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Old 03-12-2004, 02:04 AM
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Chapter 1 where ar we?
The story starts out in the real world, a 12 year old boy named Matt wakes up one saturday morning and turns on the t.v. to find his favorite show, pokemon, on. He whipps out his gba sp (gameboy advance sp) and turns on his ruby version. Its kind of a tradition for him to play his pokemon game while watching ash pikachu and the rest of the gang kick team rockets but. The show ends and matt phones his best friend. " Hey adam, come over." he said. " Why?" asked adam. " I dunno, just come over." said matt. So five minutes later adam arrived at matt's. " I want you kids to play outside!" yelled matt's mom. " oh man, what do you wanna do?!" said matt. " lets just walk around and play our game boys." said adam. " ok." said matt. So they walked around for like 10 minutes, when all of the sudden, matt spotted somthing. " whats that?" asked matt pointing to somthing on the ground. " I dunno." said adam. matt picked up the item, and it turned out to be a blue sphere. Out of the blue, a whole in the ground appered right where they were standing and they fell for a long time, then slammed into the ground. when matt woke up, he saw a suprising sight, he was animated! so was adam, who was still lying on the ground unconcious ( i dont know how to spell thatword). Also they were no longer in matt and adam's neighborhood, they were in a strang, animated, land. " Where are we?"

end of first chapter
Chapter 2 Can you help us?

"mmm" moaned adam. " where am i?" " i don't know" matt replied. Adam opened his eyes, and well, lets just say, he was totally excited !
" Were animated, were actualy animated, like ash and pikachu." he said. " This is amazing!" The two decided to walk around to find any signs of life. " Hey look, there's a building over there, strange it looks oddly familar!" exclaimed adam. " i know why, it's because thats prof. oaks house!" matt announced. Matt and adam had finally found out were thay were in the pokemon world. They were so excited, they felt like they were gonna die. " How about we go see prof oak?" asked matt. " ok" said adam. So they walked up to his house and rang the doorbell" Hello." said Tracey as he opened the door. " Are you Tracey?!" asked adam excitedly. " Yes, why?" he asked. " Nevermind that, we need to talk to prof. oak." said matt. " Then come right in, he's just giving a girl named Olivia her first pokemon." explained Tracey. " Cool!" ranted adam. So they walked into the prof. house and saw him standing with a girl that looked like she was the same age as Matt and Adam, she had short green hair, and a backpak that had pictures of all sorts of grass pokemon. " So Olivia, wich pokemon do you want?" asked prof. oak. " Bulbasaur, definatly, I just love grass pokemon!" explained Oliva. " I would have never guessed." said adam in a voice so that only matt could hear. " Godd choice, seeing as you love grass pokemon and bulbasaur is the only starter left." said prof. oak. " Now boys, how can I help you?" asked prof. oak. " Well you see, we comefrom a different demension." explained adam. " A demension were pokemon arn't real. But instead a t.v. show. We don't know how we got hear, but all we need are some supplies, can you help us?"

End of chapter two

Chapter three Can I come with you?

"Yo know boys, I would love to help you, do you have any pfoof?" asked prof. oak. " Umm." said adam. suddenly matt had an idea, for the second time, he whipped out his gameboy. " Here, look at this, it's a pokemon game from where we come from." said matt showing the prof. his game. " Hmm, very interestin, i think i've seen enough, i beilieve you" exclaimed pro. oak. " good " said matt. " oaky, you two need a pokemon, unfortunatly, bulbasaur was the last starter i have." explained pro. oak. " But, i'm sure we can find a pokemon for you somehow." suddenly, a yellow blur raced across the floor and jumped onto matt's shoulder.

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Old 03-14-2004, 07:48 AM
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It's a great story !! When will be more of it ?
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Old 03-30-2004, 01:12 AM
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pichu got banned, to bad he can't tell us what happened next, but i can, that no good dirty rotten cheat stole my idea after i told him. but i won't tell what happens next unless someone wants me too, it's a waste of my time.
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Old 03-30-2004, 01:42 AM
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Yeah, Tell us! Pichu was a Beeotch anyhow.
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Old 03-30-2004, 02:48 AM
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ok, as you know, the story is mainly about matt and adam, who just happen to be my best friends, and then later on, a new main charecter is introduced. if you ever see pichu again, tell him to bite my stick! he'll know what you mean oh yah, any thing in this story that has anything to do with pichu, is a couincidence. k, on to the story. End of chapter two

Chapter three Can I come with you?

