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Old 05-15-2006, 02:28 PM
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Smile Hey I got some cool pikmin 3 storyline...

Pikmin 3: The 3rd Trip

1 day after the return:

Olimar: It's good to be back home!

President: Yes I know it's great!

Ship: Well it's good to have those purple pikmin out of my huuullllll...*zurk*.

***Spam***: OLIMAR YOU MUST TAKE ME TO THE PLANET WHERE THE PIKMIN ROAM!

Olimar: What is your name?

***Spam***: IT'S... IT'S... IT'S... WELL LET'S JUST KEEP IT AS SPAM.

Olimar: Ok now... Spam why do you want to go to the pikmin planet?

***Spam***: WELL... I NEED TO uhhh... STUDY THE PIKMIN AND MAKE uhhh... SURE THAT NO HARM WILL COME TO THEM *sigh*.

Olimar: Fine it's settled. Come at the Hocotate Freight at... 10:00 excactly.

***Spam***: OK.

Ship: *zurk* Who was that?

Olimar: I don't now.

President: *whispering to Olimar* You can have the company ship since your ship,the S.S. Dolphin, was sold because we were in debt.

Olimar: *whispering to the President* Thanks mister President sir.

Olimar: Ship I shall name you... Dolphin 2!

Ship: What do you mean?

Olimar: I own you now, the President gave me you because my other ship ,the S.S. Dolphin, was sold.

Ship: Well it is great to have official owner.

At Hococate Freight at 10:00

Olimar: Where is... Spam?

President: Here he is.

***Spam***: Ok I'm ready I have every thing I need.

Olimar: Good!Ummm... mister President I want you to come also.

President: Oh goody I just love the pikmin planet hey I think Louie should come to.

Olimar: Great you go get him and then we'll lift off.

***Spam***: Truly Olimar why do they have to come?

Olimar: Because they now the planet to, and its always good to have more people going then just two.

***Spam***: *whispering to himself* Olimar your really making my plan unsuceed *humf*.

Louie: Why do I have to come?

President: Because Olimar needs all the help he can get.

Olimar: Dolphin 2 we're ready to launch off to the pikmin planet.

Dolphin 2: Roger that.
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Do you like please do rate I'll post every month or so.
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Old 05-15-2006, 11:49 PM
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Default Re: Hey I got some cool pikmin 3 storyline...

Day 1


Olimar: *humf* This is a new landing spot. I shall call it " Enferno Basin".

President: Gosh is it hot or just me?

***Spam***: What is that?

Louie: Those are fatso's watch out they're agressive.

*2 purples holding a wierd object*

***Spam***: Ok, *writes down info in notebook* but what are they holding?

President: I think... no it could'nt be!

Olimar: What is it President?

Louie: Uuuuuuh...

President: It looks like an onoin piece!

Olimar: Incredible! *writes down in notebook*

Louie: Yo, fatsos whacha doin'? *purples glare at Louie* Not nice!

*Olimar calls purples* Olimar: So... how are you?

Purple pikmin: Pikmin pik!

Olimar: Good!

*purple pikmin continue with work* Purple pikmin: Buntee buntee.

*purple pikmin bring the onion piece to a half done purple onion, purple attach the piece to the onion and then the onion was done!*

Olimar: Cool a purple onion!

Louie: Uuuuuum... Olimar lookie *Louie points to a Firewraith*.

Olimar: Run!

President: Cant we attack it?

Olimar: No it's different than the Waterwraith, this time it's on fire so we can only attack it with red pikmin.

***Spam***: Incredible! *writes in notebook*

Olimar: It's almost sundown we need to get to the ship, grab the purple pikmin.

***Spam***: Why do we have to leave?

President: Because at night thats when all of the beast come out for a midnight snack.

***Spam***: Oh.

Dolphin 2: Ready for lift off in 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

*both Dolphin 2 and the purple onion lift off*

Status: 2 Purple pikmin found
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And do please rate it instead of just looking.
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Old 05-17-2006, 03:24 AM
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Red face Re: Hey I got some cool pikmin 3 storyline...

Ok I'm almost done with day 2 so hang on a sec.
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Old 05-17-2006, 03:28 AM
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Lightbulb Re: Hey I got some cool pikmin 3 storyline...

Ok here is something.


Pikmin 3: What's seen first

1. Purple Pikmin: 2 holding a wierd object bringing the object to a onion-like thing.

Olimar's notes: The purple pikmin are making a onion!Incredible!The purple pikmin are making a onion.Now instead of having to go under ground I can just simply collect purple pellets to create more purple pikmin now.

Louie's notes: You fatso in the back hurry up!*purple jumps onto Louie* Owwww, owww, oww get of!Hey not the face, not the face!!

2. White Pikmin: 2 holding another wierd object bringing the object to yet to another onion-like thing.Making it easier to collect whites just like the purples.

Olimar's notes: Now I can create more whites easily by collecting pellets and bringing the pellets to the onion just like the purples.Incredible!

Louie's notes: Beady red eyes and a thin body *hmp* you could be my grandpa*heh heh*!

