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Old 07-02-2011, 04:31 PM
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Ugh, so this is late and I don't like it and it's kinda long. I also made a few assumptions regarding the Knights of the Red Circle thing. IDK.

Name: Derrick Kuraena

Age: 31

Gender: Male

Team: Elemental

Class: Human

Description: Derrick is slightly taller than average, with a somewhat athletic build. He has short, dark black hair, which he tends to keep somewhat messy, and a small amount of stubble around his chin. He typically wears a black polo shirt, along with dark brown trousers, with an orange/brown overcoat, and brown boots. His wardrobe rarely changes from this, as he has little money to obtain other clothes.

Personality: Derrick is generally calm and stoic, and very rarely will show emotion. He prefers to focus on the task at hand, and get it done, without letting emotions get in the way, and he bears a large amount of guilt for what he thinks he did to his adopted mother. He doesn't like to talk an overly large amount, and isn’t one to mince words. However, he isn't an unkind person, and is always happy to assist someone who needs him. He does have a kind heart, but will only show it to the fewest of people. He is generally rough, and his fighting style matches. He prefers up close, unarmed combat, with his Pokémon partner, a Mightyena. He is able to use a few different types of swords, but prefers not to. He has a personal vendetta against mages, due to his childhood being negatively affected by them, but is slowly coming to accept them after working by their side.

History: Derrick’s parents were rich aristocrats in the city of Venefia. They were both powerful mages, and they were both well known for experimenting into new forms of life magic. Derrick’s father, an arrogant man named Lucial, was adept at a lot of elemental magic, and had incredible control over elements, like fire and water. His wife, a proud woman who went by the name of Samara, was skilled in healing, and manipulation of organic materials. They were both hard workers, and had made numerous advances in magical sciences, and as such, they were very well renowned. Their level of skill had instilled a large ego in their heads, of which was only further boosted by the flattery they received, both from their peers, and from the general public.

So then, when the time came that they wanted, and needed, a child of their own, an heir to their fame and fortune, it was expected that their child would be amazing. After a long year, their child was finally born, and as they gazed down at their child for the first time, they were thoroughly disappointed. They knew their son wasn’t a mage.

They raised Derrick as their son for almost two years, teaching him the basics of life, all the while, trying to force magic into him. They tried many methods to turn their son into a mage, to no success. Derrick was subjected to numerous experiments, some harmless, some more deadly. His parents tried zapping him with magic, tried injecting him with strange liquids, and were extremely close to infusing him with Ichor, before the Mind Police stepped in. The Mind Police found out that they had both started falling to the corruption, and they were taken away, leaving Derrick in the care of a young woman. The woman, named Khisanth, had no relation to Derrick, but happened to be nearby when his parents were taken away, and she was entrusted with the young baby. She took him home, to a small cottage at the edge of Venefinia, where he spent the next few years of his life growing into an energetic young boy, without the pressure of becoming a mage.

On his fifth birthday, Khisanth held a small party for Derrick, and invited a few of the local children, as at that time, Derrick had very few friends. There were some paper decorations, and an enchanted floating bauble, which would slowly follow the kids wherever they went. And in the main dining room, there was a small wooden table for the kids, and a home baked chocolate cake. However, the kids were all playing out in the yard, oblivious to the chocolate cake. The children were running around the flowery garden, gently pushing the shiny bauble at each other, giggling everytime the bauble bounced off someone’s hands. For the first time, Derrick didn’t notice, or care, that he was the only regular human, and for the first time, he fit in with people, and it was the best day of his life.

But what Derrick didn’t know was that as he played, a young, stray Pooochyena watched silently from under the fence, whimpering quietly. As Khisanth called the children inside to eat cake, the stray pup crawled under the fence, and slowly made its way towards the house. The Poochyena approached the back door, which was now shut and locked, and softly scratched against the door. The door was opened, and Khisanth looked around confused, before noticing the young pup on the doorstep. She picked it up, cradled it in her arms, brought it inside, and placed it in Derrick’s arms.

