{-Critical Advanced Battles-}

[Scorch Ry]

{-Critical Advanced Battles-}
Made For The PE2K: URPG Pokemon Story Capture System
{-Chap.1: The Doduo Crusading Battle-}
While Tony continues his journey throughout Kanto, he comes across a Pokemon Preservatory Zone, where all of the rare pokemon are kept for welcoming trainers to capture. Tony is now in the preserve area, trying to find his two-headed bird...
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Tony, with his Charmeleon by his side, walked down the wild route of the Pokemon Preservatory Zone. The P.P.Z. was filled with green, growing Pine trees, with Pecha Berries growing on them. The tall grass hid wild Zangoose, while bushes hid Furret and Sentret. The wild, green bushes grew wile Cheri Berries. The Cheri Berries were pure red, in shape of actual cherries. On the top of these berries were three long, brown stems for the juice to flow inside of the berry better to make the berries jucier.

Tony continued walking in the path of the eastern path of the Pokemon Preservatory Zone, wondering where his beloved Doduo was hiding. He always wanted one, and went to this place just for it. His Charmeleon began growling, indicating to Tony that a pokemon was near. "Charmeleon, lead the way," Tony commented as Charmeleon began running towards the pokemon.

Tony knew it wasn't a Doduo...because when Charmeleon stopped, he stopped near a river. There, Tony saw a black pokemon, with sharp claws. One ear was extended longer than the other, and was hot pink. This pokemon also had a gold dot on its head, and its tail was split into three parts, colored pink. The pokemon looked to be a cat as it began to drink the water from the pure, clean river that held tons of water pokemon in them. Tony took out his red mini-computer, known as the pokedex. It opened and scanned the black cat pokemon.

{:Sneasel, the sharp claw pokemon. Sneasel is very rare and can be very destructive. Sneasel are captured by few people, since many can't seem to find it, due to its fast speed whenever it flees from battle. Sneasel can't evolve, though is one of the most dependable pokemon there is. Its hide in the cover of darkness, awaiting to attack its foe.}

The wild Sneasel looked very peaceful, drinking its water. "Charmeleon, maybe we shouldn't bother this pokemon," Tony said. "It isn't bothering us, and besides...it will probably run away from us anyway." As soon as Tony and his Charmeleon turned around, heading back into the forest part, they heard a sound. "Snea! Snea! Sneasel!" cried out Sneasel angrily. Charmeleon quickly turned around, noticing that the wild Sneasel wasn't drinking water from the cold river anymore. It was now alert that him and Tony were near it...and unfortunately, Tony didn't know that this was Sneasel's territory.

"Charmeleon, don't bother that Sneasel!" Tony yelled out as he slowly turned around. He shook his head...he also noticed that the Sneasel was in alert that they were near. "Charmeleon, let's get away while we can," Tony said, about to turn around. "Char! Char!" Charmeleon said back to Tony, not following his orders. It had something to prove to Sneasel first...

"Alright...but remember...we are here to get a Doduo, not some scared Sneasel," Tony replied. As the winds were catching speed, the pine trees let loose their red and yellow leafs. White clouds began clearing away as Altaria and Swablu were flying gracefully through the skies. Charmeleon and Sneasel stared into each other's eyes, both determined to win their battle. As Charmeleon balled his red fists up, ready to deliver a punch straight to Sneasel's face...after hearing the remarks it said to it.

"Charmeleon, use Flamethrower!" Tony ordered. At once, Charmeleon proceded with its attack, blasting out a hot, red and yellow, dazzling Flamethrower straight towards Sneasel. But, Sneasel jumped into the air to dodge the incredible attack. Then, Sneasel's sharp, white claws glowed silver as it landed back onto the green, healthy grass. As Sneasel headed towards Charmeleon, it arose its arm, making its fist shine from the reflections of the bright, hot sun. "That must be its Metal Claw," Tony said, seeing Sneasel coming closer and closer to Charmeleon. "Charmeleon, counter with Dragon Rage!" Charmeleon opened its mouth wide quickly, creating a fiery, small ball in it, spinning rapidly. Just as Sneasel swiped Charmeleon with its Metal Claw, Charmeleon released its Dragon Rage attack. The huge, red and orange, spinning Dragon Rage blasted straight into Sneasel's entire body, making Sneasel fall to the ground, hurt. "Charmeleon, time for a Slash attack!" Tony instructed, pointing straight at Sneasel. Charmeleon quickly raced towards it and swiped its sharp nails on its body, hurting Sneasel more. "Snea! Snea! Snea!" Sneasel said as it arose from its fall and proceded again towards Charmeleon with another Metal Claw attack. "Use Flamethrower!" Charmeleon quickly blasted out another hot, temptering and raging Flamethrower attack at the wild, swift Sneasel.

Sneasel surprisingly jumped into the air, blocking the sun. Then, it fell down towards Charmeleon, swiping it very dangerously. Charmeleon scratched its face, recovering from the harsh attack. "Charmeleon, use Fire Spin!" Charmeleon quickly shot out a spinning twister, full of red, fiery fire! The fiery tornado twirled straight into Sneasel. Being lifted off the ground, Sneasel began taking damage, being hurled around in the Fire Spin. As the terrorizing Fire Spin attack went away...Sneasel hit the ground roughly, very tired. "This battle is over," Tony said. "Charmeleon, end this with Ember!" "Char! Charmeleon!" Charmeleon said as it blasted out a series of oval, sharp, fiery, red missiles. They had stricken Sneasel, finally ending the match! As Sneasel tried its best to get up...Tony and Charmeleon left it alone. But, before leaving, Tony left out Hyper Potion Food so that when Sneasel would eat it, it could get better fast. "Sneasel...when you get up, go ahead and eat this," Tony happily said. "This will help you." As Sneasel happilu smiled, it and Tony shook hands.....