3. Blue Pikmin: An onion with 2 blues holding a wollypog bringing the wollypog to the blue onoin.

Olimar's notes: If I don't beleave my eyes!The blue pikmin haved survived since I left.Incredible now I just need to find the yellow and the red pikmin.2 more colors to go!

Louie's notes:I forget was the blue water, fire, electric, poison, or all ...Olimar?

4. Red Pikmin: 2 fighting a firey blowhog by an onoin.

Olimar's notes: Here are the ones who started it all.They were the first pikmin I found on this planet.Glad that the're safe and sound woudn't know what I would do if I knew that the red pikmin became instinct.

Louie's notes: Keep your enormously large nose out of my buissnes!

5. Green Pikmin: An onoin stuck in a junk pile.1 seed is sprouted.The new spieces of pikmin has a tail.

Olimar's notes: Incredible this new speices can hop on it's tail and it can resiest acid (looks like green water).

Louie's notes: Nothing to say.

6. Yellow Pikmin: 2 on a tree by an onion.

Olimar's notes: Well if it isn't my eared friends.Glad to see them safe and sound.Well that's that all pikmin are alive plus one new spieces the green *whew* that's a relife.

Louie's notes: Eavesdroppers!

7. Pink Pikmin : 2 on slippery ice.

Olimar's notes: Pink pikmin wow! It has bird-like feet to endure slippery ice and it also has fur to survive the cold weather.

Louie's notes: Gimme your fur it freezing!

8. Orange Pikmin: 2 under a Beady Long-legs.

Olimar's notes: Armor-like skin and shell squish proof and explosion proof.Only can eaten but it takes harder effort.

Louie's notes: Nothing to say.
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And more to come!!
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Old 05-17-2006, 12:48 PM
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Default Re: Hey I got some cool pikmin 3 storyline...

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Ok I'm almost done with day 2 so hang on a sec.
If we're going to wait 'a sec' for you, then why did you bother to post that instead of patiently waiting and using that second to finish the 'chapter'?

First off:
- Who is Olimar? What does he look like?
- What nation is the President president of?
- Why did Olimar sell his other ship?
- What do you mean by 'Olimar's Notes' or 'Louie's Notes' when they are actually talking to the pikmin?

You really need to work on this if you expect it to be good. I would have posted more, but I have to go to school, so think about what I said and look at the works of great fanficers and understand how to write a proper story.
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Old 05-17-2006, 01:47 PM
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Talking Re: Hey I got some cool pikmin 3 storyline...

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Originally Posted by NightBreaker
If we're going to wait 'a sec' for you, then why did you bother to post that instead of patiently waiting and using that second to finish the 'chapter'?

First off:
- Who is Olimar? What does he look like?
- What nation is the President president of?
- Why did Olimar sell his other ship?
- What do you mean by 'Olimar's Notes' or 'Louie's Notes' when they are actually talking to the pikmin?

You really need to work on this if you expect it to be good. I would have posted more, but I have to go to school, so think about what I said and look at the works of great fanficers and understand how to write a proper story.
First off have you playd pikmin 1 or 2?

Well Olimar is a space pilot.Here is a picture off him...



Hopefully it works. Ok the one on the left is Olimar on the right is Louie.

The President is just the boss of Hococate Freight.

Olimar didn't sell the ship the President did because he was in debt 10100 pokos in debt.[FYI pokos is money]

Olimars notes and Louies notes are what they think of the pikmin.

They arent actullay talking to the pikmin there just writng what they are thinking.
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Old 05-17-2006, 01:53 PM
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Day 2

*both Dolphin 2 and purple onion land*

Olimar: It's a new day!

***Spam***: Sooo... what are we going to do to day?

Louie: Ummm I guess we'll just look for stuff.

President: Is that right Olimar?

Olimar: Exactly!

Dolphin 2: What is that?

*there is a stone with writing on it*

Olimar: What is it?

Louie: Uuuum...

President: I can't read it.

***Spam***: Me nether.

Dolphin 2: Bring it to me.

*Olimar takes the 2 purple pikmin to carry the stone to Dolphin 2*

Dolphin 2: I just learned a new language it's called the Pikmin Language let me see it says...
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What does it say make guesses!
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Old 05-17-2006, 01:57 PM
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"We are expirimenting on our swore enemys, we have created Bulbmin ," ummm... Olimar there is a huge chunk missing.

Olimar: Pikmin invented Bulbmin?

***Spam***: Incredible!,*writes down in notebook* but what are Bulbmin?

Louie: Hey look it's the other piece!

Olimar: Where?

*President takes 2 purples and grabs the piece and bring it to Dolphin 2*

Dolphin 2: Uuum... let me see it says "wolly" Olimar that's all of it.

President: Hey look a cave.

Louie: Let's gooo...

*all jump in Dolphin 2 follows*

Olimar: Hmmmmm... I'll call it the Exirsise Room.

Louie: Hey look...
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What did Louie see make geusses!
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Old 02-17-2008, 02:55 PM
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Default Re: Hey I got some cool pikmin 3 storyline...

i think louie sees the exersis
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