My rain team

[Latisiblings]

I know this team is terrible =( but since I put so much times in this(I did!) help me to get this team actually going on the shoddy battle ladder. Criticize if you want to. OK, here goes my team.
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Metalthingy (Crobat) (M) @ Damp Rock
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 162 HP/216 Spd/132 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Hypnosis
- Roost
- Rain Dance
- Air Slash
--- He's my first Rain supporter and he's like an annoyer. He can roost off damages and then keep hitting with Air Slash if he needs to. I put out Taunt since I never liked taunt much(and I needed a place for rain). He's really important because he blocks grass-typed attacks that may come in my way.
Hydra (Kingdra) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Swift Swim
EVs: 252 Atk/88 Spd/168 SAtk
Naughty nature (+Atk, -SDef)
- Draco Meteor
- Waterfall
- Rain Dance
- Surf
--- He's my second rain dance supporter. He's also a sweeper. I'm the most doubtful about his EVs and his moves. I chose Surf over Hydro Pump since I hate Hydro Pump(because its accuracy).
Pinkdancer (Ludicolo) (F) @ Leftover
Ability: Rain Dish
EVs: 252 HP/76 SAtk/180 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Surf
- Toxic
- Leech Seed
- Protect
--- She's my staller, She's my only wall-like thing(barring crobat). Tell me if I have to change anything.
Floatsac (Floatzel) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Swift Swim
EVs: 40 HP/252 Def/212 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Baton Pass
- Bulk Up
- Taunt
- Waterfall
--- He's really not a sweeper, more like a baton passer. Not much can said about him.
YeloKabu (Kabutops) (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Swift Swim
EVs: 224 HP/252 Atk/24 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- X-Scissor
- Waterfall
- Rock Slide
- Brick Break
--- This guy here is mostly for killing stuff, his speed EV is to outrun adamant heracross after a swift swim boost. Oh yeah, Rock Slide replaced Stone Edge because its accuracy and its side ability to flinch. I'm not sure whether his moves are good because i chose them myself =)
Orangesub (Electivire) (M) @ Expert Belt
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs: 6 Atk/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Flamethrower
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Thunder
- Cross Chop
--- This guy is really important on my team, since his ability lets him to absorb electric moves. He can seriously kill stuff if they're not prepared for it.
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So, how do you like it? Was it terrible? Again, please criticize me. I need an improvement;I
just lost to a rain team.

[Ryan Nissan]

Raindance on Ludicolo over Protect.

[xXPrimalDialgaXx]

Flamethrower while beging in the Rain is pretty lowered, maybe change it to Thunderbolt.

[faceplant527]

but protect will see if they are gonna do an electric attack and if he does again like he prolly would you can switch to electrivire. you already have like 3 rain dancers.

[eerie]

U-turn for Crobat could prove useful over Air Slash or Roost. Ludicolo has a wide special movepool. Rain support and GK/ Ice Beam can be an option so that Kingdra can have HP Electric. Kabutops can revenge-kill almost any sweeper in the rain with the right attacks, so Life Orb > CB on some circumstances.

Just make sure that Kingdra (if you'll still have it on him) and Crobat's rain setup won't be disrupted by the likes of ScarfChomp, CB/RKiller Weavile and others.

Good luck, 'cause I'll soon download Shoddy, too. :happy:

[Latisiblings]

thanks everybody for helping me I'm actually gonna try this team out soon!