[Scorch Ry]

After battling with a tough and offensive Sneasel, Tony and his Charmeleon continued their search for the pokemon known as Dodou. It was a brown bird with a set of two heads. Each head had its own black neck, and had long, brown legs. Doduo was very strong and competitive, seeing that it could dodge electric attacks. It also had two long beaks, one on each head, to perform attacks like Drill Peck and Peck. That made Doduo a very great pokemon to have...

Tony came across his second pokemon, which was sitting in a tree. It was a small, purple pokemon that looked like a baby monkey. It had a long tail, with the shape of a human hand at the end of its beige tail. Its small paws had a great grip on the bananas it was eating. As it sat in the Pine tree, it looked at Charmeleon and happily waved, saying, "Aipom!" Tony began getting interest in this pokemon...it was very cute. But, first...he took out his red, highly-advanced pokedex to scan this pokemon.

:{Aipom, the playful monkey pokemon. Aipom is of the normal pokemon group, and can use defensive attacks to protect its young. Aipom aren't used in battles much, due to the face that Aipom don't learn much offensive attacks. Though, Aipom are used in Pokemon Contest to win the contests for ribbons. Aipm love to eat bananas, so they usually inhabit pine tree areas. Aipom also love eating Pecha Berries.}

"This pokemon isn't for me," Tony commented. "It seems to not have power...maybe I should capture one later." With him saying that, Tony and Charmeleon continued walking.

Next...Tony entered the second part of the area: The short grasslands. There, he saw a new variety of pokemon, racing down the fields. The sunny skies were now taking effect into afternoon times, making the blue skies fading away into purple, pink, and orange skies. Tony knew that this area has to have his Doduo he was looking for! But, before he could continue walking, he came across another pokemon. This time, the pokemon looked like a horse. It was light, light yellow, with its mane made up of flames. It also had flames bursting from its leg area. This pokemon also had a horn on its head, making it look like a Unicorn. Once again, Tony took out his pokedex, which scanned this horse pokemon

:{Rapidash, the mystical horse pokemon. Rapidash is the evolved form of Ponyta. Rapidash can be found in herds, and they all race down meadows, in search for another happy home to stay. This pokemon can be very terrorizing and can emit dazzling fire attacks. This pokemon is very, very hard to capture, due to the face that it can run away in just a second. Rapidash enjoy eating Oran Berries, as for it gives them energy to run faster and longer!}

The wild Rapidash looked straight into the eyes of Tony, and galloped away swiftly. "That was pretty odd," said Tony. "Maybe it was scared." Charmeleon look at its trainer, and suddenly looked at a bird pokemon, pointing happily. "Char! Char!" Charmeleon cried out, seeing the wild bird pokemon. "What's wrong?" Tony asked. He followed Charmeleon's actions, seeing why it was happy. Finally...Tony saw his wild Doduo, just standing there in the open! "YES! YES! YES! I found a DODUO!" Tony happily said, taking out his pokedex to scan the twin-headed pokemon.

:{Doduo, the twin-headed pokemon. Doduo are very content, which makes them very powerful. Doduo can be very quick to respond to attack, so make sure to attack this pokemon with power, not style. Dodou's two heads may have seperate brains, but never argue. This is Doduo's challenge...to keep maintain with itself.}

Tony and his Charmeleon quickly ran towards the Doduo, making Doduo back up. "Charmeleon, hurry and use Flamethrower! Get Doduo's attention!" Charmeleon ran ahead of Tony, blasting a fierce, crimson Flamethrower attack at the Doduo. Doduo suddenly looked and jumped up the dodge, making the Flamethrower blast into the grass. As Doduo landed...both brown, fierce heads stared into the eyes of Charmeleon, ready to fight back. "Good work, Charmeleon," Tony complimented. "Now, use Slash!" Charmeleon ran up to Doduo, and quickly slashed its body area, weakening it. But, Doduo hit the ground and quickly arose. Then, its two beaks began spinning at they darted them towards Charmeleon. "That must be Doduo's Drill Peck attack," Tony said, watching Charmeleon get struck by this attack. As the sun began to set, Charmeleon could feel the heat rising. It arose, and countered with another Slash attack, only this time, it was more effective and stronger.

"Great work, Charmeleon!" Tony said. "Now, use your Dragon Rage!" Charmeleon nodded, taking orders from its trainer. It opened its mouth, creating a spinning, fiery fireball in its mouth. Doduo quickly opened its mouth, creating a white triangle in the middle. As Charmeleon blasted its fierce Dragon Rage attack, the wild Doduo blasted its attack, known as Tri-Attack. Both attacks collided, but with the Dragon Rage overpowering the Tri-Attack. As it struck Doduo harshly, Charmeleon looked at Doduo...and began to use Leer. Its eyes shined green, making Doduo glow green, also. Doduo yelled in awe, being drained its defensive power, making it less offensive and more vulnerable to attacks.

