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Old 03-20-2009, 06:55 PM
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Default Something?

I'm planning out a fanfiction, a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon one. Anyways, here what I have so far.

Whishcash, who has said he knows the location to the Purity Jewels, has been abducted by Team I.A.B. In the town square, the new rescue team in town, Team One For All, who are still beginners, ask if they can help get Whishcash back, but are turned down by Team O.M.G. Soon, Team One For All are just doing odd jobs, but are secretly finding Whishcash.

At the moment the plot probably sounds suck, but that's because I haven't explained anything really. So what do you guys think? If you need it, I'll explain some things ^^;
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Old 03-21-2009, 01:09 PM
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First: Team OMG is definitely the coolest team name ever. xD

Second: You might want to add more... ah... 'meat' to the plot. It sounds pretty barebones right now. :3 I've never seen that premise before, though, so I think it could work out.
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Old 03-22-2009, 03:11 PM
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Default Re: Something?

PMD is often frowned upon on other boards nowadays because they're as common as journey fics once where. Coming up with a half-original idea is hard, but yours sounds like it might be interesting. Like Giratina just said, beef the idea up some!
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