Re: Story idea. Title: Somewhere I belong. Good or bad?
Well, for one thing, it needs a plot.
This sounds suspiciously like a remix of a Pokemon game's plot, so nobody will want to read it unless it has some sort of awesome plot device (Pointing sarcasm at the plot, showing the plot from a perspective other than that of a Pokemon trainer, making the plot actually cool, etc etc.) nobody will want to read it.
Even if I'm wrong about your plot, the fact that I was instantly able to compare it to the game's plot means it should probably get some shaking up.
Another problem: you only put forth about three sentences and I can already use Fridge Logic on you.
Specifically; This girl is from the real world. Jirachi is from the Pokemon world. How was Jirachi able to grant her wish?
So, work on buffing up your plot a bit and you might get more commentary.
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