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Old 02-26-2007, 04:12 AM
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Talking PokeWars I Redux/Remix: RP->Fanfic!(PG)

I put some time into thinking about it, and I finally decided that this idea for an RP, not the best idea. Even though this as an RP passed, the second chapter did not. I did not feel good about it, and asked Neo to lock it. I think this is going to be a good thing for me. I need to work on my voice in writings, and start liking writing more than I am now (and trust me, I LOVE writing.) So, I decided to redo the story, and start from the begining, remixed. I love this idea, and it all started as Shadow vs. Mirage. Now, it's Shadow vs. Mirage Redux. No big change. The change is: Most of the stories, and extra scenes. This is going to be a big challenge for me. And I won't give up on this idea!

Here's some details about it:

Rating: Mostly PG because of violence, and some PG-13 for some adult terms and major destruction.
Genre: Sci-Fan (Science-Fantasy), Action
Main characters: Prof. Elm, Prof.Ivy, Prof.Oak (might be updated)
Time setting: 7 years after Ash met Pikachu

Let's start with a Greevil-Oak prologue! (This prologue is rated PG-13 for some adult terms and major destruction)
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It all began forty years before Ash met Pikachu. It was when Samuel Oak met Greevil Verich. Sam and Greevil were in college, trying to get a Doctorate's degree. They competed as best as they could. They each left ther mark on one another, beating each other vigorously in many scienctific affairs. One day, Greevil was experimenting on Shadow Pokemon. Working on projects to manipulate Pokemon, for example, changing/adding types, was illegal.

One day, the teacher there at the time, Proffesor Rowan, expelled him for his treachery. Samuel then sent an email to him saying how he will suceed in life better than him. Even though he was expelled, he did get credit for his years, and so getting a Master's degree. Greevil vowed to destroy Oak, whatever the cost.

And so, we come to three years after Pikachu and Ash first met. "Where is that file?" Greevil said, looking bloodthirsty. He was hacking into the college's mainframe, looking for the file they kept from him. Greevil was sweating so much, he could make a full glass of sweat in two minutes. What he was doing was illegal and death-defying. He could get in jail for fifteen years for this. It was stated in Orre law, that you could also get a $1,000,000 fine.

"Almost there...." He said. The computer was slowly making it's way to the file. "The file is corrupt" The computer said. "Agghh!" Greevil said. He clicked, "Restore file" on his computer, and it was so slow, it was worthy of DSL. About fifteen long minutes, Greevil read over his old evil plans with relief. "Ohh. Ohh! It's... It's... Diabolical. It's Cronological... It's... Evil..." Greevil said. He laughed in victory, saving, copying, and closing the file. He shut down the computer, and got off the chair, and onto his invention, the float-o-matic chair.

"This plan cannot possibly fail!" He said, slowly hovering over the ground, floating around his mansion. He got to the Shadow chamber he built. He just needed the info he vigorously found. He typed the info into the computer, with each stroke more anxious than before. He put a Pokeball into the chamber, and the chamber shot out a purple laser beam onto the ball, with a sound so horrid, it sounded like nails to a chalkboard. The ball slowly changed purple, also changing the beam a darker purple. "Ha ha ha ha haaa! Ha ha ha ha ha! Ha ha *cough*" Greevil laughed, while the beam stopped, and the ball black.

He took hold of the ball, and threw it right in front of him barely using much energy. A black beam shot out of the ball with speed that could surpass a bullet. A giant, purple, monsterous Lugia was formed from the black beam. "Now Lugia, show me your ultimate power!" Greevil said, jumping onto Lugia from the float-o-matic. He then pointed to a village in front of his mansion, and said, "Now, Lugia, attack!" Lugia opened it's mouth, and a purple energy started to form. Then, with great force, a purple and white beam came out of his mouth with great speed. With the force of ten hyper beams, it nearly destroyed the villiage. "I never liked them anyway." Greevil said, chuckling.

In the Kanto region, Oak was having difficulties. There was a virus on his computer. "This computer better not have trojans as well. I hope Tracey hasn't been looking at pornographics again!" Oak said with anger. "TRACEY! GET YOUR BOTTOM OVER HERE!" Oak said with rage. "What?" Tracey said. "Have you been looking at porn again?" Oak said. "Oak, I'm in hentai right now! Besides, I only do that on my laptop now." Tracey said. "I think that counts. Does it?" Oak said. Tracey shrugged. "Then how come there is this virus?" Oak said. "Hmm. Let me see." Tracey said. He clicked,"Start Sweep" on the Ninjask Sweeper program. It said "1 hack in history".

"How could this be?" Oak said. "Tracey shrugged. "You're supposed to be SMART!" Oak said. "Yeah, a smart a- wait a sec." Tracey said. "ALL HAIL SHADOW POKEMON... ALL HAIL SHADOW POKEMON" The computer spontaniously said. "Where have I heard this breed before..." Oak said. "What? This is a breed?" Tracey said. "Actually, a type. Someone in the univerisity I went to made Shadow Pokemon, and got expelled by my teacher, Professor Rowan." Oak said.