As soon as Derrick laid eyes on the helpless Poochyena pup, he fell in love. He cuddled it to his chest, gently pat its fluffy head, and when it started staring at the chocolate cake hungrily, he fed it a piece. Khisanth told him that the young Poochyena was a female, and he decided to name it Annika, out of a children’s book he had read.

For the weeks following his birthday, he nurtured the young Poochyena, feeding it, and taking care of it, and he did little else. He played with it out in the garden, running through the flowers, and just enjoying himself like any other boy should. One day, he was out playing in the yard with Annika, throwing a small stick for her to chase. Everytime Derrick threw the stick, she would go fetch it, and come trotting back to him, holding the stick proudly in her mouth, before dropping it at this feet. Derrick picked it up, and readied himself to throw the stick for the umpteenth time. He swung his arm through the air, and just as he was about to let go, there was a loud booming noise in the distance. It distracted him for just that moment, and he accidentally threw the stick towards the house, and he flinched as the stick smashed through the kitchen window. He cautiously approached the window, which has started smoking. He cautiously peered inside, and the stove was on fire, and a flaming stick was lying on the floor just below it. There was only one thing flowing through Derrick’s mind at that moment, and it was a mixture of shock and panic, and he did the first thing his mind told him to do, and that was to run. He picked up the confused Poochyena pup in his arms, bolted over the fence, and headed straight towards Zarun forest. As he ran into the safety of the trees, he chanced a quick glance backwards, and the whole house was in flames, and there was no one around. Not even Khisanth.

Derrick spent many years living isolated in the forest, with only Annika for company. He was trying to cope with immense amounts of guilt, and had comtemplated trying to kill himself numerous times, with Annika only just managing to keep him alive. They wandered aimlessly through the forests; searching for any wild berries they could eat to sustain themselves. Pointless days grew into dreary weeks, which into grew into longer months, and soon, even years were slowly ticking by, and eventually, they forgot the reason why they were hiding. They remembered why they ran, they would always remember, but they no longer knew what made them continue hiding from civilisation. Unfortunately, they didn’t know where civilisation was.

Eventuallly, Derrick’s wanderings through the forest had brought him significantly north of Venefinia, to the city of Parasanti. Lost, confused, starving, and as shaggy as the Poochyena behind him, the now teen-aged Derrick stumbled into the city. As he passed through the gate, he was confronted by a few guards, who quickly frisked him, and asked a few questions. They identified themselves as Knights of the Red Circle, and explained to Derrick that they were sworn to seek out and kill mages. After a long conversation with the Knights, Derrick knew that he wanted to join them. So he was led to the base of operations for the Knights of the Red Circle in Parasanti, where he begun the long and rigorous training almost immediately, along with Annika.

Derrick finally completed all of his training at the age of twenty-five, and at his graduation ceremony, he was called up to the stage to receive his sword. He was clean, and wearing a fine silk suit and Annika was well groomed, opposed to the day they both arrived in Parasanti. He approached the stage proudly, with Annika right at his heels, and received his sword. He held it up proudly, and Annika howled, evolving into a Mightyena at that moment.

Derrick abandoned the Knights of the Red Order not long after his graduation, however. Their methods were cruel, unfair, and even though he had a negative view of mages, he didn’t think this was right. In one of his first expeditions out with the Order, he encountered a young group of mages called Elemental, who were fighting against the Order, and helping to teach and care for young mages, who had otherwise been rejected. He ended up joining Elemental, and fighting for the cause which he once fought against.

Pokemon: Annika, the female Mightyena. Annika shares an instinctive connection with Derrick, so while they cannot communicate telepathically, they both think in almost identical ways, and can often tell what the other is thinking. They can usually co-ordinate attacks and such without having to communicate. They are very quick to defend each other should a dangerous situation arise.
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Name:
Butters

Age:
19

Gender:
Male

Team:
The Cullen

Class:
Mage, can control fire, as well as water, air, and earth, though the latter three are extremely weak. By weak I mean maybe moving a blade of grass or making it grow an inch or two (though he is fond of growing buttercups), or move a vine; moving a small bit of water a couple of inches; creating a breeze.

