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Old 11-24-2008, 10:24 PM
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Default Marvel:The final Hero's War against a Virus:


Chapters:
Intro:
1:Outbreak
2:Friends And Foes
3:The last Hero's
4:Cure
5:Another Threat
6:Stand off
7:Extinction Win or Lose?


Intro:
"It Started off as a peaceful day in New York city,Birds flying over the sky line the sun slowly setting,.....Wait there coming run!"the silver auto door closes and a scream is heard, as somethings are better untold.....



Chapter One:Outbreak
Swinging thought the New York Skyline,Spider-man Notices a Strange Black Being Swinging from rooftop to rooftop much like himself. Spider Man swings down to investigate “I hope it isn't what I think it is.”He said, taking caution Then Venom attacked with a tackle”Hello Web Head I Came to Tell you about a virus.”Venom said while pinning Spider Man on the ground”But first can we talk about mints?”The wall crawler said tauntingly”At mid-night a virus will take a hero then the hero will spread it,until the world has fallen from it.”Venom said then Venom fainted beside Spider-Man as something was Controlling him”Eddie Eddie so do you wanna talk about mints now?”He said “I wander what happened,And Mid- Night,creepy.”Well its 5:59 now I'll go tell the X-Men about this....

“Mid- night?What the heck do you do you think your talking about!”He said,”maybe that wasn't the best Idea.”He said with regret,” It's 6:11 Now go tell everyone else they'll believe you.”He said sarcastically,Then Spider man headed off to his apartment,As Wolverine convinced it is a hoax which was the worst mistake He had ever made,Later at his apartment Spidey awaits Mid-night not knowing if it was true or not Which makes him Paranoid about it.”It's 11:59 Mid-night is 10 seconds away.”

.5 4 3 2 1 then all of New York was shaking with giant black clouds covering the night sky with giant Purple bolts striking from the heavens In the middle of Central Park ,The first One on the Scene was Captain America A ball of brownish dark green quickly Took into the Captain's body causing a Virus to be injected in his body,doubling over in pain the captain Becomes a flesh craving creepy zombie

as the newly Zombafied Captain Comes out of Central Park to feast on the flesh of the Non-zombie population only to find Spider Man waiting for him “Cap I know what happened,I know whats wrong with you,I know you can spread that Virus.”he said bravely The Cap launched himself at Spidey trying to infect him with the Z-Virus as soon as his spider sense rang he jumped out of the way leaving cap to collide into a brick two story building,Only total destruction of the brain can kill a zombie and spidey has nothing the can destroy a zombie permanently. Spider-man jumped and shot out some webbing which hit a side of a building,spidey is heading to the store for a back pack and some weapons he knows this isn't gonna end any time soon,which could not be further the the truth.

More Fan fic coming soon

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Old 11-24-2008, 10:29 PM
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Default Re: Marvel:The final Hero's

Not much of a chapter, I have to say. Or is it just part of it?
I'm not much of a Spidey fan myself, but I'll definetly read this fanfic. It sounds intriuging.
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Old 11-24-2008, 10:32 PM
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Not much of a chapter, I have to say. Or is it just part of it?
I'm not much of a Spidey fan myself, but I'll definetly read this fanfic. It sounds intriuging.
That is just the begining


I'm adding ALOT of people in ther soon

And the guy in the intro will be revealed.
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Old 11-25-2008, 03:42 PM
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Default Re: Marvel:The final Hero's War against a Virus ~More Added~

Looks good! I would just say to make your chapters a little longer, and the grammar isn't too bad, but there's always room for improvement. Even in my stories D:
Anyways, I'll read more when you release more chapters.
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Old 11-25-2008, 03:45 PM
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Default Re: Marvel:The final Hero's War against a Virus ~More Added~

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Looks good! I would just say to make your chapters a little longer, and the grammar isn't too bad, but there's always room for improvement. Even in my stories D:
Anyways, I'll read more when you release more chapters.
Chap 1 isn't done yet

There hasn't been an out break yet
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Default Re: Marvel:The final Hero's War against a Virus

Hmmmm.....This first chapter and banner at the beginning seems suspiciosly like Marvel Zombies. Can you say COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 11-29-2008, 07:55 PM
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Hmmmm.....This first chapter and banner at the beginning seems suspiciosly like Marvel Zombies. Can you say COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Gets shotgun*
Santa go bye bye

Well yes but it's going to be differant

Trust I know ALOT about Marvel Zombies
I can make this very differant
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*Gets shotgun*
Santa go bye bye

Well yes but it's going to be differant

Trust I know ALOT about Marvel Zombies
I can make this very differant
I hope so cause it seems scarily similar

Did anyone catch my bad pun?
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