"Charmeleon, we have to wrap things up! Use your Flamethrower attack!" Charmeleon opened its mouth, shooting out its rampaging, ruthless Flamethrower attack, striking Doduo once again. Taking one attack and another, and still able to battle made Tony very impressed with Doduo. But, Doduo wasn't giving up! It raced down the meadow fields, towards Charmeleon. It began glowing getting angrier, running straight into Charmeleon. "Uh oh," worried Tony. "This must be Doduo's Rage attack! Charmeleon, time for your Fire Spin!" "Char! Char!" Charmeleon said as it began blasting a spinning, fiery, red and yellow, heating Fire Spin twister. As it twirled around on the grass, Doduo ran straight into it, but surprisingly, ran out to the other side! Doduo tackled Charmeleon harded, indicating to Tony that this attack was getting stronger and stronger.

"Charmeleon, use Smokescreen!" Charmeleon emitted a dark, tempting and dangerous cloud of smoke. It filtered the area, blinding Doduo with its sight of Charmeleon. And with the Fire Spin still in effect, Doduo's battle was winding down. "Now, use Flamethrower!" Tony yelled out. Immediately, Charmeleon blasted another rampaging, threatening Flamethrower attack. As it attacked Doduo, Doduo soared right into the Fire Spin, this time...it was trapped inside! As the smoke cleared, Tony watched as the wild, brown bird was getting hurt more and more. Finally...the Fire Spin twister cleared away, with Doduo falling to the ground, defeated!

As Charmeleon ran back to Tony, Tony immediately took out his pokeball. "Let Doduo be mine!" He said, throwing the white and red device at Doduo. The pokeball hit Doduo, opening and sucking Doduo in. As it closed, the pokeball began moving around furiously.

As the moonlight skies were taking over, you could see Rapidash and Ponyta sleeping peacefully. Tons of Noctowl and Hoothoot were in the skies flying. Even ghost pokemon like Gengar were out, just floating around the area. Tony wasn't looking at the graceful, peaceful pokemon...he was worried about catching his Doduo.................
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My story is now ready for a grade! I hope I get a capture...this story seems good. ^__^

[Scorch Ry]

Sorry For Another Post PokemonElite2000 and Mods ^__^;;;
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This story is now ready for a grade. I shall wait to see what my score is....to see if I get the Doduo or not....

[Jack of Clovers]

story:
this is the very basic requirement type story. all it's about is trying to find a Pokemon. however, you go through a lot of detail and time to find it while others see the Pokemon on the first try. good. it would be more helpful to know who the character is and more about him since it's the first chapter. first chapters of stories are mainly introduction of the main character.

grammer:
some odd placements of commas but nothing else.

detail:
like i said, good detail on searching.

battle:
quite interesting and nicely detailed. i could see enough of the battle to understand.

realty:
since the reader doens't know much about Tony, we don't really know if this could happen to him or not.

tips:
go for more story and plot line in future stories and introduce Tony more.

Outcome- Doduo Caught!

~Jack~

[Scorch Ry]

Thank You! ^__^. I shall continue to make stories to make captures/improvements. Thank You Once Again ^__^! *Bows In Happiness*

[Scorch Ry]

{-Chap.2: The Horsea Rage-}

Tony, with Charmeleon still with him, was now in the shores east of Slateport City, now with a new dream. After successfully capturing his Doduo in the Pokemon Preservatory, Tony now wanted to catch a water pokemon known as Horsea. Horsea was of the water group, taking characteristics of a miniature dragon. Its mouth was like a tube, so it could spit out Acid and use attacks like Water Gun and Ice Beam. With its baby-blue skin and the dragon wings set upon its back, Horsea was really the pokemon Tony needed...

Riding on a small, orange sailboat, Tony returned his Charmeleon inside of its pokeball and began to start searching for his future Horsea. The reason he actually wanted Horsea was because they evolved into Kingdra, with the help of a King's Rock. Tony loved dragon pokemon, and Horsea would definately be a great one to have.

Ever since he left for his journey in Littleroot Town, Tony's dream was to become a dragon elite trainer. Through his glorious dreams, Professor Birch secretly caught him his Charmander, his best friend as this very moment. Surprised by this action, Tony happily took Charmander and began his journey. Since the league requirements were different, Tony went out to travel and capture his pokemon before beginning to compete in the Hoenn League. Happily, Tony caught his first pokemon...the electric pokemon known as Mareep. During that battle, Charmander even happened to evolve...which made Tony's dream nearly real.

The sunny skies were brightly shining on the long ocean. Underneath Tony were a class of Wailmer and Wailord, traveling on their migration. They were happily swimming underwater, just like feathers. A crowd of Wingull and Pelipper happily soared above the ocean, awaiting for the Goldeen to come so they could nab them. This made Tony so comfortable, seeing all of these pokemon happily live in peace and happiness...but, it wasn't time to enjoy these things right now. Tony had to fulfill his goal. That goal was to capture the elegant Horsea he dearly awaited to capture one day!

[Scorch Ry]

Tony, still waiting for a tug from his Super Rod, sat back and relaxed near the fishing rod. He began thinking about his future life, hoping that he would finally get the chance to become just like his idol, Lance. He even admired his clothing, wearing a red shirt with those saggy blue jeans. But, something gave Lance his ‘personally’, which was in fact a red cape that brightly matched his fire red hair color. That made Lance different from everybody else, which what Tony really liked about Lance. Then, his other idol was Claire. Tony basically liked her because she was very beautiful and she had a Kingdra, Dragonair and Gyarados, which happened to be a very powerful collection of dragon pokemon.

