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ragnarok0422
04-28-2008, 12:42 PM
RULES:

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I'm not accepting guest stars... repeat, I am NOT ACCEPTING guest stars.

BANNERS:

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Feel free to donate!! (Credits will be given, of course!!)

NOTE:

My comic is not a PMD!!

Also, when reading my comic, it is read in this direction...

1... 4... 7...
2... 5... 8...
3... 6... 9...
Final Words...

Okay? Good, then let's get started!!

TABLE OF CONTENTS:

Chapter 1: Confounded Confusions (http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x316/antonio_family/Pokemon%20Comics/The%20Tragedic%20Prophecy/Chapter1-ConfoundedConfusions.png)

Chapter 2: Source of the Troubles (http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x316/antonio_family/Pokemon%20Comics/The%20Tragedic%20Prophecy/Chapter2-SourceoftheTroubles.png)

...comments and suggestions (rather than guest stars) would be very helpful to me...

eerie
04-28-2008, 02:51 PM
A somewhat reluctant Dratini & a straight, active Ralts. Pretty good. :happy:

ragnarok0422
04-28-2008, 11:29 PM
A somewhat reluctant Dratini & a straight, active Ralts. Pretty good. :happy:
Thanks... any other comments?

Isaac8296
04-29-2008, 06:02 AM
Ooohh^^ Like The Dratini And The Ralts^^ The Dratini Is Clueless....

Graceful_Suicune
04-29-2008, 08:26 AM
Yeah, I reckon it's pretty good. Straight forward, but it jumped into the journey a bit soon, as in, like, the Ralts and Dratini don't know each other, right? But then the Dratini says that it has no choice but to go, although it could choose not accept easily. It's good though; I'll keep checking in ;)

GalladeMaster
04-29-2008, 08:39 AM
Nice, I'll keep reading.

ragnarok0422
04-29-2008, 09:49 AM
Chapter 2 is now up folks! ^,^

Elemental Brotherhood
04-29-2008, 09:57 AM
Oooh!

Did Ralts forget, or is he lying? o_0

I think you need to change the talking thing for Dratini. It's PMD headshot thing.

You can see through it's chest.

o_0

ragnarok0422
04-29-2008, 10:08 AM
Oooh!

Did Ralts forget, or is he lying? o_0

I think you need to change the talking thing for Dratini. It's PMD headshot thing.

You can see through it's chest.

o_0
Sure thing! ^,^

Oh, and Ralts is not lying... you'll find out about it in Chapter 3... as well as who Dratini really is (he's not a person... I was talking about his biodata...), Okay?

Black Fox of the Darkness
04-29-2008, 11:46 AM
I only see things that are for the sprites.You should make that parts of the sprites that were white white.Like celebis head.Or dratinis chest.Before yuou put them in the screenshot use a defaut color to fill that isn,then when they are in just make it white.

ragnarok0422
04-29-2008, 11:51 AM
I only see things that are for the sprites.You should make that parts of the sprites that were white white.Like celebis head.Or dratinis chest.Before yuou put them in the screenshot use a defaut color to fill that isn,then when they are in just make it white.
Okay... anyways, regarding to your comment (which is about the pictures and not the story... :susp:)

Are there any comments regarding with the story...? :susp:

The Harris
04-29-2008, 05:15 PM
im not understanding the storyline

ragnarok0422
04-30-2008, 12:01 AM
im not understanding the storyline
Well that's not my problem, how come you don't understand the storyline?

The Harris
04-30-2008, 05:09 PM
Well that's not my problem, how come you don't understand the storyline?

i dunno, could you explain it please ^_^

ragnarok0422
05-01-2008, 12:20 AM
:eek:

Haha, sure why not?

*spoiler alert (highlight below)*

Ralts was sent to Dratini in order to make him do something, until he was sent, he told Dratini that the world is undergoing some serious crisis. Until they had reached to Celebi, Ralts forgot who had sent him, which troubles him everyday. So he had to share somethings that he could remember to Dratini...

get it?

Kroko_Boy
05-01-2008, 07:21 PM
Heh, I like this comic :)
I wonder what's gonna happen next? :)

PapaLuLu27
05-02-2008, 07:50 AM
Nice job RJ! Love the storyline, nice, and unique.