"Really?" Tracey said, not beliving the situation. Oak nodded gravely. "We may soon be dealing with a dictator." Oak said. "I don't belive this." Tracey said. "Neither do I, Tracey." Oak noted. "Not what I meant, but still." Tracey sighed. They stood gravely, looking at the virus, and the computer said,"ALL HAIL SHADOW POKEMON... ALL HAIL SHADOW POKEMON...."
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Chapters Index(for easy access):
This Post - Oak Prologue
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...50&postcount=4-Invention Prologue
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...8&postcount=10 - Dr.Yung Prologue
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...2&postcount=11 - Begining - Lapras vs. Milotic http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...8&postcount=12 Oak's Lab- the Shadow story
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...0&postcount=13 Elm's Lab- The Vacation Secret
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...4&postcount=15 Ivy's backyard ocean- The discovery of Delhindae

Elm's current Pokemon owned:
Lapras
Corsola
Delphindae

Elm's Lab Pokemon:
Quilava
Treecko
Cyndaquil
Totadile
Chickorita
Ferlagatr
Bayleaf

Oak's Current Pokemon:
Dragonite
Pidgey

Oak's Lab Pokemon:
Dratini
Charmander
Charazard
Bulbasaur
Squirtle

Delia's Pokemon:
Mr. Mime (Ms. Mime)
Mime Jr. (Shiny)

Ash's Pokemon:
Pikachu
Aipom

Yung's Mirage Pokemon:
TBA

Greevil's Shadow Pokemon:
Lugia
Ditto

Ivy's Pokemon:
Kingdra

Ivy's Lab Pokemon:
To be announced

Fakemon Pics:

Delphindae: (female) (male)
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Good story, but when someone else starts talking you're sopposed to start a new paragraph, this makes it easier to read and understand who is talking
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Good story, but when someone else starts talking you're sopposed to start a new paragraph, this makes it easier to read and understand who is talking
Thanks. I will do that. It's just I'm used to writing this way. OK, I'll try it.
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How the current Pokemon inventions came to the Pokemon world- The Prologue
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It was fifteen years before Ash and Pikachu met. Elm was competing against Krane, sort of like what Oak and Greevil did. Except, there was something different. One day, the Diproffesor Project came to town. To the event, Prof.Hastlings, the official at the time, explained the situation.

“The Diprofessor Project. Where two students work with each other to make something that will improve the Pokemon world. This event is not vital to your grades, so you do not have to participate. But it would look great on a resume.” Hastlings said.

“Are you going to do it?” Elm said.

“I dunno.” Krane said.

“If you wish to participate, Oak and I will pick your partners.” Hastlings said.

“But don’t back down. Once again, this will be a boost on your resume. The choice is yours and yours alone.” Oak reassured.

Elm raised his hand. “Is there something in particular that the Ministry of Science is looking for?”

“No, just something that will help trainers and or Pokemon.” Hastlings replied. “Any more questions? Good. Now, if you want to participate, please put your name in this computer.” He walked out of the room and got a computer.

“Now, there are five science classes around the campus. If you are in one of those classes, and you want to enter, just ask the teacher, and he’ll help you. Just make sure you do it once.” Oak said.

“Then, in two hours next week, the names will be randomized into pairs. Meaning, it will pick your partners for you this year, instead of putting a slip in a giant bowl and we pick two slips.” Hastlings said.

“I like the previous endeavor better, but if modern is better, we better go along with it. I remember what happened last decade…” Oak commented.

“As of this moment… The Diprofessor project has begun.” Hastlings said.

Elm and Krane entered hoping they would be rivals. But a week later, the final judgment occurred, and their wish, denied.

“We will now pick the partners! Ivy and Cozmo, Bill and Lanette, Celio and Birch, Joy and Yung, Elm and Krane, Plum and Rowan Jr., Payne and Ghalib, Greenbloom and Ghrast, Luna and Ghaor, Olivp and Fanke, and Katrina and Katie. Not very many contestants this decade….” Hastlings announced.

Krane and Elm were hoping to be rivals.

“Well, we’re partners….” Elm said.

“It doesn’t matter. We’re the smartest students in the class.” Krane said.

But, unfortunately, it takes more than smarts to make something. It also takes a vivid imagination.

“There is an extra rule, due to lack of students: Two pairs may make a quartet.” Oak said.

“Cool!” Elm said.

“So, Lanette and Bill? Wanna be a quartet?” Krane said.

“I don’t see why not.” Lanette said.

“Neither do I. Let’s talk to Hastlings and see if it’s OK.” Bill said.

After explaining their pairing, Oak finally agreed. “You four may be a quartet. It’s now official. Work together, and remember, if you drop out, it goes on your permanent record!” Oak said.

“We now have the final results due to two groups joining. Luna and Ghaor and Ghrast and Greenbloom, Ivy and Cozmo and Katrina and Katie, Elm and Krane and Bill and Lanette, Payne and Ghalib and Celio and Birch, and Joy and Yung and Plum and Rowan Jr.” Hastlings said.

“Please make your team names.” Oak said.

“How about team Gold?” Krane said.

“Team Poke’.” Elm declared.

“No!” Lanette replied.

“I know! Team P.C.!” Bill said.

“Team Personal Computer? Why?” Elm replied.

“Lanette and I thought of a project making a computer in a center where you can store your Pokemon safely. All you do is make an account, and voila! You have 14 boxes with 30 spaces.” Bill said.
“And next you’re gonna think of a way that will help the Pokemon survive in the computer because these things we have for capturing Pokemon are weird.” Elm said sarcastically.

“That’s not a bad idea….” Krane said.

“Huh?” Elm said.

“Think about it. It’d come in many varieties, and look like a ball, expand and shrink. We’d call it: The Pokeball…” Bill said.

Two weeks later, they were almost done with the different projects: Elm and Lanette working on the Pokeballs, while Krane and Bill worked on the P.C.

“We’re done with the five Pokeballs!” Lanette said.