As the Wingull happily cheered above Tony’s sailboat, Tony noticed a movement of his orange and black Super Rod. “It’s a tug!” Tony barked. He immediately jumped up from his brown summer chair and grabbed the pole. Tony gave full force and pulled the Super Rod back, pulling out his capture. But, it wasn’t time to celebrate…Tony had not only fail to get a Horsea on his line, but the pokemon was in fact a shark!

Well, this pokemon was dark blue with black stripes coming from the back of its body. With its gaping, wide-open mouth, this pokemon most likely knew the attacks Bite and Crunch. In its mouth were a clean slate of white, sharp teeth that gave this pokemon its characteristics as a shark. Also, on the top and bottom parts of its body were a fin, so it could glide underwater faster and a lot better. With its mean, red eyes, it glared straight at Tony. Tony began to back up, but then stopped. He had to face anything that came in his path…that’s what a trainer was all about. Tony quickly took out his pokedex, which scanned this shark pokemon. Its picture was shown on the screen and the pokedex began uploading its data.

{Sharpedo, the riveting shark pokemon. Sharpedo is of the water clan, evolving from Carvanha. Sharpedo can easily glide and sail underwater by using its two fins it has on its body. Sharpedo can be very hostile and they react very quickly to any unsuspecting movement. Sharpedo should definitely be approached with caution. Though, Sharpedo may be a water pokemon, but does not learn any water techniques. Its special ability is Rough Skin, which slightly damages the opponent if they use physical attacks like Take Down or Double-Edge.}

This should be interesting,” Tony said, taking out Charmeleon’s pokeball. He knew that by battling this Sharpedo, it could have a chance of evolving into Charizard. Since Flaaffy had evolved before Charmeleon, Tony wouldn’t be fair to use Ampharos. Plus, Charmeleon had to get used to defeating water pokemon, since it was weak against it. Tony was the kind of trainer to help his pokemon defeat their weaknesses by overcoming their fears of defeat and changing them into goals of winning.

As Tony grinned at the wild Sharpedo, a wild Horsea appeared from the back of the boat, waiting to watch the battle. “I choose you, Charmeleon!” Tony said, throwing Charmeleon’s pokeball into the air. As it spun rapidly, it began shining after reflecting the bright sunlight. It then opened, releasing out Tony’s Charmeleon. Charmeleon safely landed on the boat, right in front of Tony. “Charmeleon, get that Sharpedo!” Tony commanded. Charmeleon stood on the edge of the boat’s end, watching the Sharpedo float still. Then, Charmeleon took action!

“Charmeleon, get Sharpedo’s attention! Use Ember!” Tony suddenly commanded. Charmeleon took action and immediately began shooting out a series of red, oval, fiery ember missiles. They came in contact with Sharpedo, hitting it directly. Sharpedo glared at Charmeleon and suddenly disappeared! It then reappeared and tackled Charmeleon into Tony. Tony managed to catch Charmeleon. “Charmeleon, take must be Faint Attack,” Tony began. “Use your Ember attack again.”

Charmeleon leaped back into action! With its lizard traits, Charmeleon swiftly ran and jumped onto the sledge. It suddenly shot out another series of Ember missiles, striking Sharpedo once again. Behind the boat, the wild Horsea slowly swam closer to watch the battle better. It was definitely rooting for Charmeleon! After being struck by the attack, Sharpedo realized this Charmeleon was a lot harder than it suspected. It disappeared again and suddenly reappeared in front of Charmeleon! “Charmeleon, use Slash!” Tony quickly commanded. Before Sharpedo could use its Faint Attack again, Charmeleon slashed Sharpedo three times with its sharp claws. Sharpedo took the attack, soaring towards the ocean. “End this with Ember!” Tony barked. Charmeleon suddenly shot out hot, red ovals at the wild Sharpedo, hitting it directly!

Sadly, the wild Sharpedo fled from the battle! Charmeleon happily growled. Tony could tell Charmeleon had gotten stronger…its Ember attack was more effective. The wild Horsea began cheering, suddenly taking Tony’s attention. Curious, Tony went to the right side of the boat, seeing the Horsea! “YAY! A HORSEA!” Horsea suddenly looked at Tony and cheerfully smiled. “Aww…it’s too cute,” Tony said. “Let me capture it!” Charmeleon, who was now resting near the end of the dock, looked into the sky, hoping its dream would come true soon. “Let’s go, Ampharos!” Tony said. He released his electrical light pokemon, which immediately looked into the eyes of the wild water dragon. Horsea began getting scared and began to swim away! “Ampharos, go after that Horsea!”

“Amphar Ampharos Amphar!” Ampharos yelped out. It immediately jumped into the water and swam after Horsea. “Ampharos, use Thunder!” Tony said. Ampharos began conducting electricity around its entire body. Ampharos then struck the ocean with its electrifying Thunder attack, attacking Horsea as well. “Great work, Ampharos!” Ampharos happily cheered, but somehow, Horsea managed to survive the attack! From its tube-like mouth, Horsea shout out a blue, spinning stream of water at Ampharos! The attack hit directly, sending Ampharos into the sailboat! As it hit the sailboat, it began to rock above the ocean. The orange sailboat finally became balanced, and Ampharos quickly recovered from the attack. “This Horsea really has power,” Tony began. “Ampharos, go after it! Use Thunderpunch!”

Ampharos’ right paw was soon covered with electricity. Swiftly, the electric light pokemon swam towards the wild Horsea once again! But, this time, through its tube mouth, Horsea began filtering the area with thick, black smoke. Ampharos quickly stopped, though still ready to use Thunderpunch. “Ampharos, stay alert!” Tony said, hoping that Horsea wouldn’t do another sneak attack! Ampharos waited for the smoke to clear up so it could proceed with its attack.

