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Old 03-09-2009, 01:42 AM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon - Have no fear--chapter 5 is here!

I found one more typo:

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I'd known I had to endure it until it was over, so that’s what did.

Wow, that's a lot of Rockets. o_o I wonder how they're going to get out of this...

I thought they would be cruel enough to injure the pokemon when they disobey-and I guess I was right. I feel bad for that sneasel.

I really want to know how they're going to escape now, and I'm really excited for the next one!
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Old 03-09-2009, 08:14 AM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon - Have no fear--chapter 5 is here!

x3 Thanks Scy. :D

Haha, another typo. :x I'll go and fix that. :3

Yeah. *intensity* You guys might find the next chapter a little sad, too. D:

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Old 03-09-2009, 09:20 AM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon - Have no fear--chapter 5 is here!

Sad? Why? What's going to happen?! *on edge* O__O

I hope it's not too bad... D=
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Old 03-09-2009, 10:00 AM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon - Have no fear--chapter 5 is here!

Izante DIES!!

xD Just joking. I'm not that mean!

...Or am I? O_o

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Old 03-09-2009, 12:23 PM
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Oh, come on! You wouldn't do that! xD

Would you? O_o
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nice chapter, poor Sneasal
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Good chapter, Xanthe, although... you wouldn't kill Izante, right? oO

*Distant smashing of Iron Tail on wood can be heard from miles away*

Er... and Hakumei's taking his anger management lessons out on a tree ^^'
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nice chapter, poor Sneasal
Thanks! Yeah... But don't worry--it didn't die. x3

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Good chapter, Xanthe, although... you wouldn't kill Izante, right? oO

*Distant smashing of Iron Tail on wood can be heard from miles away*

Er... and Hakumei's taking his anger management lessons out on a tree ^^'
Thanks. xD Well, you'll have to wait and see!

O_o xD Hehe... I think Hakumei's gonna come in soon(ish). It's time for that Aura Sphere to hit hard. xD

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Name: Proz
Pokémon species: Unown
Gender: Male
Age: Young adult, matured.
Any added features: A fluid, smooth, slightly derisive voice.
History and past: Proz had been the P character in the twenty-six original Unowns. At a mass abduction of Hoenn citizens to their alternate world in an attempt to restore their destroyed habitat in the Cave of Origin, P took advantage of his fellow Unowns' gullibilities to secretly execute his own, far more twisted plans. By reusing their power from a previous incident with Entei (Pokemon 3, The Movie), the Unowns transformed themselves into humans, subsequently adapting human names and entering Hoenn as humans after the Restoration had failed, as did Proz, who became an underground scientist and returned to his true form from time to time.

Personality: Sadistic and madly obsessed with his plots to rule the world as an individual. Has no problem using and occasionally torturing Pokemon in his experiments.

Likes/dislikes:
Likes - Controlling minds, psychic attacks, Pokemon tests for experiments
Dislikes - Meddlers
Fears: Somebody snapping him in half while in Unown form
Level: None
Attacks: Psychic, Hypnosis, Protect, Thunderbolt
Alliance: Evil

By the way, your story's pretty ace. That's some intense battle description. Keep it up.
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Old 03-13-2009, 12:50 PM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon ~ [PG for future] - Have no fear-chapter 5 is here!

Ooh, yay! Finally, an evil character! Ahh, I was looking forward to that Unown. Great job with him! :D Hopefully, he'll fit in quite well. :3

Thanks Alex! It's nice of you to tune in and comment! However, I don't know if my story's gonna come close in hilarity and excellence to yours!

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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon ~ [PG for future] - Have no fear-chapter 5 is here!

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Ooh, yay! Finally, an evil character! Ahh, I was looking forward to that Unown. Great job with him! :D Hopefully, he'll fit in quite well. :3

Thanks Alex! It's nice of you to tune in and comment! However, I don't know if my story's gonna come close in hilarity and excellence to yours!

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Awh come on, my story's not that good xD Thanks! I can't believe there hasn't been an evil character yet xD This is pretty good as it goes though. Can't wait to read more!
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon ~ [PG for future] - Have no fear-chapter 5 is here!

GUEST STAR FORM: (NOW ONLY ACCEPTING EVIL CHARACTERS. They won't have major parts )
Name: Tooloo
Pokémon species: (No Starters, anymore Eeveelutions or Legendaries, please! And you may have to change your Pokemon if there's already one in the story. ^^;) Togepi
Gender: Male
Age: (You don't have to give a specific age. This is a rough estimate, and it is the equivalent to human years. They won't physically be that age.) 5
Any added features: His eyes are blood red
History and past: (Make sure to include their family if they have any) Tooloo was born by a Ditto and Togekiss, who later died. he had been raised normally, but was amazingly smart with machines. He always wanted to rule the world, and joined Team Rocket, only to be a lowly agent Pokemon for a stupid member.
Personality: Tooloo is a cute, cuddly, devilish Togepi with an amazing intellect, particurly in machines. He badly wants to destroy all life forms.
Likes/dislikes:
Likes - Weapons and a small crush on Dusty
Dislikes - Good thing, as a result, he hates Izante.
Fears: scrambled eggs (He's an egg pokemon)
Level: (Cannot be higher than 15 for kids, no higher than 28 for young adults, and no higher than 50 for adults. No elders please. x3) 15
Attacks: (Yes, you may have up to7/8) Metrenome, Ancientpower
Alliance: (Good, evil or neutral) Hmmm...... I wonder........ Evil
Anything I'm missing:
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Old 03-15-2009, 02:33 AM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon ~ [PG for future] - Have no fear-chapter 5 is here!

Woot. Another Chappie <3 And Xanthee..Don't you dare kill Izante :3 Lol and how ever told you that you were mean? Or at least, I don't wish to see that side of you, IF that ever exists! Anyways, I'll read up your latest Chappie and edit it with my comments later.

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Old 03-15-2009, 08:17 AM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon ~ [PG for future] - Have no fear-chapter 5 is here!

xD Alright, Sammy. <3 Haha, well... People who don't want me to kill Izante won't be happy... xDD

Thanks Riolu! Great character. x3 Since he has a crush on Dusty, I'll make him appear more than once. :D

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Old 03-15-2009, 08:35 AM
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Wow, and here was I. Thinking if Team Rocket were even mean much? :3
Anyways, this chapter is has really got me thinking that even Team Rocket can be meanish much if they want to! Oh, and I would like to borrow that device that rocket guy used. Could be a good replacement for pepper sprays X3

Anyways, this is a fantastico(my word) chapter, and I look forward to the next. I really wonder how Dusty or Izante are going to escape from this. :o *dun dun dun!*
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