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Old 07-03-2004, 07:38 PM
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This is my first time showing my work to people other that my friends at school so tell me what you think.

Just because I am in love
Donít think I cannot hate
Donít think I am weak
Donít make fun of whom I love

Just because I am in love
Donít think I am useless
Donít think I cannot cry
Donít think I donít have feelings

Just because I am in love
Donít think I cannot love again
Donít think you donít mean anything to me
Donít think that I donít care


I Am

I am love and friendship
I wonder why we canít be friends
I hear the distant cries for help
I see people getting along
I want peace on earth
I am love and friendship

I pretend that everyoneís friends
I feel the hope of others
I touch the soul of a lover
I worry that the wars will never end
I cry for all the lost souls
I am love and friendship

I understand that we arenít perfect
I say we should trust each other
I dream of having true loveís first kiss
I try to help others with their relationships
I hope we stop hating
I am love and friendship


Someday

Someday I will confess my love
Someday that boy will know how I feel
Someday I will share a kiss
Someday my friends will understand me
Someday I will go to college
Someday I will live


One Window is All I Need

One window is all I need
To dream about flying away
To fly away from my troubles
To fly away to my dream land
To get away from all this work
For what always turns up is yelling and misery

And that's only four out of many... And I must say that a bunch of them have to do with either love, friendship, light, or darkness. I have mixed feelings all the time and through poems is how I usually express them instead of talking to someone.... So, tell me what you think.
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Old 07-03-2004, 08:08 PM
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Default Re: PP's Poetry Center

Those are great! Magnifico!

But some seem sad to me. But they are still great!

The one I like the most is the one in your sig!
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Old 07-03-2004, 08:14 PM
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Thanks CM. Yeah, they are kind of sad. Probably because that's how I felt when I wrote them.
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Old 07-03-2004, 08:24 PM
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Here's three more.

I Am

I am light and darkness
I wonder why we hate
I hear the cries of children
I see the light of day
I want to live in peace
I am light and darkness

I pretend to disappear
I feel the chill from the shadows
I touch the black of night
I worry the darkness will swallow me
I cry for the ones whom have already lost
I am light and darkness

I understand the thoughts of others
I say to drift towards the light
I dream of there being peace in the world
I try to find the light
I hope to escape the darkness
I am light and darkness

Yet another sad one. Well.... not to me. ^_^

Haiku

The wind whistles around me
I sniff the pretty flowers
The water rushes


I Donít Understand

I donít understand
Why people canít understand me
Why people donít get others
Why the sky is blue while space is black

But most of all
Why people fall in love
Why love always ends in hate
Why good couples break up
Why you lose good friends

What I understand most is
Why people hate
Why they make fun of others
Why we stand up for whatís right
Why we make mistakes

Not some of my best... But I try hard.
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Old 07-05-2004, 02:50 AM
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I like them.


They are a bit sad though.
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Old 07-05-2004, 03:03 AM
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Thanks DP. And like I said... They're probably sad because that's how I felt when I wrote them. But you should have seen the poem that I wrote for this guy to tell him how I felt about him. Now that one was sad and... how can I put this.... touching. But of coarse he has it so... I can't post it. lol Curse my bad memory!! Oh well.... I'll post my others as soon as I can. ^_^
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