Finally, the black smoke cleared the area…and to Tony’s surprise, Horsea was gone! Tony began getting disappointed, since Horsea had escaped the battle! “Ampharos, it’s gone…c’mon back.” Ampharos’ built-up electricity on its right paw went back into its body. As Ampharos safely swam back to the sailboat, Horsea suddenly appeared! “THERE IT IS!” Tony yelled out. Horsea shot another Hydro Pump at Ampharos, hitting it directly on its back.

Ampharos went underwater this time, seeing a wonderful site. A class of Wailord passed it by, but a pokemon came towards it. Through communications, Ampharos went back up for air, making things worse. It was right in front of Horsea! Horsea began chuckling, shooting speedy bubbles straight in Ampharos’ face! Ampharos was being blown out from these attacks and couldn’t take it anymore! “Ampharos, get that Horsea!” Tony said. Ampharos quickly swam towards Horsea.

But, it jumped out of the water and stomped Horsea’s head, angered by this foolish pokemon’s actions. Being stomped in its head, Horsea shot out another series of bubbles towards Ampharos. “Ampharos, use Thunder! Blow those bubbles away!” Tony commanded. Ampharos’ body began sparking little electric bolts. Then, Ampharos shot out its Thunder attack! The wild Pelipper and Wingull stopped soaring around and stared at the battle. Even Charmeleon managed to get up, very interested. The catastrophic, yellow, electrical Thunder attack struck past all of the bubbles and easily struck Horsea. Struck by this attack two times, Horsea laid on its back in the ocean, defeated!

As Ampharos fell back into the air, it began swimming towards Tony, carrying Horsea. “Great work, Ampharos.” Tony said, returning it to its pokeball. Tony was very surprised when Ampharos stomped Horsea in its face. He guessed it was angered with Horsea for using such great attacks on it repeatedly. “Now, go, pokeball!” Tony barked out. He threw his pokeball, which hit Horsea afterwards. It opened, sucking Horsea into it. As it closed, it floated in the water, flashing red. Tony just hoped now that he would capture Horsea…
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*This Story Is Now Ready For A Grade*

[Scorch Ry]

I shall await for this chapter's grade before I continue to Chapter 3. I hope it is a capture.

Next Pokemon To Catch: Scyther
Next Chapter: {-Chapter.3: The Scyther's Power-}

[Jack of Clovers]

sorry for late delay, i got pushed back with busy work 'round house.

Carvanha... should be Carvahna
“Charmeleon, take must be Faint Attack,” Tony began. {should be that}
some others, but minor.

the story wasn't all that interesting but it was nicely detailed, just like the battle. this is barely qualified for Horsea. try to add a lot more length to any story. however, the battle was interesting and not simple with the advantage electric vs water.

tips- longer, more story. and always improve everything.

Outcome- Horsea Caught!

~Jack~

[Scorch Ry]

Thank You. I Shall Start On Chapter 3 Right Now!

[Scorch Ry]

Chap.3: Route 32 - Scyther

The shine of the endearing, orange sunlight mysteriously beamed upon Tony, making the trainer have any revelation of Route thirty-two. Tony blinked his eyes, however, and both him and his Larvitar were able to witness the wonders of this route. Freshly mowed green grass patched the brown dirt of the long, harsh route.

Conversely, uncut, tall dark green grass grew in their state of wilderness. These patches of tall grass concealed wild pokemon, protecting them from upcoming trainers whom would stagger past. The wild pokemon also had special privileges of sleeping peacefully without having to look upon their right and left side of their shoulders, making sure poachers weren’t attacking them.

Elevated pine trees littered around the entire route, continuously growing higher and higher. These trees were perfectly planted around the route, creating a chic diamond design. Their fallen leaves tumbled down their rough, brown truck.

The leaves twirled throughout the calm winds, creating an insubstantial, whispering munificent sound. The trainer’s brown hair was blown to his right side, being pushed by the trivial breezes roaming past the two young trainers. The burning sun was in its joyfulness pride, glowing a deep orange color across the entire route.

Tony lightly breathed, tasting the clean, fresh atmosphere of this route. There were also flowerbeds that sophisticatedly grew glistening white roses. The roses had developed a pleasing aroma, attracting the wild Hoppip nearby. Tony inhaled this scent, the aroma white roses trapped deep within its simplicity. Also, leveled hills were magically scattered throughout route thirty-two, standing tall with such a clean atmosphere above it.

The surface was smooth, gleaming in simple pride. Piles of black stones were speckled on the leveled mountains, suspecting to be wild Geodude that inhabited the hills. Along the sides of the mountains, thicker, darker and potholed edges made the mountains had such unique popularity among both hikers and trainers. Altogether, route thirty-two had a remarkable, alluring appeal to all people and pokemon alike.

“This place seems very peaceful, yet enjoyable,” Tony thought. Tony looked towards the tall grass. A tranquil movement rattled into the peaceful area. Quietly, a tribe of wild Treecko galloped in front of the two trainers, scampering away toward the wild tall grass. The male trainer noticed these green geckoes, with their lean body that reflected a light green shade.