Description:
Butters is a bulky teen. Not fat, just what you would call ‘heavy-boned’. He has a wide build and is extremely tall, measuring at about 6’10. His face betrays his mild autism, though, and not very gaunt, and he still bears the face of a child, though he is growing older. He doesn’t wear anything at all fancy, and in fact he wears loose clothes made from burlap, because he won’t wear anything else. His large feet are barefooted. His fingers are a bit meaty, making him clumsy with tools and small objects. He wears a leather bracelet on his right arm, and on the bracelet, a sapphire amulet is imbedded into the leather. He has sloppy, blonde hair.

Personality:
Butters is the kind of person you could call ‘simple’, due to his autism. He is slow to understand, and his speech is also chopped and he stutters a lot, but once he finally understands something, his mind is off like a rocket, and he comes up with all of these ideas that no one else probably would never think of. He is very imaginative, as well. He may be simple-minded, but he is a great friend overall. Seeing those he knows getting hurt, though, is when he snaps. His friends are like his family to him, since he doesn’t know who his family was in the first place, and he will defend them with his life. Determination is one of his main driving forces. Most of the time, though, he is joyous and one of the happiest people you’ll meet. Butters cries easily, though, and tends to do that when he is offended. He loves his Pokemon to death, and hates seeing her get hurt. He dislikes the Red Circle Knights to a fatal degree. He thinks hate is a strong word, and doesn’t like using it, though. Butters loves making friends, and it makes him overjoyed when he finds new ones!

History:
Butters was found on the doorstep of an elderly couple’s cabin as a newborn, with no note and no trace and no name on the outskirts of Venefinia. A couple of years later, when he was about three, the cabin burned down. He couldn’t remember it himself, but he was always told that he was found outside of the cabin gripping his leather band and a buttercup so tightly that they had to put him to sleep before they could free it from him. He was sent to the orphanage, and wasn’t adopted immediately because his signs of autism were obvious in his face, and none of the mages were interested in apprenticing him. They named him Butters, because it was the first thing he said (and the only thing he said for the next month), because no one wanted to spend time on naming him. The elderly couple had named him, but they were never the socialites and had nobody to tell.

Butters was constantly taunted for his speech and his inability to understand, as well as his looks. He ran away when he was eight, crying. He stumbled upon the cabin of a mage, whom of which was away at the time, and was found asleep on the woman’s doorstep. She found potential in him, and took him as her apprentice. She gave him a Pokemon to learn his first element – fire – from. And that was how he earned his Larvesta, which he named Pyreflight (it was then, in that name, that the mage saw this boy had a much more complex personality than she thought). He trained beside the small fire caterpillar, and his skills grew. He discovered the other three elements on his own, but the mage never had time to train them in it. The Red Circle Knights discovered their secluded training place, and killed the mage. They didn’t think that Butters was anything but a poor child caught up in these things, and didn’t know he could wield magic. They found themselves dying from the pain after he melted their armor into their skins and then ripped it from their flesh. He had loved the mage like his mother, and the rage that came over him was full and blinding. Afterwards, he couldn’t remember even ever touching the knights.

He traveled about afterwards, always carrying around his lil’ female Larvesta like she was a handbag. Something about the Pokemon helped him ignore the taunts and the stares. He went southward, to the Zarun Mountains, and nobody ever really realized that he was a mage (except for other mages, of course). He trained there, determined to avenge his master’s death, for he couldn’t remember already avenging them. He thought that she had killed the knights herself, but this much he would never know. He was 16 and had lived in the mountain for about two years by then, and The Cullen found him with his newly-evolved Volcarona, playing with buttercups that he grew out of the ground. They took him after one of the mages saw his potent skills, and he began his life with his new friends. He became deathly loyal to them and those he met.

Pokemon:
Pyreflight (Volcarona, female)

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[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH"
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Why are you making a third character...?
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Because I need one.
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[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH"
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Accepted, I guess... although I'm going to have to say no if you make a fourth.
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Trust me, he's everything I ever wanted. I need nothing more in life. :> His personality and such has been stirring in my head for too long to not try and RP with him.
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OK, I feel like this is necessary at this point. Now, for the moment you all were waiting for!