“We call them, the Pokeball, the Great ball, the GS ball, the Ultra ball, and the Master ball.” Elm said.

“We’re almost done with the P.C.” Bill said.

“The end of the Diprofessor Project is in two days. Hurry and finish up!” Oak said to the class.

“Done. Finally!” Bill said.

“Let’s test it. Lanette said. Lanette put a Pokeball that had a Shellos in it on the Pokeball slot. The ball transferred into the computer. Then, a little Shellos icon appeared.

Then, Bill clicked “Return Pokemon”. The Shellos icon disappeared, and the Pokeball, came back.

“Come on out Shellos!” Lanette said. “Shell.” Shellos said happily. “It worked!” Lanette said.

Bill folded the laptop P.C. and said, “Let’s go to O’Pika’s and celebrate!” The first thing they did was go to their respective dorms, then to their rooms, and got ready for the occasion, after Science of course.

Bill put his laptop on his desk, while his roommate, Cozmo, was taking a nap. Bill opened a safe on his desk and put in the laptop. Bill undressed, took a shower, and dressed up. The others did the same, exception of Lanette, who added perfume, makeup, liner, and all the “party accessories”.

But, once they got to O’Pika’s, it was closed. They stood there for a little, and Elm decided to speak.
“Should we go somewhere else?” Elm said hoarsely.

“Our backup, Blue Graveler?” Krane replied.

“It’s better anyway. They have parties on Mondays, which is today.” Lanette said.

They decided to get to Blue Graveler, and have a good time. Two days later, Bill opened the safe, and got the laptop, and went to the lobby, where the judging was taken place. He met up with the others, and gave Oak the laptop, and Elm gave their team name, Team P.C., to Oak, and he set them a table to present.

When Oak, Hastlings, Rowan, and another official, Officer Jenny got to the table, they were ready to present.

“We were thinking; can we make a center where a P.C. is located in every city.” Bill said.

“So, we made this P.C.” Lanette said and pointed to the P.C.

“Plus, so they could be stored in the P.C., we made a new storage system that’s better than apricot cans.” Elm said.

“They are listed as: The regular Pokeball (our invention’s name), the Great Ball, the Ultra Ball, the Master ball, and the GS ball. They each have a different effect on Pokemon.

“The Pokeball, 20% chance it will be caught. The Great Ball, 40%. Ultra ball, 60%. The Master ball, 100%. The GS ball has a random effect, and is reusable.” Lanette said.

“Hm…” Oak said, while he and the other judges wrote down their score.

“I bet you can’t wait to see your results!” Rowan said, and the four judges walked off.

Ten minutes later, it was results time. “The one coming in fifth, is Team DS, and their portable Pokedex replication, fifth due to being an innovator over a inventor. Coming in fourth, is Team Stero, for making special talismans to boost type power. Third, is Team Poke, for making a printer that prints stickers to tell which apricot can holds what Pokemon. In second, is Team Chancey, for making a computer that heals Pokemon. And in first, is Team P.C., who made a new portable storage system, and a computer that holds Pokemon! Their talents for being a inventor and a innovator have done them well.” Oak said.

Elm, Krane, Bill, and Lanette jumped for joy! Joy came to Elm’s team and said, “Good job. You made a wonderful device!”

“Thanks!” The four said in unison.

Hastlings gave a Platinum medal to the four, the Gold medal to Joy’s team, the Silver medal to Luna’s team, the Bronze medal to Celio’s team, and the Copper medal to Ivy’s Team.

A few years later, they graduated, and got their Doctorate’s degree, while something evil was occurring. Back to Greevil, after Elm and the other’s go their doctorate’s degree twelve years later.

“Ha ha ha, ha ha ha ha ha! Ha, (cough).” Greevil laughed. “This Lugia can’t possibly fail!”

“Graaahh!” Lugia roared.

“Now, back to the lab to plan the destruction of Pallet, where Oak resides.” Greevil said.

Greevil returned to his lab, and made more and more shadow Pokemon. Greevil chuckled some more. He made 100 more shadow Pokemon. 30 of them were legendary Pokemon. The other 70 were Pokemon that were powerful, or rare. They stormed to the edge of Orre, destroying everything in sight.

Greevil finally got to the edge in New Phenac City. Greevil got off Shadow Lugia and got on Shadow Lapras, who was genetically attached to a Milotic, making the new Pokemon, Laprotic, faster.

“Onward!” Greevil said, as the Shadow Pokemon who could not swim/fly got on the Shadow Pokemon who could swim or fly. They were going to make their attack on Pallet…
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For those who don't know, fanfic writers have the right to double post in their threads, according to PE2K forum rules.
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Edit: One more Prologue, then we're ready to begin!
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It's good, and almost flawless. Did you do this in Microsoft Word? Because I see no gramatical errors nor any spelling errors. The only thing you need to work on that I can think of is a little less paragraphs. You took Blue_Dragon_Mew's advice to the extreme a little. A little less paragraphs, that's all I'll say.
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It's good, and almost flawless. Did you do this in Microsoft Word? Because I see no gramatical errors nor any spelling errors. The only thing you need to work on that I can think of is a little less paragraphs. You took Blue_Dragon_Mew's advice to the extreme a little. A little less paragraphs, that's all I'll say.
Thanks. The third and final prologue is still in progress, and awaiting release. It might be done in a couple hours. I need to stop for a while...
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Looks good nuff nice story but dpnt put to many spaces......
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OK... I am halfway done with the third and final prologue. With many, many breaks. Hey, I have a life, too.
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OK... I am halfway done with the third and final prologue. With many, many breaks. Hey, I have a life, too.
Like we all do have lives I diffenetly like the story though
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3rd Prologue James Yung
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It was a cold autumn, about four years before Ash met Pikachu. The trees were brown and black, while others brown and yellow. What was weird this year was that there were no red leaves. Dr. James Yung, a popular scientist at the Pokemon University in Viridian City, Kanto region. He was working on a game system for to-be trainers ages 3-9. He was making a game where all Pokemon were available, and the price was cheap.