With their heavy, long tails with a sudden curl at the end, the wild grass pokemon stopped near the white rose flowerbeds, sniffling the attractive aroma. Abruptly, another wild gecko followed the smaller Treecko toward the flowerbeds. This grass pokemon was of the family of Treecko; it was the evolved form of the small wood gecko. Its slender body had a wonderful figure that dazzled Mia upon her spirit.

This reptile had developed long glass blades that stretched out from up under its arms. Also, an extended blade grew in the midpoint of the top of its bumpy head, extending down its slim back. Its feet were larger and appeared to look more dangerous that the feet of the Treecko. The wild reptile stopped in front of the trainers, gazing upon its pack of Treecko. The grass pokemon sadly sighed, seeing that babysitting active pokemon like this wasn’t in her future. As the Treecko happily played around in the flowerbeds, Tony turned to see this action.

“Wow, this pokemon seems stronger than those wild Treecko,” Tony thought. The male trainer settled his hazel eyes on the green reptile. The wild green reptile exhaled a tiny sigh once again, noticing its younger siblings were playing around in the flowerbeds that gave route thirty-two an even better fantastic glow in such magnificence. The wild grass pokemon hurriedly scampered off to make its younger brothers and sisters stop playing around.

Tony smiled in awe as the young Treecko stopped fooling around, having a sudden misery face upon their green faces. With their big yellow eyes, they stared into the eyes of their older peer. The wild reptile stared in utter amazement, noticing that they wanted to play around for a short period of time. Being such a nice grass pokemon, the wild reptile nodded its green lizard head, bringing tons of smiles to the wild Treecko’s faces.

The male trainer looked in sheer astonishment, seeing that this wild reptile pokemon was being nice to its younger siblings. “Ah, that was nice of it,” Kevin said. “Now, let’s check out the data of these two pokemon.” Silently, Kevin pulled out his red mechanical device from out of his red jeans pocket. The pokedex opened, revealing its many buttons and its black screen.

The trainer steadily placed the oval, clear scan screen upon both the wild reptile that was happily watching its younger siblings run around the flowerbeds, and the wood geckoes that were playing around peacefully. The pokedex scanned the wild reptile, saved its natural data, placed an image of the pokemon on its black screen, and finally uploaded the data to its hard-drive system. Having an electronic voice, it began repeating the data about this pokemon.

{Treecko, the wood gecko pokemon. Treecko loves to swing from tree braches by using its long, strong tail. Treecko’s tail is also used to perform its Pound attack. Treecko are usually peaceful and love to help plants to survive if help is needed for them. Be warned, however, that it mistreated, they will automatically evolve into a disobeying Grovyle. Treecko evolve into Grovyle, and finally Sceptile.}

{Grovyle, the reptile pokemon. Grovyle is the evolved form of Treecko. It usually jumps from tree to tree, gaining strengths and to also enjoy itself. Grovyle can be content, so treat this pokemon with natural respect and love. Grovyle develops long grass blades on its arms and on its forehead. This helps the pokemon perform its Pound attack and a new attack known as Leaf Blade. Grovyle’s next and final evolution stage is Sceptile.}

[Scorch Ry]

The male trainer listened to the glorious pokemon information of the two wild pokemon, notifying their clarifications. Soon enough, Tony continued their way down the well-designed path of route thirty-two. He continued gazing upon his views of the route, witnessing more passion and delightfulness. The rivers flowed superbly, glowing a darkblue tint as the rough waves flowed throughout the hefty, long water. Moving peacefully, a crowd of wild Feebas and Barboach jumped from up under the amazing water that seemed to also have peacefulness.

Moving their strong fins and holding their breath, they crashed back into the water, going into the depths of the sea. A brown bridge structure formed above the bridge, creating an alluring layout design that formed across the intact darkblue sea. The burning sun beamed upon the sea, giving it a mysterious sea green glow. The bridge was refined gorgeously, having a sheer excel.

The bridge was made of strong, pure brown wood that had proven to have to strength to hold humans and pokemon alike above the peaceful sea. This structure has somehow linked to the mowed green grass upon the plains, having a pure entrance to the walkway. Tony gazed at the bridge, seeing a group of strategic fisherman about to fish. Since it was summer, the Hoenn water pokemon like Barboach, Feebas and Whishcash, would migrate over to the wonder waters of the Johto region.

“Well, let me continue my way onto the Union Cave, since I do need to be heading towards Azalea Town,” Tony murmured. As the sun beamed upon route thirty-two in its single state of pride, the young trainer made his way onto the brunette bridge. With its magnificent, polished brunette color, the bridge was structured above the delighting sea that gleamed a sea green in color. A low caw filled the air’s melody as a flock of Wingull began soaring away from the tall green grass that grew proud in its state of wilderness.

“Why don’t I let my Larvitar enjoy this scenery? It has been working very hard on my team lately,” Tony convinced. He reached for the orb that was equipped on his red, leather belt that was made by a very well-known company known as “?Guess?”. Soon, Tony pulled his arm in front of him, holding the red and white orb securely. He pressed the gray button that was centered on the pokeball, causing the orb to expand. Showing its true characteristics, the pokeball glittered in the orange sun amazingly.

“Come on out, Larvitar!” Tony yelled out. Soon enough, the male trainer tossed up his red and white pokeball, causing it to spin furiously in the atmosphere. As the air carried such a soothing, whistling sound and a heavenly aroma, the pokeball shot open with the blink of an eye. Tony safely caught the pokeball while he witnessed a white form landing on the brunette bridge exterior. The white figure had such an attractive, luminous appeal. As the gleaming figure began shifting around its form, Tony just stood quiet. He watched this reaction in sheer astonishment, seeing that this was truly remarkable about pokemon.