"Yo know boys, I would love to help you, do you have any proof?" asked prof. oak. " Umm." said adam. suddenly matt had an idea, for the second time, he whipped out his gameboy. " Here, look at this, it's a pokemon game from where we come from." said matt showing the prof. his game. " Hmm, very interestin, i think i've seen enough, i beilieve you" exclaimed pro. oak. " good " said matt. " oaky, you two need a pokemon, unfortunatly, bulbasaur was the last starter i have." explained pro. oak. " But, i'm sure we can find a pokemon for you somehow." suddenly, a yellow blur raced across the floor and jumped onto matt's shoulder. It was a pichu. " So there you are." said oak. " I've been looking for you every where." " Now, this pichu was sent to me by prof. Elm because it was strange, yes it was strange because normaly pichus electricute themselfs, but this one doesn't." he explained. " Wicked! " shouted matt. " Ye, very wicked, let me give you a demondstration, pichu thunderbolt." he said. But all pichu did was scratch his ear. " pichu, use thunderbolt." said matt. unexpectitly, it did. and as the prof. had said, pichu did not shock himself at all. but unfortuatly for adam who was in front of pichu, got shocked. " Interesting, very interesting, pichu has never listened to me in his life, but then you who has never actualy seen a real pokemon in his life tells him to do somthing, and he does " pondered prof. oak. " Well, pichu is my fav pokemon. " said matt. " I have a idea, how would you like to have this pichu as your first pokemon?" asked oak

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Old 03-31-2004, 12:45 AM
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Kool. Oh and If i ever see Pichu again, Im gonna say more than that. Heh.
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Old 04-12-2004, 05:03 PM
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thanx
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Old 04-12-2004, 05:05 PM
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Chapter three Can I come with you?

"Yo know boys, I would love to help you, do you have any proof?" asked prof. oak. " Umm." said adam. suddenly matt had an idea, for the second time, he whipped out his gameboy. " Here, look at this, it's a pokemon game from where we come from." said matt showing the prof. his game. " Hmm, very interestin, i think i've seen enough, i beilieve you" exclaimed pro. oak. " good " said matt. " oaky, you two need a pokemon, unfortunatly, bulbasaur was the last starter i have." explained pro. oak. " But, i'm sure we can find a pokemon for you somehow." suddenly, a yellow blur raced across the floor and jumped onto matt's shoulder. It was a pichu. " So there you are." said oak. " I've been looking for you every where." " Now, this pichu was sent to me by prof. Elm because it was strange, yes it was strange because normaly pichus electricute themselfs, but this one doesn't." he explained. " Wicked! " shouted matt. " Ye, very wicked, let me give you a demondstration, pichu thunderbolt." he said. But all pichu did was scratch his ear. " pichu, use thunderbolt." said matt. unexpectitly, it did. and as the prof. had said, pichu did not shock himself at all. but unfortuatly for adam who was in front of pichu, got shocked. " Interesting, very interesting, pichu has never listened to me in his life, but then you who has never actualy seen a real pokemon in his life tells him to do somthing, and he does " pondered prof. oak. " Well, pichu is my fav pokemon. " said matt. " I have a idea, how would you like to have this pichu as your first pokemon?" asked oak. " I would love to!!" exclaimed matt.
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Good story. Keep writing . Also I think Pichu joined Team Y to be protected by me.
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Old 04-12-2004, 09:04 PM
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u think it's a good story, thanx, i actualy dreamed the first half of it, but my dream was a litttle different, so i had to change it. anything pichu did was to protect himself, i actualy know him, he goes to my school, but he got suspended, u don't wanna no y.Chapter three Can I come with you?

"Yo know boys, I would love to help you, do you have any proof?" asked prof. oak. " Umm." said adam. suddenly matt had an idea, for the second time, he whipped out his gameboy. " Here, look at this, it's a pokemon game from where we come from." said matt showing the prof. his game. " Hmm, very interestin, i think i've seen enough, i beilieve you" exclaimed pro. oak. " good " said matt. " oaky, you two need a pokemon, unfortunatly, bulbasaur was the last starter i have." explained pro. oak. " But, i'm sure we can find a pokemon for you somehow." suddenly, a yellow blur raced across the floor and jumped onto matt's shoulder. It was a pichu. " So there you are." said oak. " I've been looking for you every where." " Now, this pichu was sent to me by prof. Elm because it was strange, yes it was strange because normaly pichus electricute themselfs, but this one doesn't." he explained. " Wicked! " shouted matt. " Ye, very wicked, let me give you a demondstration, pichu thunderbolt." he said. But all pichu did was scratch his ear. " pichu, use thunderbolt." said matt. unexpectitly, it did. and as the prof. had said, pichu did not shock himself at all. but unfortuatly for adam who was in front of pichu, got shocked. " Interesting, very interesting, pichu has never listened to me in his life, but then you who has never actualy seen a real pokemon in his life tells him to do somthing, and he does " pondered prof. oak. " Well, pichu is my fav pokemon. " said matt. " I have a idea, how would you like to have this pichu as your first pokemon?" asked oak. " I would love to!!" exclaimed matt. " Ok, first as you probably know, you need to catch it, take this pokeball." beamed the prof. " ok." said matt. he took the ball and flung it at pichu. the ball shook once, twice, thrice, and pichu was caught! " Yah!" exclaimed. " You are so lucky, I mean, we have been in the pokemon world for less than 30 minutes and you already have your first pokemon." adam blurted jelously. " Well, you can get your own pokemon too if you want." explained the prof. " Sweet!" shouted adam. " prof. oak, come quick, it's an emergency!" shouted tracey. " What,what's the matter?" asked professor oak. " A scyther has migrated to the park behind the lab and is terrorising the other pokemon" yelled tracey.

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Old 04-25-2004, 10:04 PM
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ha, good story, guess what louren, i finally decided to join pe2k. but i thought you said that you would take my name out of the fic? oh who cares, any way, great story, keep writing, ha, adam is gonna be p***** when i tell him u put his name in the fic!
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