“Hmm. What if… I created actual Pokemon… From DNA… And enhancing their powers… That would surely give underage trainers something good to do!” Yung said one day. But little did he know, that it was sort of illegal. Meaning, you could make a new type, but only by permission of the Pokemon Headquarters of the World. Chances are, you’d fail.

He then made his studies public, and he posted ads everywhere:

“People of Kanto, I have made a new type of Pokemon. It’s called the Mirage type. It’s a type that moves about computers and listens to anything you say without question. They are Pokemon with almost all attacks attached to them. They are a somewhat lighter color than the original Pokemon. All I do is take Pokemon DNA and I can change it however I want. Worry not, they only attack in question if they are about to destroy or attack something.

James Yung
Viridian City
Pokemon University
Dorm 6: Room 27”

He paid for a showing of Mirage Pokemon at Viridian Square. Nobody showed up. Two men in black suits, sunglasses, black ties, and black suitcases. One of the men opened the suitcase and took out a piece of paper and read it.

“You are under arrest for the crime of inventing a new type with out Pokemon World Headquarters’ knowledge present and proper papers. You have the right to remain silent.” He said, putting handcuffs on Yung.

But Yung still had a trick up his sleeve. “Alakazam! Come out of the system and push them away!” Yung said, and a lightly colored Alakazam came out and lifted it’s spoons. His eyes turned blue, and the men hassling Yung flew in the air, and came down with a thud.

“Linoone, come out and use Slash on these handcuffs!” Yung said. Surely, a Linoone came out and raised its paw, and lowered in at full speed. The handcuffs split apart and Yung was free.

“Linoone, return!” Yung said, and it returned into the system by data. “Alakazam, transport!” Yung said, as he grabbed the system computer, remote, and tile.

Alakazam raised his spoons; his eyes turned blue, and then and then Yung and Alakazam’s outline turned blue, and they dematerialized. They rematerialized right in front of his house.

“Home at last!” Yung said, and he opened the door to his condo, and a man with a dart gun pointing at Yung shot him, clicking the trigger, and a yellow and red dart came out at the speed of light. It then hit him in the leg. The man looked like the man that put the handcuffs on him.

When he awoken, he woke up in a jail, in a black and white uniform. He suddenly remembered the chip he installed in him. He pressed a certain spot on his body, and he rematerialized home. He made a chip that put a force field around the house, and the house took off. Literally. It was now a flying house.

He found a letter on his desk after takeoff.

It said:

“Yung,

I know you’re in the sky right now, escaping from jail. I won’t give away the secret of your whereabouts yet. Just promise me you will ban your studies. Meet me at my lab. You’ll know where it is when I finish this letter. We need to talk about clearing you name. The Pokemon World Headquarters knows you’re out of jail, and the Warden by now knows you’ve bailed. But you can bail for free if you meet me in a year from today. OK? I know a year is long, but it’ll have to suffice.

Professor Oak"
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Begining:

It all started with Elm. He was unique. He was a Corsola lover. He thought Prof.Oak was a god. He thought Prof.Rowan, Oak's teacher, was a bigger god. He had a room filled with posters of Oak's and Rowan's pictures. He was a Pokemon Professor, known as Prof.Elm. He was the caretaker of Cyndaquiul, Totodile, and Chikorita.He also paid attention to his Corsola afterwards. But, today, he was going to get a Pokemon major to his team...

Elm was walking in the Ilex Forrest looking for rare berries and Pokemon. He was sort of far from home, but he had a Quilava and his Corsola with him if anything happened.

"I wonder where I can find a pond. Legend has it, there is a rare Pokemon called Feebas are in the lake." Elm muttered to himself.

Elm kept on walking, and soon found a Pokemon with three frog-like toes, a tail, a red belly, and a frog-like face.

"Treecko, the tree frog Pokemon. This Pokemon is a cool, collected and never panics in any situation. If a Pokemon bigger than Treecko challenged it, Treecko will not back down." The Pokedex said.

"Hm. A Treecko..." Elm said. "Go, Pokeball!" Elm said. The Pokeball circled as it flew in the air, and hit Treecko with a thud. The ball was shaking vehemently, without stop. "Poo." The ball beeped.

"Yes! I got a Treecko!" Elm said. Suddenly, a bush at the side shook. It shook and shook without stop, and then, a peculiar sound came from above. Elm looked at the bush, and it wasn't shaking anymore. "Strange..." Elm said.

"Quil! Ava!" Quilava growled. "Corso. La!" Corsola sensed something.

"Corsola? Quilava? Wh-wh-what's there?" Elm said. "Go, Treecko!" Elm said. Treecko came out of the ball, and then also sensing something.

"Corsol!" Corsola was running to the bush that shook. Corsola went through the bush and stopped. At the other side, to Elm's amusement, was a pond. A totally white fish was in the pond.

"The, fish Pokemon, is evolving! That's that weird sound!" Elm said.

"Milotic..." A Milotic said.