Abruptly, the figure’s shining appearances began fading away. Tony continued witnessing this as the white faded and ended altogether, making the trainer’s rocky thrash pokemon appear. With its true characteristics and color, Larvitar gave Tony such a warming smile. The trainer bent down and picked up his rocky thrash pokemon, noticing the happy mode they were both in at that very moment. “How are you, Larvitar?” Tony asked. Larvitar smiled in sheer amazement and began moving its small little arms and hands. “Larvitar, Larvitar, Larv!” Larvitar cheered.

“Well, here’s your usual hug! I want to show you all of my love!” Tony yelped. He gave his Larvitar such a warming hug, showing its love and respect for it. Larvitar closed its eyes, enjoying the embracement it was now roped it. As it shot back open its red eyes, it suddenly looked in the tall grass that grew wildly. It began noticing a sudden movement within the tall grass, taking away the attention from the hug and bringing it upon this movement. Hastily, a figure got out of the grass and stood there angrily. “Larvitar!!!” Larvitar screamed. Tony stopped hugging his Larvitar and held it out in front of him. “Larvitar, what’s wrong?” The trainer asked. Larvitar suddenly pointed behind Tony, making the trainer a bit frightened. He turned around and right behind him, standing on the brunette bridge exterior, was a pokemon that he would of never thought to encounter in my entire life…

[Scorch Ry]

The shadow figure stood there like a complete statue. Larvitar and his trainer, Tony, looked in such confusion since they didn’t know what that strange-shaped figure was. “Larvitar, I think I have an idea of what this pokemon may be,” Tony whispered to Larvitar. As the great figure stood there in no movement whatsoever, the male trainer reached for his pokedex. As the red mechanical device glittered in such brightness, Tony clicked a blue button that was located on the eastern side of the device. Suddenly, a red door opened on the pokedex, revealing the buttons and the black screen that would hold an image of the pokemon in scanned.

Anxiously, the male trainer directed his pokedex towards the shadowy structure and just like he suspected, this figure was a pokemon. Soon, the pokemon’s image appeared on the black screen of the pokedex. The pokemon appeared to be of the bug-type group, having such strong white wings and two slashing sword-like arms. Its body was scaly as it gleamed in the state of its light green color.

This mantis-like pokemon looked liked its body was made of light green armor, since there were a few sections of its body that didn’t contain this light green structure. Its feet looked superior, having such nasty claws about. The pokemon’s head looked exactly like a head of a mantis, having sharp edges located on the top of its head. As Tony stared in the black screen, he began listening to the data of this mantis pokemon.

{Scyther, the mantis pokemon. This pokemon is of the bug-type group, taking the advantage against psychic-type pokemon like Alakazam or Espeon. Scyther has many ninja-like abilities and dazzling speed rates, causing its opponent to visualize more than one Scyther in the battle. Scyther can now evolve into a pokemon known as Scizor, if equipped with an item known as a Metal Coat. If this pokemon happens to hide in the grass, be warned that it will not be easy to find this pokemon since its color will camouflage it.}

Tony’s eyes suddenly looked up as the Scyther came closer and closer, moving like a robot. “Larvitar…this pokemon is a Scyther. It’s a rare kind and we need to get it before anyone else. Ready for a tough battle?” Tony questioned. The green tough pokemon stared as the mantis came closer and closer. It knew that it could win become the time was approaching today. As Tony stared down at his little Larvitar, he also wondered if it was time yet. But, he didn’t care at the moment. He was more concerned with capturing this rare, powerful, speedy Scyther.

Finally, the wild Scyther came in close contact. Tony could see the full details of this pokemon, noticing the same details that the pokedex had shown. “Scyyyther!” Scyther screamed, moving its sword arms up. As it shot up its powerful colorless wings, Tony stared down at his Larvitar once more. “You ready?” Tony asked. Larvitar nodded and angrily gazed upon the huge mantis.

“Larvitar, let’s get this started! Use Earthquake!” Tony commanded. His small green tough pokemon stood in front of him, growling with such anger. Suddenly, it jumped into the air with such power and slammed back down on the strong brunette exterior. Abruptly, the brunette exterior was torn straight in the center, being damaged from the force Larvitar sent through it. As the boards of the bridge flew around in the ocean, the magnificent force sailed away towards the mantis pokemon. As the wild Scyther stared in judgment, to Tony’s surprise, it barely flew away from the force of Larvitar’s Earthquake. As it flew angrily in the clean, whispering air, Tony and Larvitar stared down this pokemon in such horror.

“Larvitar, this battle will be a lot harder than I thought. But, you can do it,” Tony encouraged. Larvitar focused its mind upon the mantis pokemon as it began soaring back down towards it. Soon, the mantis pokemon suddenly soared down hastily, striking Larvitar with such sheer power. The green tough pokemon was stricken back next to Tony, with Tony witnessing the threats of this pokemon.

[Scorch Ry]

The green tough pokemon was in little pain, quickly arising from its terrible fall. As the wild Scyther flew vigorously around in the air, it stared upon this pokemon and its trainer. Tony, however, had to think of something for Larvitar to do so it could defeat this pokemon. “Larvitar, let’s try a Screech attack,” Tony commanded.

Larvitar nodded and exhaled such a horrible, noisy, loud screech that could even shatter glass. As the Screech attack began moving towards the wild Scyther, the mantis already began hearing the pain of this cry. It closed its eyes and began leveling down towards the brunette exterior just like Tony wanted for it to do. Even Tony couldn’t stand this cry, so he covered his ears with his hands.