Name: Leonard Avalon Zyxino

Age: 575, counting the years spent in cryogenic storage. Counting the years he wasn't in storage, he's 15.

Gender: Male.

Team: None officially. But he's sided with the Cullen.

Class: Mage: Avalon has Aura Control and Psychic Control, as well as the ability to drain energy, control electricity to some extent, and remove magical abilities.

Aura Control not only includes Avalon’s ability to see auras, enhancement of his psychic ability, and use attacks related to Aura, but also allows Avalon to use Aura’s from other sources, aside from the light-blue aura that the world generally emits. The Aura’s that are emitted by some sources can vary in strength and color from the world’s aura. His aura is indigo in color and is nearly twice as strong as the world’s general aura. He can also manipulate the aura to form physical objects, like blades or keys. The bigger the object is, the harder it is to make it. It is noteworthy that the use of different auras can change the properties the objects bring.

Psychic control includes telepathy, telekinesis of small-medium sized objects, mind reading, seeing the future, allowing others to see images and voices, making a mental offensive, and defending his mind. He can also create psychic barriers to protect against attacks, though the attacks shouldn't be too strong-if it's strong enough, the barrier will break under pressure.

Avalon can drain any kind of energy from any outlet, which is handy if he’s tired. This doesn’t subside his natural needs of food, water and sleeping. Avalon can also control electricity, allowing for minor to moderate blasts of the stuff, so long as he has energy to use. It’s interesting to note that the electricity that Avalon wields is red in color.

Avalon’s most unique ability is his ability to remove abilities from any source other than himself. In order to do it correctly, he must first make contact with the target. Once done, he may initiate the ability, making both him and his target incapable of any action, completely immobile until the process is complete or is interrupted. If it is interrupted, Avalon accidentally lets loose a moderate burst of energy, causing quite a jolt for those around him, but not actually harming him. If he is successful, then the removed ability will take the form of a small orb. If this orb comes into contact with anything, it will grant the magical abilities to whatever touched it. The ability orbs can go to anybody-even the original owner. The orbs may be merged with each other, and can be destroyed if hit with an energy-based attack.

His sword, the Third Angel's Blessing, can be infused with Avalon’s aura; doing so turns the blade pitch black, with red electricity crackling off it, as well as giving it some patches of Avalon’s indigo aura, making the blade capable of going through basically anything. The blade can also be teleported-He can teleport the blade to him at will, regardless of the blade's location. However, he cannot do the exact opposite all the time: He can only warp the blade a certain length from his location.

Due to the lack of time to actually train, he's only explored some of his abilities-Mainly the Aura and Psychic-based powers.

Description: Avalon's most famous feature is his beret: It features a pattern of a storm; The indigo and silver color on it doesn't really have any symmetry at all. Under this beret is brown hair made in a style called Togekiss bunches-basically bunches that look like a Togekiss'es head spikes. This hair has also never met a day without grease (Apparently, no shower can remove it). Avalon has the beginnings of a moustache and a goatee on his face.

Avalon's eyes are quite a curious thing. They are hazel in color, they have a certain light to them, and albeit they are generally friendly and do not show signs of any oddity, there are two conditions when the eyes change drastically. First, Avalon's mental state has allowed him to enter into emotionless states at times, at will. During this time, Avalon's eyes cease to be an entryway into what he feels or thinks at the time, and the light generally isn't seen anymore, making his eyes like the entrance into an endless cavern. The second scenario is generally during times of severe stress or when there is no time for games: At these times, Avalon's eyes change color briefly, from hazel to a deep blue.

Avalon wears a dog tag. However, all of the dog tag is symbols instead of actual language, and only Avalon understands what they mean.

Avalon wears a sleeveless shirt, black in coloration. He also has short jeans and blue-and-black sneakers. He has a belt, where he put the sheath to the "Third Angel's Blessing" (His blade). Avalon stands at about 5-foot-5, weighs approximately 113 pounds, and has light skin. He does have average muscle-mass.

