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Stories Write a story to catch Pokemon. A Grader will then decide if it catches or not.


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Old 03-22-2007, 10:36 PM
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Red face The Hippocratic Hero

Once upon a time, there was a boy, about 13 years of age, who was aspiring to graduate from Caduceus Academy and become a doctor. Caduceus Academy was a medical school for the care of Pokemon. Their slogan was something that the boy always remembered: "Primum Non Nocere!"(pronounced prime um known no sear e, definition being latin for first, do no harm.) That day, the boy was going to earn his doctorate degree. The names were being called. "Kevin Scott Houghtaling as a medical assistant! Doctor Proctor, as a surgeon!" Then, an entourage of Nurse Joys. Finally, they announced the boy. "Ty Joseph Drawdy, as a doctor and surgeon!!"

Just then, there was a shrill scream that made Ty's blood curdle! " That sounds like a Chansey!" Ty said, coming to a quick conclusion. Sure enough, a Chansey, though red-skinned, was outside! "I'll decide the diagnosis later, but first, I'll have to put this Chansey under my care! Pokeball, GOOOO!!" Ty said, throw ing a Pokeball. A red light emanated from the ball, consuming Chansey and bringing it into the Pokeball. Ty knew that the Chansey was too weak to resist, due to the debilitating disease, making it much, much easier to capture. However, the capture is up to fate!

The End... OR IS IT?
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Old 03-22-2007, 10:57 PM
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Default Re: The Hippocratic Hero

This is really too short to be considered flash-fiction, let alone a story.
Please read the rules thread, the how to write a story thread, and the big list of URPG pokemon. Also, keep in mind that Chansey is listed as a 'demanding' Pokemon, meaning that you should have 40K+ to capture it. This story probably doesn't even break 1K.

Please add length, details, a plot, background to your character, and a battle. Then, PM me for a regrade.
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