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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 02-19-2007, 11:16 PM
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Default Lies

Torn
Ripped
My heart lies bloody and beating on the floor

Lies
Your precious lies to me
Each one growing larger than the last

Like an ocean
Your sea of lies drowned us both
In depression
In unhappiness

You said that you loved me
You told me that you care
But were those feelings ever there?

I thought we had something special
A bond tied with chain
But it seems you found a key
And left me to be

Torn
Ripped
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A relationship of mine just ended, comment&crit.
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Old 04-19-2007, 11:27 PM
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That's a good poem
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Old 04-19-2007, 11:37 PM
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Default Re: Lies

That was so touching.
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