Personality: Avalon's mental control is unrivaled by almost everybody, thanks almost completely due to his impossible past: Although the same past also left Avalon thinking he's insane, this past has put him through the most gruesome of situations, stuff that almost everybody would rather avoid at all costs, and he's survived-this left him incredibly hardened in the mental sense, and he can see even the cruelest of deaths without shedding even one tear. However, he still does feel emotion: he despises killing, and he despises war, and every time he has to kill and every time there is war, he falls into an absolutely secret, yet almost total despair. He doesn't let inner emotion get in the way, though, and it is this despair that drives him to end it ASAP.

However, he isn't above showing his emotion: At times of peace, or even at completely random times with no meaning whatsoever, he will burst into a person with a euphemism that's hard to rival, an active and lighthearted kid that rarely doesn't make people happy by his mere presence. He also isn't afraid of making what he feels is right known to others. And he will. Painfully if needed. He has three priorities: Justice, Self-preservation, and the preservation of others. Anything that threatens them (and winds up nearby Avalon) typically doesn't live for long. However, these are not all-consuming: They're just important.

Avalon is one heck of a fighter and a liar: He can do both wonderfully. It takes a psychic to know whether Avalon's telling the truth or not-and even then, Avalon can use his own psychic powers to fudge the results even then. It also takes quite a bit of skill to take Avalon down, and keep him down too: At times, he has been able to defeat foes before they can react.

His feelings for the Cullen are mixed: He believes that the Cullen's cause is perfectly fine, but his issue is that the Cullen can be as blind as the court system is, and mistake an innocent man for a guilty one-and vice versa. However, he can't really join the Armada, he isn't into VILE, and he's already associated with Vyraz and the Cullen: henceforth, he is aligned, but not officially affiliated with them.

History: Avalon knows his history. This history-specifically, the last three years prior to cyrogenic storage-is horrendous. It would be absolute mockery to call it anything even slightly short of Avalon's pure torture on all affronts. It is known that he has gained his current personality as a result of this dreaded, bloody history; however, he refuses to share the past three years of his life with others. His excuse: He claims that, on-average, people kill themselves immediately after 20 minutes of hearing it. This hell-bent ride through the toughest of situations could still be considered to be going on to date.

According to Avalon, he was around for the Fall of Heaven, and was present for the Lifemaker's rise to power. However, how much time he lived during the Lifemaker's reign, what he did, if he was part of the beginnings of the Redeemers, or anything else is unknown. According to him, he apparently wandered into Saffron's ruins, having never been to pre-fall Saffron before and curious what it was like, and accidentally froze himself in a Cryogenic storage pod.

During his time in Cryogenic storage, he gained his magical powers, but wasn't in immediate realization due to his body's inert state. However, the voices of the dead gods immediately penetrated him, forcing him into dreams, and unwittingly telling him about his powers. Once he got to know how much of them he had, he immediately tried to train: To learn how to control his powers without accidentally destroying something he didn't want destroyed. Attempting to make his dreams like a training ground, he immediately started. However, the Voices intervened in various ways, making his supposed power seem stronger or weaker than it should at times. Avalon tried at times to truly stay inert in all senses, but there too did the voices intervene. They were loud voices, after all.

It wasn't until Vyraz awoke him from the Cryogenic pods that he managed to escape the voices for the first time in centuries. However, he was initially afraid of using his powers, not knowing their exact potential. He instead relied on his knowledge and luck to survive against an onslaught of Porygon (by destroying most of a building) and the wrath of the Executioner gracing a few buildings and causing massive earthquakes (by finding a Mining Train).

It was on the mining train, while Vyraz and Jamal were sleeping, that he tried to train without the sabotage the voices presented to him, and it was now that he realized how strong some of it was, having learned quickly how to harness his mental ability and some of his Aura-based powers. In doing so, he realized that Vyraz and Jamal worked for the Cullen. He has yet to officially join, but he plans on it.

Pokemon: While escaping pre-fall Saffron, Avalon found a PokeBall containing a Kricketune. He's using that as his own Pokemon.

Other: Yes, Avalon was a mage from the get-go. I already planned to reveal his magic. I just decided that I like Avalon too much for him to be JUST an NPC.

