Originally Posted by TVTMaster
Not bad... I would suggest you keep styles consistent. D/P type overworlds probably couldn't fit through the doors, and have an entirely different shading type. If you can, get people to make their overworlds RSE/FRLG style, to fit your background. Stylistic consistency is the key to a good Pokémon sprite comic. And maybe run things through a spellcheck. There are quite a few errors. If you have Windows (which is likely), just use Word's spellcheck so it catches pokémon names without twisting them.
ok, I'll ask them to make a frlgrse over world, and your right, I didn't notice that typo, I'll keep what you said in mind, so Da Ink and Eevee, I need you to make frlgrse overworld, or if you want I can do it for you.