"Milotic live at the bottom of large lakes. In spite of the fact of the evolved form of Feebas, this Pokemon is quite beautiful. But to recent studies, The Pokemon Lapras seems to be aggresive with this Pokemon, which is why they live on the bottom of lakes." The Pokedex said.

Elm looked further at the pond. It wasn't a pond, it was a lake! "A lake. So, if a Milotic is here, chances are, there's a Lapras around here somewhere.." Elm said.

Suddenly, a Lapras seemed to swim out to shore, singing it cry. "Whaa? Whaa?" Lapras said. Lapras spotted the Milotic right away, and started moving torwards Elm. The Lapras started to glow.

"Hmm..." Elm said, almost thinking Lapras used telepathy to go into Elm's mind. Lapras glowed a deeper blue. Milotic glowed a deep red.

"Milo!" Milotic growled. "Whaa!" They swam torwards each other fast, like somebody shot a gun in the air. They started with a tackle on each other that sounded like a bomb went off. Lapras started to use a Psychic attack. Milotic quickly grew a huge waterball in it's mouth and used a Water Pulse. Stopping the Water Pulse dead, Psychic boomed the water with twice the speed with double the damage onto Lapras.

"Tree..." Trecko said, inching torwards Lapras. "Tree.. Co co co co co co!" Treecko was using Bullet Seed on Milotic. Lapras saw this and lifted Treecko onto Lapras as Lapras started to use a Hydro Pump. With Treecko still spitting seeds, it gave Lapras the advantage to swallow a great deal of water with it's fins. Slowly, Lapras built up water in it's neck, body, and mouth.

"Whaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaa!" Lapras said, as a full speed Hydro Pump came out and hit Milotic directly.

"Milo..." Milotic cried, and sank down into the water. Corsola, Quilava, Treecko, and Lapras all cheered.

"Lapras... Treecko... Great job." Elm said. Lapras nuzzled Elm's shoulder. "Well, I guess it's time to say goodbye..." Elm said. "Whaa?" Lapras said with great disbelif.

Then, as if the Pokedex read minds, the Pokedex got range with Lapras and gave info. "Lapras, the Transport Pokemon. This Pokemon was not rare until now. Lapras were popular for transports, and were hunted down. Legend says that a Lapras will pick a trainer for itself. If the trainer doesn't accept, the trainer will be frozen for eternity."

"Not that I don't want to be frozen for eternity, I'd like you on my team. Are you willing to go with me?" Elm said.

"Whaaa!" Lapras said in great happiness.

"Go, Net Ball!" Elm said. The Net Ball swivelled, and hit Lapras. The ball did not shake much. "Poo." The Net Ball beeped. "I got a Lapras!" Elm said. "Return, Treecko, Corsola!" Elm said.

Inisde the ball, Lapras was smiling.
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Oak’s lab
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10 years after the three years before Pikachu met Ash virus fiasco, Oak finally fixed the computer. Oak was looking all over his College yearbook, trying to find the person who invented Shadow Pokemon. He had been over the book about eight times now, and couldn’t find him. He tried online, he tried search engines like Magnamite, Ask Rowan, Miloootic!, and Abroogle. It was impossible to find him. He knew only one person who could know.

“Hello?” Oak said on the phone.

“Good evening. This is Prof. Rowan’s secretary, Jorgie, located in Sinnoh. How may I help you?” A lady said.

“Hello Jorgie, this is Prof. Oak.” Oak said.

“Oh! Hello Professor, I’ll get you Rowan right now.” Jorgie said.

“Hello?” a hoarse voice said, and coughed a little bit.

“Professor Rowan, is that you?” Oak said.

“Oak (cough), now is not (cough) the time. I’ve got a horr-(cough)-ible cold. Can you call later?” Rowan said.

“Fine. It was kind of important.” Oak said, slamming the phone. “Hmph. The only one who can help me, and he doesn’t give a rat’s behind. Well, there’s always Prof. Greenbloom Sr., the famous legendary Pokemon Professor.” Oak thought.

“Hello, this is Prof. Greenbloom Sr., and I’m afraid I’m not at the phone at the moment (Oak slams foot), if you’d like to leave a message, please leave one after the beep. BEEP!” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“You know, you’re famous for those prank phone failures.” Oak said.

“You say that all the time Oak, all the time. So, what brings you up? I thought I saw a Raikou, and then my cell rang. I hope it’s important, because when I see legendary Pokemon and I’m interrupted, I get mad. So does my daughter, Guinevere. She swore she saw a Latias.” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“Do you remember anyone in college who made shadow Pokemon?” Oak said.

“Oh, Greevil Verich? He’s a tycoon now. He owns both Miloootic! and Magnamite, and is about to buy out Abroogle. He also owns AT&P, Carizon, Milox, and Jibell.” He said.

“You don’t say.” Oak said.

“That’s not ALL he owns. He also owns towns, cities, he does own a tribe too, the Sung Bae Yoo tribe.” Greenbloom said. “Plus, he has Pika-Cola, and Pachirisi was glad they didn’t get bought out. They wouldn’t take any amount of money Greevil gave them.” He continued.

“Not the Sung Bae Yoo tribe!” Oak said.

“I’m afraid so. He’s the biggest tycoon. I haven’t told you half the companies he bought out. He’s a strait-up Monopoly!” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“Pachirisi’s soda’s better than Pika-Cola, so I’m glad he bought that sorry company. I’m glad they changed from Pachirisi-Cola to Pachirisi. I think they almost got sued.” Oak said.