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Mmm, I'm afraid I'm going to have to ask you to expand Avalon's so-called torturous history. You can do so by PM if you don't want to reveal spoilers here. In addition, it seems rather unlikely that he'd be able to train in cryogenic storage, considering that the whole point of cryogenic storage is to make you unconscious. His level of control over his magic is also somewhat inappropriate for his age, but I might let that slide. At least fix the history stuff and you'll be fine.
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Halsman: "Don't forget that we are in America. We will be put in prison if we start exploding ducks."
Dali: "You're right. Let's take some cats and splash them with water."
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Old 07-13-2011, 12:27 AM
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Slight editing complete. I've also PMed you about the history.
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Ok then, Avalon's accepted.
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Dali: "I know what the picture should be ... We take a duck and put some dynamite in its derriere. When the duck explodes, I jump and you take the picture."
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Name: Nazina (Nah-ze-na) Emeraldblaze (Although some call her Nala)
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Team: Pokémon Elemental
Class: Human
Description: Nazina is slightly over the smallest average in height of a 17-year-old girl, being about 5’5. She has neck/shoulder length mahogany hair and dark blue eyes. She has two bracelets, one on each arm. One is a charm bracelet and the other is a rubber bracelet with the words “Never give up” on it. She wears black and orange converses a lot. She wears dark blue bellbottom jeans with fake rips on the knees. She also wears a dark blue short-sleeved shirt with a small silver-colored cartoon-like owl on it. She normally wears purple eye shadow and sky blue nail polish.
Personality: Nazina, despite her wearing blue all the time, is hardly ever upset. She is sort of a happy-go-lucky kind of girl. She is kindhearted and can’t seem to be rude to anyone unless she gets angry. She is calm and patient. She can wait for up to one and a half years for something to happen before giving up on thinking it will happen or getting mad because it didn’t happen.

When she gets mad, however, it is a completely different story. Her eyes, at this time, turn blood red instantly and she starts getting snotty. She sometimes acts like one of those snotty rich kids you see a lot, but she is mainly just simply rude and ruthless. Many of her friends are scared of her when she is mad because of her great aim with arrows and amazing speed.
History: Nala has always had a good life. She grew up in Parasanti. Her family was quite rich. She didn’t know how to be sad.

When Nala was simply five, she learned how to be a Pokémon Breeder (No, not the people at daycares, I mean like Brock). Her mother had taught her how to make a simple recipe for Pokémon food. Nala messed up the first time, but got it perfectly the second. She gave it to her father’s Drapion because her father had gone to Saffron for some reason. If you went back and asked the Drapion how he liked it, he would have a big smile on his face and be jumping around like a happy little girl.

When Nala was eight, she knew many recipes. She knew how to make poffins, poke block, and some Pokémon food. She just didn’t know how to make dog treats, a treat that her mother’s Herdier seemed to like a lot. She attempted to learn how to make them, but she failed. She tried again, another fail. She kept making Poffins and Poké block instead. She tried once more, but she had to leave right when she started boiling the ingredients. One thing you should never do; leave the stove on after you leave home.

When they had come home five days later, there was no home. They searched for anything that had survived, but found almost nothing. The only thing they found was spilled dog treat ingredients mixed together. Nala already knew how she lost her house, and she knew it was her fault.

While her mother called some Red Cross place on her cell phone, Nala ran off. Her Oshawott, which Nala had taken on the small trip, followed her, not wanting to be left behind. Nala, however, didn’t look back. She just kept running and crying until she got away from her old home.

Months went by, soon turning into years. Nala thought she would be there, trying to survive, forever. That is, until her father found her while he was walking home. She didn’t tell her father anything, but she just directed him away from where the house had been, yet where she thought the new house would be.

(If I must continue, I will think of more, but I can’t think of anything atm)

Pokémon: Bob the Mewtwo
Wavryn (Wave-R-nah) [M]
Oshawott

Other: She has a bow. And arrows. Some call her an archer. She says otherwise, foo.

This'll probably be a reserve, I can do better than this.
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Old 07-28-2011, 01:21 PM
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Sorry for the delay, I hadn't noticed anyone had posted. You're accepted, Moonkit.
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Dali: "You're right. Let's take some cats and splash them with water."
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