page 2)
- "The Blazing Skies" by Neo Pikachu
- "Let's Go" By JIG
- Nightmare in Mauville 2 by KCash

Page 2 was a disappointment, Dr Skottie. Gramatically and spelling-wise, anyways. I saw many "Your"s when it should have been "You're" and errors of that genre. Also: dammit isn't a word, "d a m n i t" is however, without the spaces. ^^; And you'd use chat lingo every now and then (ex: :P, OMG!).
The storyline is going strong, however...

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Lot's of spelling errors again. I spotted a 'thru'! lol... Good storyline, but I mean, does your computer completly lack a ' button? Thats, kevins, Pokemons, etc? Meh... I'm off to read the remainder of the current story.
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You've learnt to use ', congratulations! LOL. That's all I have to say, im tired...

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Old 04-04-2004, 03:49 AM
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More Let's Go! Rita's old rival appears and takes advantage of Maria's condition...
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Old 04-04-2004, 09:15 AM
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Reading List: [Now Prioritzed!]
- "Adventure of a Lifetime" by Dr Skottie (Up to Ch32)
- "Quest of a Champion" By KCash (Up to Page 2)
- Raik's Story (Dragoni)
- "Mike's Pokemon Journey" by Phoenix (Up to Page 2)
- "The Blazing Skies" by Neo Pikachu
- "Let's Go" By JIG
- Nightmare in Mauville 2 by KCash

Page 2 was a disappointment, Dr Skottie. Gramatically and spelling-wise, anyways. I saw many "Your"s when it should have been "You're" and errors of that genre. Also: dammit isn't a word, "d a m n i t" is however, without the spaces. ^^; And you'd use chat lingo every now and then (ex: :P, OMG!).
The storyline is going strong, however...

EDIT:
Page 3 + 4:
Lot's of spelling errors again. I spotted a 'thru'! lol... Good storyline, but I mean, does your computer completly lack a ' button? Thats, kevins, Pokemons, etc? Meh... I'm off to read the remainder of the current story.
EDIT:
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You've learnt to use ', congratulations! LOL. That's all I have to say, im tired...
Hey thankyou for the critisim, its about time I got some . Firstly I will admit that there are quite a number of errors in my fic, not because i can't spell, they are usually just typos. The occasional spelling mistake doesn't really bother me, as I'm telling a story, not writing an English essay. Spelling mistakes are mainly cuz of 3 reasons.

1) I type fast and often don't think so that explains the "there"'s instead of "their"s and the your and you're mistakes
2)I have a Ms Works 4.5, you know, in the days before Word on my computer. So thats why there are those gramatical mistakes cuz it doesn't underline them green (or red for that matter)
3)Lastly my story is so bloody long I couldn't be bothered going back and looking for errors as it would take up too much time.

But, thanx again for making a point of that. I'll try to make it more accurate from now on. What I really want to know is what you think of the story, characters, etc...

btw, that 'dammit' bit... i know its not a word i'm writing fenetically or however u spell it. Its what the person sounds like. say 'damn it' and then 'dammit' outloud. There is a difference in pronunciation which is how I wanted it
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Old 04-04-2004, 09:31 PM
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Well, I read a bit of Aleyquala's story, Critical Kingdom Battles. Its a great fic and I reccomend the fic for everyone to read. The fic is in no hurry to be done and plays out really smoothly. Looks to me as if no one is reading it and thats a big mistake. This fic could beat a lot of the other trainer fics out there. If I would of read the fic before I voted in the awards, it would of gone up as my favorite trainer fic. Go check it out, you wont regret it. Keep up the great work Aleyquala!
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