“Not the point. His cottage is in Orre. He lives in Tamyo Town near Phenac City. He has a huge mansion there. And that’s just his winter home!” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“Any chance you can come with me? I’ve heard about Lugia sightings in Orre.” Oak offered.

“Hmm. You’re on! This will boost my legendary Pokemon seen list.” Greenbloom said.

“How many have you seen?” Oak said.

“Well, I’ve seen the four Regi’s…” Greenbloom said.

“I thought there was three! A few years ago, Ash Ketchum battled a Regirock, a Registeel, and a Regice. There’s a poll that comes around the world, in each city, to see which way they’d rather call Regice: Reg-e-ice, or Reg-ice. I’m voting for Reg-e-ice.” Oak said.

“Well, to my recent studies, there is a fourth, the leader, Regigigas. It’s a Normal type Pokemon found in the Sinnoh region…” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“Any other Pokemon?” Oak said.

“A Raikou, a Ho-oh, a Zapdos, a Sheimi, and I almost saw a Mew.” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“Impressive. So, you’ll be at my house ready to leave when?” Oak said.

“Uh, in about, err, give or take two days.” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“OK. Bye.” Oak said.

“See you there.” Greenbloom said.

The next morning, Oak was having a batch of pancakes. Spreading the butter, he carefully rubbed the butter knife against the pancake. He cut it up, and put low fat sugar on the pancake. He slowly ate it, one piece at a time; and someone was at the door.

“And I didn’t even finished my toast!” Oak mumbled, straitening his tie.

“Hello, Professor.” The person said.

“Oh, hello Prof. Birch. What brings you here?” Oak said.

“Uh, Greenbloom Sr. said you were going on a journey to see a Lugia and visit an old friend. May I tag along?” Birch asked.

“Well, uh, we already booked the flight, and you’d have to buy your own ticket and-“ Oak said, but Birch interrupted.

“Fine! Prof. Elm wanted to come too, but he’s too busy with a Blissey project in Jhoto. He wants to have a Blissey, a Chansey, and a Happini in every Pokemon center for maximum care.” Birch said.

“Well, he does work hard.” Oak said, smiling proudly.

“Professor!” Birch said, angry at the portrait of Elm and his books, puzzled.

“But he was such a good- Oh never mind. You never liked him.” Oak said.

“He was a show-off! But anyway, what are we planning to do in Orre?” Birch said.

“Changing the subject, eh? Pretty corny. Oh, fine. We’re planning to go tomorrow. We’re planning to visit Krane, my third best student.” Oak said.

“Who’s the second?” Birch asked.

“I’m talking to him.” Oak said.

“Wow, uh, an honor, sir!” Birch said.

“Ugh, you’re hopeless.” Oak said.

Birch spent the night at Oak’s house. The next day, Delia Ketchum came over for her daily visits.

“Hello.” Delia said. “Mr. Mime!” Mr. Mime said.

“Hello, Delia, hello Mr. Mime.” Oak said.

“Um, Prof. Oak, it’s apparently weird to know that Mr. Mime is actually a Ms. Mime.” Delia said.

“How do you know? They’re a really rare species. Well, how come you think this?” Oak said.

“Well, it’s because she’s been having moods. The kind I have had when I was pregnant with Ash.” Delia said.

“So, you’re saying that Mr.- or should I say, Ms. Mime, is pregnant? Well, even though Mr. and Ms. Have similar moods, there’s no way possible.” Oak said.

“Mr.- Mime….” Mr. Mime said.

“Um, I think you’re right. Uh…. Let’s get her to the operating room on the –5th floor!” Oak said.

“You have a –5th floor?” Delia said.

“For emergencies. Now come on!” Oak said, putting Mr. Mime in a wheelchair, and walking her off.

“Then what are the other –4 floors for? Oak? Ugh!” Delia said.

Suddenly, there was a knock on the door.

“I’ll get it. Oh! Prof. Greenbloom Sr.! Oh, I love your books! Mime and Mythology, Entei; a Pokemon or a Tale?, and, oh!” Delia said, about to swoon.

“May I come in?” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“Um, sure. (leads Greenbloom to waiting room) My Mr. Mime is actually a Ms. Mime.” Delia said.

“That’s impossible to identify! I must see it! How did you, a non-Professor, know this?” Greenbloom Sr. said.

“1: I am a Professor’s assistant. 2: I read an article on it. And 3: It’s pregnant and is going to give birth any moment now!” Delia said, running to the elevator Oak used to go to floor B5, commonly known as –5th floor.

“Let me come!” Greenbloom Sr. said.

As the elevator slowly went down, Delia began to bite her nails.
“Mr.-Mime! Mime, mime, mime, mime, MIME!!!” Mr. Mime was screaming out in the background as Delia and Prof. Greenbloom Sr. got to the –5th floor.

“Come on!” Delia said, while Prof. Greenbloom Sr. was turning on his digital camera.

“Push! Push!” Oak said to Mr. Mime.

“Mime, mime, mime, MIME, MIME, MIIIIIIMMMMME!” Mr. Mime wailed.

The baby was born! (I’m not saying how, because it’s too graphic for children under… Well, let’s say 18.) The Mime Jr. was not pink, but white! Prof. Oak started to rub the white stuff off Mime Jr., and nearly dropped the newborn baby. The Mime Jr. was a shiny Pokemon!

“How come it’s pink and green, and not pink and blue?” Delia said, as Greenbloom Sr. was taking a picture of the mother and offspring.

“This is a complete honor, ‘mam!” Greenbloom Sr. said. “I’ll make a book after it: The mystery of Ms. Mime. That sounds neat!” Greenbloom Sr. imagined.

