Thread: [Pokemon] Legend of the Shadow Tracker
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Old 11-13-2011, 02:51 AM
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Default Re: Legend of the Shadow Tracker

I really like your writing style and that it's written in present tense. I don't think I've read many present tense stories, but it really is quite charming. I love how Max's Aipom's nickname changes all the time. I think its definitely something kids would do xD The school seems really interesting, it's clear you've put a lot of thought into it. Looking forward to the next part! =)
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