Originally Posted by Megaman
This is pretty good. You have a good plot and great chapters but try to space out a little bit or readers might think it's a big wordwall and it makes it harder for them to read. You should also put up a notice. Lately, fan-fics have been getting stolen.
Other then that, this fan-fic is great! Keep up the good work!
Thank you Megaman for your feedback. I'll work on spacing it out. Sorry about that, i just cut and paste it, and didn't think about the spacing. The next chapter is on its way.