Delia was smiling at Ms. Mime, and Ms. Mime sliming back with a lack of energy, after indulging great pain of delivering the baby. Mime Jr. pranced around, happily, while Oak and Greenbloom Sr. were going nuts!

“So, when are we going to Orre?” Greenbloom Sr. asked.

“Hm. Let’s wait another day. Delia needs instructions on how to run the lab while I’m gone with about five Nurse Joys!” Oak said.

“Why five?” Delia said.

Oak laughed hard. “Are you mad woman? One alone, Nurse Joy cannot handle this many Pokemon I have here.” Oak said.

Delia could only return a smile you could only give if you were uncertain or were having gas.
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Elm's Lab
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“Oh! I wish I could go to Orre with those three!” Elm said, unpacking a box of mementos. “Hm. My first place trophy in the Diproffesor Project. Or should I say: Quadproffesor Project.” He said.

“Hm. I’m going to go check on my Pokemon. Lapras, how are you doing?” Elm said to Lapras in the pond out in the back.

“Whaaa. Whaaa!” Lapras said with a happy face.

“Tree. Cko!” Treecko said to Lapras.

“Whaa. Wha?” Lapras said to Treecko.

“Hmm. I wonder…” Elm said as Lapras and Treecko played with each other.

“Corsola? Where are you?” Elm shouted.

“Corso?” Corsola said.

“Corsola, there you are. Then, where are Quilava, Bayleaf, Ferligatr, Cyndaquil, Chickorita, and Totadile?” Elm asked.

“Corso? La!” Corsola said, and in no time finding the missing lab Pokemon.

“Guys, don’t hide again. OK?” Elm said. The lab Pokemon all shrieked what meant to be a “Yes sir!” but in their own little language.

Elm went back to the lab and packed the mementos back up. He was thinking of something to invent.

“Now. Let’s see. Ah! A device that allows me to understand Pokemon.” Elm said.
“What will I need?” Elm mumbled. The phone rang.

“Hello?” Elm said.

“Hello, Elm!” A familiar voice said.

“Oh, Prof. Oak! How are you doing?” Elm responded.

“Fine! And you?” Oak replied.

“Wonderful. So, what’s up?” Elm asked.

“Well, you really wanted to come with us to Orre. Why not?” Oak replied.

“Um. Actually, I’m not exactly busy… But.” Elm said.

“Yeah right… Oh, uh, Elm, if you’re not busy at the moment, why don’t you join us?” Oak said. The computer at a desk in Elm’s office beeped.

“Hold on. I think I have an e-mail…” Elm said. “It’s from Ivy.” Elm said again.

“What does that busy bee want now?” Oak said in a weird voice.

“Hm… She says she found a new species of Pokemon called Delphindae. She wants me to see it!” Elm said with major enthusiasm.

“Oh. Darn it! You’re too hooked on new species… Seriously, when was your last vacation?” Oak asked.

“About five years. I’m planning a vacation in two years to PokeWorld!” Elm said like there was nothing wrong.

“Oy! That is a long time without vacation. What about days off?” Oak asked.

“We’re allowed to have days off?” Elm replied.

“Oh my gosh, you’re helpless!” Oak said, nearly exploding his lungs. Oak breathed in, and out. “Well, I saw something you should have seen!” Oak said.

“What? A shiny Sudowoodo?” Elm said sarcastically.

“Nope. Try a Ms. Mime, and her shiny baby, Mime Jr.!” Oak shouted.

“WHAT!?! A MS. MIME AND A SHINY MIME JR. BABY?” Elm shrieked.

“That’s right. You know Ash? Well, his mom had a Mr. Mime, and yesterday we found out it was a Ms. Mime.” Oak said.

“Speaking of Ash, how’s he doing?” Elm asked.

“He’s on his… Uh… Seventh journey, in Fiore, lately seeing more and more Pokemon Rangers. He said he met up again with a Pokemon Ranger named Solana, who helped Ash and friends rescue a Celebi. They’re in Ringtown right now.” Oak said.

“Seventh? What was his third, fourth, fifth, and sixth journeys?”

“Third, Hoenn, Fourth, Sinnoh, Fifth, Orre, and Sixth, Sevii Islands. He really enjoyed island hopping. He said he met up with his old Pokemon Lapras there.” Oak said.
“Ash in Sinnoh… Who’d have thought it?” Elm asked.

“I know. He was disappointed there was only one Gym leader in Orre, and none in Sevii Islands. He hasn’t seen or heard of any gyms in Fiore.” Oak said.

“Well, there is none, right?” Elm asked.

“Don’t say that with Ash. He’ll get TOO competitive.” Oak said.

“Is it because of your grandson?” Elm asked.

“Yes. And he has had many new friends go along with him. May and Max in the Hoenn region, Hikari in the Sinnoh region, Silo in the Orre region, Aaron in the Sevii Islands, Solana in the Fiore region, and Brock’s been with him all along! Well, except in the Orange Islands before he went to Jhoto, and that doesn’t really count as an adventure. He was too in love with Ivy!” Oak said.

Wow… Elm thought. “He’s done a lot.” Elm said.
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Very good story I enjot it very much :P
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A third person who has reviewed my work. Finally! But Sapphire Lapras (almost called you pokeboy885), you are technically supposed to say something that will hope me improve. Unless... Are you being sarcastic? The :P and the compliment together, doesn't make much sense unless you're sarcastic.

Edit: I am going to do one story every other day... I might change that though. This Fanfic should be done by the time D/P comes out or earlier.

