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RawrIsMyMiddleName
05-03-2007, 02:43 AM
Yes, I made it again. Anways, let's put it up!

-Plot-

This story follows a young girl at the age of 14 starting her Pokemon Journey. Having barely a clue on what to do with a Pokemon, she travels around the region of Kanto with her and her trusty Pokemon. She's barely starting out, but she can do anything as long as she believes in herself. Read the comic to see what happens!

-Comics-

Chapter 1 (http://img117.imageshack.us/my.php?image=chapter1comiclr0.png)

Fire Pkmn Master
05-03-2007, 02:48 AM
Well it was really boring. Nothing interesthing and would be better if you explained your cominc. The characters, the Plot etc.... Oh and the Pink Color doesnt look to good. Too bright.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
05-03-2007, 02:55 AM
Well it was really boring. Nothing interesthing and would be better if you explained your cominc. The characters, the Plot etc.... Oh and the Pink Color doesnt look to good. Too bright.

Okay, I'll edit it to dark green and tell the plot and characters.

Fire Pkmn Master
05-03-2007, 03:00 AM
Okay, I'll edit it to dark green and tell the plot and characters.

Ok cool. Would like to see more.

Xtra
05-03-2007, 03:28 AM
Maybe you should add more excitment, or maybe a joke here in then. Make it a bit funny, or exciting.:happy:

Pervival_Cox
05-03-2007, 03:37 AM
Maybe you should add more excitment, or maybe a joke here in then. Make it a bit funny, or exciting.:happy:

I agree, it needs something to make it exciting/interesting.

And jokes never hurt. XD I love a good pun, myself.