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Old 09-23-2008, 07:49 PM
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Default Re: Xu pokemon--story 1--forest, aqua, and icicle

Fanfic Rules and Resources

What you have written hardly qualifies as fanfiction, as it seems to be just random dialogue. You should listen to the suggestions given by other posters here, because it will help. Take your time to write out a decent chapter, with good sentences and paragraphs, descriptions, and the rest of the common traits of a good story. Posts do need to be a lot longer than what you have written, preferably full. If you are looking to post ideas, do that in the sub board Author's Corner. That's a good place to recieve help on writing your story before you post it here.

I'd also like to take this time to point out that multi-posting is spamming and you need to stop. Just go back and Edit your previous post with the new information. You can also click the Multi-Quote button on the bottom right of each post: . This will quote up to 5 selected posts in one post.

Since this story is not ready, I'm going to close it.

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