“Larvitar, time for a Rock Slide!” Tony ordered immediately. “Larvvv!” Larvitar said, immediately walking up towards the mantis pokemon. Magically, the green tough pokemon’s red scaly stomach began gleaming a brown color. Soon enough, a herd of black, big stones shot out from its stomach, soaring straight towards the mantis pokemon in such speed.

Scyther still had the screech in its mind, but heard the command Tony gave to his pokemon. It quickly shot its eyes open, being struck with the boulders massively. Tony smiled as the wild Scyther was slammed onto the grass, cringing in massive pain from that horrible Rock Slide attack. Larvitar felt a sudden jolt in its body and it knew that it was time right now. Tony happily looked down at his Larvitar, gazing among such a luminous white figure.

Larvitar’s entire body was enveloped in a gleaming white color that shined amazingly. The entire glow even brought out the fantastic colors of route thirty-two. Still cringing in such pain, Scyther happened to gaze up, witnessing this sheer performance. Suddenly, Larvitar’s gleaming white body began morphing into an all-new figure.

The white figure began growing taller, but took the form of some cocoon-like pokemon. Tony suspected that his Larvitar would evolve soon, since he was training it hard against all of its opponents. Finally, the luminous shine began fading away from Tony’s new pokemon. The color continued fading away and finally stopped altogether, revealing the true details of this new pokemon.

This pokemon was just liked Tony suspected; it took the form of a cocoon-like pokemon. Its body was a faded blue color, having such a hard, scaly armor body. This pokemon appeared to have a mask as it head, having sharp edges around its entire rocky head. Three rock thorns sprouted on the top of its head, indicating that it was growing stronger each and every day. There were also two small sharp edges on the bottom section of its body. Its eyes were medium-sized and had such a nasty, mean appearance altogether. “Pupitar!” This pokemon roared, catching the wild Scyther’s attention.

Tony took out his pokedex and pressed the blue button in the center of its device, causing a red door to open once more. He positioned the pokedex down to his Pupitar, making the red mechanical device scan this new pokemon, upload a personal image of it and record its natural data. Tony quietly listened to the data.

{Pupitar, the rock pokemon. Pupitar is the evolved form of Larvitar, having more power than its pre-evolved form. Pupitar’s body is as hard as a sheet rock; making it stronger in each and every battle it takes part in. Pupitar’s move, known as Thrash, can even toggle a mountain and can disturb the wild pokemon that inhabit the area. Pupitar gets stronger each and every day, growing inside of its hard cocoon body. Pupitar can be very dangerous to handle, so treat with care. Pupitar evolves into its final form, a Tyranitar.}

Tony put up his pokedex and smiled in such happiness. Pupitar angrily hopped onto the grass area, with its trainer following abruptly. Scyther managed to get back on its feet, ready to take down this new pokemon. “Pupitar, we must get this Scyther,” Tony explained. “Let’s use Sandstorm!” Pupitar magically floated into the sky, making the wild mantis pokemon wonder with such confusion. Suddenly, a brown ‘X’ symbol appeared on Pupitar’s back and without notice, the entire area burst into a hidden sandstorm…

[Scorch Ry]

As the sandstorm brewed around route thirty-two vigorously, Tony placed on his Go-Goggles so he could see the action in the battle without having to cover his eyes. Scyther fluttered its wings, flying right in the sandstorm. It couldn’t see Pupitar since this rock cocoon pokemon was used to using Sandstorm attacks. Scyther flew around confusingly, not even noticing that Pupitar was right below it.

“Pupitar, use Rock Slide!” Tony commanded. Pupitar took the command and located the flying Scyther that was soaring slowly through the sandstorm. The rock cocoon began glowing a faded black color, releasing such terrible, huge black boulders. The wild Scyther happened to look, noticing the rocks coming its way. It happened to dodge, finally seeing the Pupitar.

Angrily, the wild Scyther landed in the center of the sandstorm, focusing its mind upon its next attack. Viciously, the mantis pokemon lowered its sword arms and began spinning around furiously. Tony and Pupitar watched as Scyther spun around faster and faster, making the sandstorm blow off everywhere! Soon, the sandstorm had deceased, making Scyther have full revelation of this rock cocoon pokemon.

“Pupitar, stand there. Focus your mind on using your Thrash attack,” Tony ordered. Pupitar closed its eyes, gaining as much power as it could to deliver such horrible blows towards the mantis pokemon. The wild Scyther charged away towards the Pupitar and slashed it angrily. However, the Slash attack did nothing to Pupitar, since this pokemon was part rock-type. “Scyther…the ends now!” Tony yelped. Pupitar was enveloped in a passionate red glow, shining with sheer magnificence.

Pupitar stood there and quickly charged back into Scyther, striking it with exclusive force. Scyther was slammed on the grass, cringing in more pain than ever. Continuously, Pupitar repeated this Thrash attack, making Scyther weaker and weaker. One last slam came from Pupitar, making Scyther completely exhausted.

Tony quickly reached for his one of his empty pokeballs on his belt. He managed to grab one of his red and white orbs. He pressed the gray button, causing it to expand. “Go, pokeball!” Tony said, throwing the pokeball towards the wild mantis. The pokeball struck Scyther and opened, sucking the mantis pokemon into it. As the orb closed, it landed on the ground, rocking back and forth…