Lapras and the amazing Delphindae!
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After chatting with Elm, Oak got on the plane with Prf. Birch and Prof. Greenbloom Sr.

"I wish he could have come along. Everyone wants to get their eyes on a Pokemon that rare." Greenbloom Sr. whispered to Oak, trying not to get everybody's attention.

"Me too. He said he hasn't had a vacation for a long time, and he's going to see this new Pokemon named Delphindae with Prof. Ivy. Prof. Ivy discovered this Pokemon, and Elm told me before we hang up that it has a bond with a certain Pokemon that is just magical. Ash had the Pokemon that had this bond with Delphindae, but I forget who it was. It had to be something almost equal in size, and it had to be shy. Ivy told Elm it was a surprise." Oak said.

"WHAT? Ivy discovered a rare Pokemon, and I never heard of it?" Greenbloom Sr. said, almost feeling suicidal.

"I'm sorry. I would have told you, but, I wanted you to come along." Oak said.

Greenbloom Sr. grunted. Birch was humming softly and happily, as the plane started to take off. It was a long flight, and with that, Oak fell asleep. About a few hours after takeoff, they landed softly. Landing in Orre, the got off the plane, and Greenbloom Sr. started wiping off Prof. Oak's sleep drool.

"Well, you two got here just in time." Krane said, there to pick them up.

"Hello, Prof. Krane. How are you doing? Elm would have come, but he and Ivy are studing a new breed of Pokemon. It's called Delphindae." Oak said.

"And it's safe to say I can assume it's a dolphin Pokemon?" Krane asked.

"Sounds like it. Elm said that Ivy told him that it has a strong bond with a certain Pokemon, and he didn't know what it was because it was a surprise." Oak answered. Oak's phone rang. "Hello?" Oak said.

"Hello. I got here at Ivy's house about an hour ago and we're studing the dolphin Pokemon Delphindae." Elm said.

"Oh, hello Elm. So, did you figure out what the bond Pokemon was?" Oak asked.

"Yes. Lapras." Elm answered.

"Wow! Something in common to share. I do know that Lapras is a dying breed, so that must mean Delphindae is the same." Oak said.

"Don't give your hopes up. We're seeing if there's any places these Delphindae are hiding." Elm answered.

"Well, remember what you do when you see secret Pokemon sanctuaries. Remmeber what happened last time." Oak said. A couple years ago, Elm found a herd of Relicanth and told all the Professors what he knew. There hasn't been so much in that herd lately.

"I know, I know." Elm said.

"Good. Bye." Oak said.

"Bye." Elm said.

Elm hung up the phone and turned to Ivy. "So, how's the wild Delphindae doing?" Elm asked.

"It's fine. I wish we could test the Lapras-Delphindae theory." Ivy said.

With great pleasure, Elm took out a Pokeball, threw it in the water in front od him, and a Lapras came out.

"Isacc Elm, you are a maricle worker." Ivy said. The Delphindae and the Lapras slowly made contact. Lapras lowered her neck, and started rubbing it against Delphindae's smooth silky body.

Delphindae was a black-and-white Pokemon with frilly fins. It had a dorsal fin that was two feet tall. It's tail was frilly as well. It's eyes were silvery, though. Delhindae was just as big as Lapras. The two looked like a great couple.

Just suddenly, a net from above came down and covered Lapras and Delphindae. They couldn't move.

"What?" Elm and Ivy shreiked in unison.

"Prepare for trouble."

"And make it double"

"To protect the world from devastation."

"To unite the world in one nation."

"Cassidy."

"Butch."

"Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light."

"Surender now, or prepare to fight."

"Raticate!"

A man and a woman in black Team Rocket uniforms with a Raticate said their motto.

"We're here for the bride and groom." Butch said.

"You may now kiss your Pokemon. I now pronounce you good, and bye!" Cassidy said.

That was just lame. Ivy thought. "Go, Kingdra!" Ivy said. She threw a ball in the water, and a Kingdra came out.

"Kingdra!" Kingdra said.

"Poison sting!" Ivy said.

"Raticate, counter!" Cassidy said. Raticate took in the damage, and hurled it right back at Kingdra with it's tail. WHAM! Kingdra fainted with one hit of Counter.

"Go, Treecko!" Elm said.

"Treecko!" Treecko howled as it came out of the ball.

"Bullet seed!" Elm said. Treecko pointeed its bullet seed at the net and blasted yellow seeds from its mouth.

"Raticate, Hyper Fang!" Butch said. Raticate did as told, but right after Lapras and Delphindae were free. Raticate's teeth glowed, and hit Treecko directly. Treecko fainted. Or seemed to be.

"OK, Lapras, use... Huh?" Elm said, as he heard something weird. A light shined behind Elm, and Elm turned around. It was Treecko! Treecko was fully white, still shining, and started to grow. He evolved into a Groovyle!

"Wow..." Elm said.

"Uh-oh! Get back to the Raticate baloon!" Cassidy said, but it was too late.

"Grooo, vyl!" Groovlye said, as his claws on his arms glew green, and it hit the ballon that Cassidy and Butch were in, and it blew up, and they went flying.

"We're blasting off aga- I'm tired of that. We need to get a new diappearing linnnne!" Butch said as they flew in the distance.

"Are you OK you two?"" Elm asked Lapras and Delphindae. They nodded, and got back to cuddling. "How's Kingdra?" Elm asked Ivy.

"He's OK." Ivy answered.

"Kingdra!" Kingdra said in pain. Elm smiled.
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