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Old 10-02-2012, 02:42 AM
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Thought I'd posted a few of my sketches here for critic. These were some of my first attempts at drawing these Pokemon, so I'd like to get some feedback if anybody doesn't mind taking a quick moment to do so. Anyway, I'll stop rambling and post the pics.

Totodile:
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Was drawn while looking at a reference


Rayner the Typhlosion:
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Was drawn while looking at a reference


Kaylash the Glaceon:
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Head was drawn while looking at a reference, body completely freehand other than pattern that came from a ref
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Old 10-02-2012, 02:51 AM
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Totodile:
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Was drawn while looking at a reference


Rayner the Typhlosion:
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Was drawn while looking at a reference


Kaylash the Glaceon:
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Head was drawn while looking at a reference, body completely freehand other than pattern that came from a ref
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Woah, these are all pretty cool!!! I have a few critiques though, if you don't mind!!

First off, the Totodile.

I was looking at the feet, and the one closest to us has a longer toe in the middle. The one farther away however, has the toes all the same length. Maybe you should make the middle one a bit longer to give it a more rounded shape rather than a box-like one? The fingers on the closest hand also look a bit wonky. If you treat it like a human hand (with some fingers longer than others) and space them a bit more, it might look a bit better. :D

The Typhlosion:

The head looks a bit to big for the body, though that might just be Typholsion itself..The curve of the body is really nice but I think he should be a bit more stocky, just to show that he's pretty buff and can support his own weight (especially around the stomach region. Typhlosion are very wide pokemon). The foot closest to us also blends into the body with no definition of where the actual leg is. The same thing with the toes on this one as well as the totodile :) I think he's my favorite though. Full of attitude and bad-assery!

Glaceon:

The face is a bit round, and canine/cat faces have more shapes in them than just a circle. Make sure you have some definition of the cheeks. Also, the head piece looks very pointy (the parts that come down around the ear), so maybe if you smooth that out a bit it would make it look more natural as if it was hanging down and being affected by the body it is laying on underneath.

I really like all of them! Hope my input helped! :D
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Old 10-02-2012, 02:57 AM
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I am aware that they aren't the best, but like the title says there were quick sketches. I find that hands and feet are difficult for me to draw, and I realized the head for the Typhlosion was off after I inked it. I plan on redrawing all of these, and I'll most definitely keep your critics in mind. I also think that once I practice them more than these Pokemon will become easier for me to draw. I sketched these out after a long art hiatus, and this drawings are all the first time I have drawn these particular Pokemon, so I need to get back into the groove. Thank you for taking the time to give me some feedback :3
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Old 10-02-2012, 03:25 AM
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Asdfghjkl cute Totodile is cuuuuuute~
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Old 10-02-2012, 03:32 AM
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I know. I'm happy with how cute it turned out, especially for the first time I've tried to even draw anything reptilian.
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Old 10-03-2012, 09:46 AM
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Default Re: CM's Quick Sketches

That Totodile just has the cutest expression! Reptiles are really difficult, but looks like you got the shape just right. They're really good, especially for your first attempts! I'm not that great at drawing, so I don't have any critique, but it seems like 5TailedDemonLizard has a lot of helpful advice there. :D Hope you keep drawing and share more of your art!
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Totodile is so cute.
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I like the Typhlosion the best. These are some great drawings.
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Default Re: CM's Quick Sketches

I liked all of them, although the only complaint I really have is that Totodile's muzzle doesn't seem long enough. It's too pushed in.


But it's still freakin' adorable o3o Glaceon, I think, came out the best of them all. Typhlosion was a bit off, but otherwise nice. It's front arm (the one towards the viewer) seems a bit off, though.
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Old 10-05-2012, 02:41 AM
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Your glaceon looks pretty happy.
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