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paperfairy
03-23-2011, 09:28 AM
#004 Charmander
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/bw/4.png

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Kaoru
05-04-2011, 04:43 AM
Username: Leader Skyla
Type of Submission: Sprite
Name of Submission: B/W recolor of Charmander
Link to Submission: http://i857.photobucket.com/albums/ab135/LyraKotone/BW%20recolors/charmander_recolor.png

Rejected by BlueJello: The outline appears to be jagged in some areas. Avoid outlines that look like this, as it makes a curved outline look bumpy and jagged:

http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz48/BlueJellyJello/AvoidSharpEdgesonSprites.png

The one on the left is what I see on your Charmander's head (one on the top left and one on the top right). Try to give it a more curved outline, as seen on the right. Some sprites do use outlines that are similar to the one on the left (Scraggy's headpiece is an example). Correct it before submitting again. :]

Kaoru
05-04-2011, 11:09 PM
Repost. :)

Username: Leader Skyla
Type of Submission: Sprite
Name of Submission: B/W recolor of Charmander
Link to Submission: http://i857.photobucket.com/albums/ab135/LyraKotone/BW%20recolors/fixed_charmander_recolor.png

Rejected by BlueJello: You've fixed up the places I've shown you, but there are six other places. I'll show them to you:

http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz48/BlueJellyJello/CharmanderOutline.png

Zoom in if some of the arrows aren't clear enough. Anyway, to correct this, either erase the stray pixel that is hanging on the outside of the outline (for example the one by Charmander's eye) or colour in the pixel with the correct shade (for example the one at the bottom by Charmander's foot). I noticed that the outline is also like this by the hands, but this is the exception to the rule I was talking about earlier, where it makes the hands look pointy. Not bad. :]

Kaoru
05-05-2011, 12:23 AM
Re-re-submit. Again. x3

http://i857.photobucket.com/albums/ab135/LyraKotone/BW%20recolors/triple_fixed_charmander_recolor.png
Username: Leader Skyla
Type of Submission: Sprite
Name of Submission: B/W recolor of Charmander
Link to Submission: http://i857.photobucket.com/albums/ab135/LyraKotone/BW%20recolors/triple_fixed_charmander_recolor.png

Works for me. x3 ~Accepted by Jedgie! c:

Graceful_Suicune
06-05-2011, 02:07 AM
Username: Graceful_Suicune
Type of Submission: Fan fiction; one-shot.
Pokemon Featured: Charmander
Type of Appearance: Main characters
Fanfic Featured In: River's Vengeance (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=98405).
Chapters Featured In: All (it's a one-shot).
Exerpt/Summary: Libbi and Fickre are charmander siblings whose parents have gone away, and in the meantime they are being looked after by the parents' family friend, Palue, a squirtle who lives by a lake. The story is set in the forest where he lives, and speaks of spirits and the ways of living in the wild. But what will happen once Fickre disregards the forest's warnings?

Speed-X
07-10-2011, 08:49 PM
http://p23.pimg.in/yOYFL.png
Username: Speed-X
Type of Submission: Sprite
Name of Submission: Charmander Icon Revamp
Link to Submission: http://p23.pimg.in/yOYFL.png

GS: Approved! 8D